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Posted: 28 April 2016 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1973deepak

Such a cute and romantic teaser.  Raghav kissing on her forehead was nice. Update soon 

thanks dear. please give me some time. i have a presentation tomorrow. just busy preparing for that. i'll try to finish writing it by tmrrw or max by day after tmrrw.

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Posted: 28 April 2016 at 8:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nymphadora12

So cute. Update soon! 

thanks. will do that soon.
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Posted: 28 April 2016 at 8:47am | IP Logged
Aww such a awesome teaser loved it soo much
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Posted: 28 April 2016 at 8:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tasha1994

Aww such a awesome teaser loved it soo much


Thanks for liking it.
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Posted: 29 April 2016 at 7:30am | IP Logged
Hi, 
I have read your story after reading the teaser U have posted yesterday Embarrassed
The story is amazing, will write on it now.  Sorry for being late, i was a bit occupied and normally go to the threads i know. Will be with the story from now. Smile

What can i call U ?? 



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Posted: 29 April 2016 at 7:34am | IP Logged
U have soundly started the story where the show ended. Awesome start to the TS, though the atmosphere is gloomy. 
The show ended but your moves have made me recall the whole last episode once again. Bikram's condition is stable and Raghav is accusing himself for this. I liked the way the story progressed in the hospital and Raghav almost pledged the doctors to save Bikram.
Trisha is a bold and a strong lady inside out. And here too, she took the charge of everything so intelligently as she knows the inner condition of Raghav.
She even take care of Raghav and his mental turmoil. I loved her caressing him like a child. 

Beautiful story, thanks dear ClapClap

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Posted: 29 April 2016 at 7:43am | IP Logged
Loved how Trisha pacified Raghav and made him have some food. His acknowledging her tricks to make him relieved and looking her affection nature was so emotional. The scene is penned down so finely ClapClap
Raghav breaking down and Trisha holding and hugging him is the Usp of this update, the story. They have realised their feelings far back, but today they are so close to each other that hardly they talked after wards. 
Liked them praying for Bikram. And then Raghav sleeping upon her shoulders and she covering him with the blanket. 
The prayer she made for him was obvious. We too wish that he find Vidooshak and all his troubles are gone. Loved her determination that for helping Raghav coming back to his form, she is even ready to disobey her procedure manual. Love can do wonders, and here too it will for sure !
The teaser is lovely, i wish we could have something like this in the show Embarrassed But will wait for your version of the scenic beauty we all are in wait.
Thanks and loves Heart


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Posted: 29 April 2016 at 8:05am | IP Logged
To Babita

Thanks dear. My name is Manisha. Actually I never use to write stories earlier. But when the show ended, I started doing this in order to fill up the emptiness which had come up in my life. I used to follow only this show. This is my second story in this forum. Thanks for liking it and for your lovely comments. Really mean a lot. I just tried my bit to depict the emotional bond between the two of them. If I have able to put it across to the readers, then hopefully I have achieved what I wanted with this story. Thanks a lot once again. Please go through my previous story also if you get time.


Loves
Manisha

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