SS: Invisible Angel *Updated Part Two* (Page 3)

zaara610 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 8:51pm | IP Logged
Interesting start..eagerly waiting for your next update
Please continue soon

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NainoMeinSapna Senior Member

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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 8:57pm | IP Logged
Wow, I really liked your OS, it's such a fresh and different concept. The end of the first part was kind of saddening because of the dramatic irony. Anyways, if possible, please PM me when you update, I've buddy requested you! :)

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teddyyy IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 9:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by teddyyy

Hayeee what a wonderful surprise! I'll be back soon Embarrassed
Omg I should've heeded the warning, "not for the faint hearted" because haye Allah mere dil! Inayah, why do you have to be such a beautiful writer?! The dread was slowly building up for me and I was like oh no I know where this is going but can we take a U-turn?! Twinkle's fear was eliminated for the time being, and now it seems she won't even be able to be the one to give him the sad news :( They both will be hurt by her pain in the next part and like I don't understand myself right now cause I'm so weak and I know I'm gonna cry, BUT I love angst filled stories. I am really excited for the next part! Happy you'll be updating soon Big smile

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.Khamosh. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
Loved the first part
So Beautifully written
Cant wait for the next part
Update soon

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docritu99 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 12:09am | IP Logged
Omg.. Another clinical issue..
Sensing an emergency here..

What an amazing piece of write up buddy..!!

Don't feel urself heartless.. Since such accidents and mishappens do happen in reality and that too with majority of couples around..

Though its fiction but won't be able to see my babies cry and their world shattering..

Ohkay preparing myself to cry buckets along with u and twinj..

Do update soon..

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UncrownedQueen Senior Member

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 12:55am | IP Logged
I cant wait to read more.Smile
It is so amazingly written.Embarrassed
I get a feeling it is going to be an emotional roller-coaster ride, but I am really looking forward to it. 
Hope you update soon.Smile

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17.sonal Goldie

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 1:03am | IP Logged
Broken Heart This ws my reaction after reading the precap... 
I jus imagined her lying on the floor I n pool of blood... and it broke my heart into zillion pieces...
I knw I am goin to cry buckets after readING the next part... and I wd jus guess hw r u going to write it
... I mean u'll swallow a lump every tym  before goin to next para...
with tears blurring ur vision. ..and a box of tissue beside ur lappy...  Cry

And I am sure same will happen to u readers. ..
Thanks fr being so gutsy to attempt this topic...

Its really heart wrenching to see our babies goin thru so much pain... 
But I am following u... here... Hug

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Sanavi Senior Member

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 1:14am | IP Logged
Twinkle and a miscarriage.
Unique concept but an emotional one. Continue soon, would like to see what happens next...

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