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Humdard OS - 'Hamari Adhuri Kahani' Collection (Page 5)

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by oceanbubble

Amazing Kowsi...That was unexpected, to say the least...I really did not want it to end...LOLLOL
Wonderful...Clap

Thapki's pain, Bihaan's pain...very beautifully potrayed...I wonder how you manage to amaze us every single time...

I loved how Thapki needs Bihaan's support to forget her turmoil...


PS:
He stopped the car & "Out!"...deja vu... LOLLOL

All of a sudden I found myself imagining another couple...in place of thahaan... WinkWink

That was so ASR...asking her to get out of HIS car every time... LOLLOL

Thanks a lot Sakshi!!
Yeah I wanted Bihaan to heal her mostly because he landed her in this mess

Ans yes "out!" and "I said get out!" is purely ASR!! You saw it well there!!

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mouli021

No words for you kowsi...i was crying..Cry  
Simply beautiful...Clap

Thank you so much Mouli!! Big smileEmbarrassed
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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by princess2791

so emotional beautiful wonderful update. at first part of your os you make me a littel bit angry on bhihaan cause he live alone her in jungel. but i have full trust in you and our bhihaan that he will be back. second part is beautiful lovely emotional one. wonderful update. i know bhihaan will make her come back from that horribal incident but i want thapki to reduce his guilt with her love. waiting for next update.


Thank you so much dear!! Yes have faith in me and my Bihaan to always come to her!! 

And it was just an OS no more update on this
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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rtms

KowsiHug,wt hv u written yaar!am still crying.can't get over the emotions.such a heart touching update.never expected this.it's beyond my imagination.hw can bihaan ever forget such a crime which he has done to his love.cvsAngryr u not reading this.Look hw beautifully u could hv showed the scene.Look at its impact.hw pure n profound the emotions r.cvs, r u nt inspired  by this writting?kowsi,beautiful,so endearing.one of my fav updates.keep surprising us.u made my day.thnk u dear.

Awww  Hug Thank you so much!! I feel so happy with your comment!! Big smileEmbarrassed
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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dplee

It is not at all hot Kowsi..it is an emotional journey of two souls who are deeply in love. Loved it!

Thank you Di!! I needed to write somthing a bit dark like this! I loved writing about them too!!
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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 2:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by manaan

This is actually dark, what goobs did to thapki Confused , oh god. But right moments bihaan saves her. But portraying of his feelings omg . This is the first ff which contains emotional kind of feelings. Heart
Love it .
You are awesome writer

Thanks a lot Rida!! I am glad you loved it!! Big smileEmbarrassed
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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 2:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Eddy78

this was something extraordinary.. superb girl..

Thanks a lot Eddy!!
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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DAPSG

Nicely written. You potrayed their feelings excellently

Thanks a lot yaar!! And welcome to the forum!!

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