Originally posted by: traveller_girl
Beautifully written update
Perfect emotions and the convos of Ishra were poignant and lovely.Too good.Continue soon
Originally posted by: gunita_ishra
awesome updt
Originally posted by: traveller_girl
Beautifully written update
Perfect emotions and the convos of Ishra were poignant and lovely.Too good.Continue soon
Originally posted by: gunita_ishra
awesome updt
Lovely updated & I'm so happy you included the IshRa - Adi scene. I feel this is such an important angle to the post-leap track that was missed. I love watching IshRa be each other's strength - it's just so refreshing!
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Awsm update prabh..
This is wat i wanted to c ..cvs need to read this ..
Khair..i jst loved it
Waiting for next
Originally posted by: Niveditha.giri
Amazing update...
Plz continue soon...
Sorry for the late reply...
Thank you for pm
Originally posted by: peg_pionne
Superb update and very interesting for the fact that we have their feelings about everything so update soon 👏
Originally posted by: lalibhaskar
Awesome
Convo with adi was touchingInfact he is the who has suffered the mostBith in their grief forgot the poor kidPihu is angry, raman is hurtOne side improvement in ruhi is a relief at the same time pihu Anger and hurt is making them worryIt's nice that family is coming togetherIshita understand raman better than anyoneTotally a fantastic update dear
Originally posted by: meghnaghosh
The way you have described the confrontation scene with Adi is really heartwarming Prabh. The child whom they loved equally yet neglected so badly.
Ishita's dilemma on whether she should claim all her rights on Raman is so painful to read.Also, Biwi knows Puttar too well.The thing that no one else understood, Ishita took a minute to understand it. I really want to know how Raman and Romi reconcile now..
Originally posted by: sukanksha
Wonderful one
Originally posted by: priyadarshini.r
Prabh, Big Big hug to you. 🤗🤗. Take a bow gal. 👏. You are such an amazing writer and your stories are filled with so much of emotions that leaves a lasting impact on the readers. I wanted to complete reading all the chapters at one go, but failed to do so because I felt extremely emotional reading these chapters. I had to take some time to absorb everything and appreciate the writing. I could not help but relate the story to the YHM leads and the cast while reading through your stories & the story played out before my eyes. Kudos to you for coming up with such beautiful, emotionally intensive story.👍🏼I just loved loved reading every chapter. ❤️. I have consolidated all that I loved while reading through the chapters :-1. You have equally brought about the pain & agony of each one of IshRaRuDiHu very well .2. I loved the way Raman realizes his mistakes and is ready to own up to them, correct them and make Ishita & the kids happy.3. Ruhi's emotional turmoil, mental agony and how IshRa together with Adi, try to bring this kid out of trauma, agony and pain was beautifully written. It is good to see IshRa equally owning up to their mistakes for the condition of the kids.4. Loved Ruhi - Pihu encounter and how Ruhi reacted on seeing Pihu. Beautiful bond.5. Raman was determined to tell Pihu the truth about Ishita being her biological mother, putting aside his fear of the hate he would have to live through. Pihu instantly calling "Ishita mumma" and Ishita being overwhelmed was so heartwarming. Pihu's anger is justified, hope IshRa and the family are able to make her understand and win her love. I also loved the point about Ishita's realization on how Raman's current actions are proving the words he uttered 7 years back wrong.6. Raman's breakdown and his narration to Ishita about the incidents that happened the other night was poignant. His intent to end his life after Ishita's & Ruhi's death, Pihu's medical condition, Adi, acting mature for his age and equally shouldering Raman's responsibility all these years was heart wrenching and extremely emotional.7. IshRa's apology to Adi was much needed, because this kid has also suffered equally like Ruhi, yet he had to be strong to take care of his younger sister and his father. The emotional confrontation between IshRa and Adi was beautiful and tore me apart. It was heartening to see how Adi, once a spoilt brat has turned out to be a sensible, mature and understanding son over these years. It was very heartwarming to see the kid wanting only his parent's togetherness, well being of his sisters and a happy family rather than an apology.8. It was good to see the families coming together leaving behind the differences that cropped up over these years. Loved IshRa's conversation regarding Romi & Mihika.How I wish the makers could take a leaf or two from this story for the show. The lead & supporting cast would have nailed it. Another important thing, the story had very less of shagun and thank you for taking care of that.😃It would be really interesting to read further. Appreciate you for doing enough justice to all the important characters.👏👏. If you don't mind, please add me to your PM list, so that I don't miss out on your updates. 😊
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