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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 6:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! superbly written! wonderful intro 2 the Khurana n Handa family! dadi talks abt Maan's marriage! Dev n Vikcy talk abt this! Geet n Arjun share a lovely bond! they tease their parents! update soon! waiting 4 Maan's entry! thanks

Thanks a lot for ur comment n yes I will continue soon n maan's entry will be soon

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Lovely update. 

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 4:48am | IP Logged
Interesting Prologue
And Vibrant Character Sketch

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 4:52am | IP Logged
Part 1

both Khurana family and Handa family seems like a close net family
Daadima already thinking about Maan's marriage and that is great while his parents
want to wait until he arrives home to speak to him

waiting eagerly for next update

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Note: So in this chapter 2 new characters are present:
Meera Rathore: She is the daughter of industrialist Kunal Rathore. She is the best friend of Geet.She is a mischievous girl, who loves to play prank with her friends. She is easy going and very spontaneous. She has a twin brother Karan, who attends the same college as her and she is 1 minute older than him n she never lets him forget it .

Karan Rathore: He is the son of industrialist Kunal Rathore. He is 24 yrs old and is the twin brother of Meera. He is 1 minute younger than his sister and she never lets him forget. He goes to the same college as his sister and is doing a masters in BA. He loves geet as his sister and is very protective of her and Meera. He is a fun and cool guy, a harmless flirt and very good looking. 


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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
Interesting so Meera and her twin brother Karan are Geet's friends

waiting for part 2
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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
Hey guys I'm done chapter 2. Hope u like it. The way it's written I have been inspired by sameera_12's way of writing. Hope u guys like it and pls like n comment. Thanks 

Chapter 2

The next few days past by in a blur. Over in London, Maan was working as hard as ever to finish all his work, so he could go back home. He was feeling homesick really badly... He had a very immense workload, and sometimes didn't even return home to sleep. He fell back on his bed, and was fast a sleep...

The Khurana Khandaan was getting ready for a new day. "Dev, Yash jaldi karo tum log, kaha ho, office ke liye late horaha hai" Raj screamed for them as he finished off his breakfast. "Yeh dono kaha hai, itna important presentation ha, aur yeh dono aaj late. Kabhi nahi sudar sakte yeh log" Akshay commented as well.

"Vicky, jaldi aao college ke liye late hojao ge" Soha was screaming for Vicky, and he came running down the stairs. "Sambal ke Vicky, dheere chao. Agar itni jaldi ho toh time pe uta karo na beta," Dadi gently reprimanded him.

Yash and Dev, came downstairs and drank their juice in a gulp and ran out. Vicky grabbed a slice of toast and was looking around for Annie. not seeing her he exclaimed  "Aapki laadli kahi nahi dikhai dere hai, yaha hum log late hore aur yeh abhi bhi make-up karne mai busy hai. Annieee jaldi karo!!"

"Vicky, Annie tumse pehle ready hogayi aur woh car mein wait karri hai tumara, jao aab" said Dadu. VIcky ran outside and saw Annie sitting in the car and getting impatient. "Vicks!!! she was angry, "Hurry up hum late hore hai, mujhe aapna project submit karna chalo!"

They both went off to college and reached there in the nick of time. As they entered their college they saw their group of friends, and went their separate ways... This college is one of the prestigious colleges of Delhi, and only the best get in and also the rich. Geet is also part of this college and she and Annie know each other very well.  They attended their classes and at break time, Annie was walking with her freinds to the canteen, and along the way she saw Geet. 
She ran upto her and hugged her from behind... "Hey di! kaise ho aap? she exclaimed excitedly. "Arrey Annie, mai acchi hoon aur tum?" Geet returned the hug lovingly. "Aur batao aaj almost late kaise hogaye tum"...

"Kya batao di, yeh Vicky bro na late utte, aur hum late hogaye. Aap ko pata hai mai car mein wait karri thi, aur Vicky bro na poochre the ki mein makeup karne mein busy hoon aur hum late horre. I tell u di yeh Vicky bro na ek don unne mai accha pitwaogi!"

Geet laughingly said " Arrey yeh toh bhaiyon ka kaam hai aapni behen ko irritate aur tang karna but pyaar bhi bahut karte hai. Tumhe pata nahi mere veerji hai na woh bhi mujhe tang karte hai aur aaj mujhe utane ke liye unno nai Fast and Furious ka title track, mere kaano ke paas play kiya aur mein ekdum utt gaye. Woh kya hai na pehle toh irritate hogaye aapni neend kharab dekhar, par bhai na everyday subah mera chehra dekhte hai first thing, so woh karne aaye the.

"Aap ka chehra first thing par kyu? curious Annie asked. "Woh kya hai na kuch saal pehle mein bhai ke saath bahar gaye thi and I got lost. Bhai ne mujhe bahut doonda,aur us place me gun shots hogaye waha, aur bhai bahut worried thee kyunki mein unke saath nahi thi.
 Jab main mile mai, dehydration ki waajhe se behosh thi, toh iss event ke baad bhai na bahut protective hogaye aur haar subah mera chehra dekhte." said Geet.

"Ohh, arrey di chalo na canteen mein jaake kuch khate hai, bahut bhook lagi hai" Annie took Geet by her hand and took her to the canteen. In the canteen Geet and Annie saw their friends. They walked up to their tables and sat down. "Hey Geet kaha thi toh, hum kabse wait karre tera!" exclaimed Meera, Geet's best friend.
 "Arrey Meera, dekh na Annie hai saath mein,  matlab in dono ke baatein shuru hogaye, aur jab yeh dono shuru hote toh time ka kaha pata lagta hai inne!" commented Karan their other friend. Geet and Annie looked at everyone in shock, and their expressions triggered their groups laughter. They all laughed to which Geet pouted cutely, and Annie frowned.

Geet looked at them at said "Arrey yehkya bolre ho tum log, hum log ko time ka pata nahi, hum ne soocha ki hum canteen mein aapne friends ke paas jaate hai aur tohri masti karte hai, aur yaha toh hamara maazaak udarahe ho. Bhalayi ka toh zamaana hi nahi raha!"

They all had a good laugh and since there were no more classes they all headed home. Geet reached home and there she saw her mom sitting in the living room and chatting with some people. 
As she entered she saw her bua and her cousin there. "Buaaa, Ananya aap log yaha. Wowww! she exclaimed excitedly and  ran up to hug them. 
Her bua Ragini laughed at her excitement and hugged her tightly. "Kaisi hai mere bachii? " Mai toh acchi hoon bua, aur aap" Geet said.

"Uhh Uhh Uhh" coughed Ananya dramatically. "DI agar aapka yeh prem milaab hogaya maa ke saath, toh idhar bhi dekhiye na, yaha aapki choti behen bhi hai, uspe bhi zaara aapna pyaar jataiye."

"Oye nautanki, mai tujhe kaise bholo sakhti, toh toh meri jaan hai." Geet gave her a tight hug. They all sat around and chatted for a while.

Naina and Juhi were watching their favourite tv shows, when the kids came home. Dev, and Yash looked tired out and went upstairs to freshen up after greeting them , while on the other side Vicky and Annie were smiling. They saw the mothers there and rushed towards them. 
"Badi Maa aapko pata hai aaj kitna maaza aaya college mai and Annie told them about the happenings of college. "Chachii yeh kitna bolti hai, rookne ka naam nahi lere." exclaimed Vicky
 while he was seated on the floor, with his head in Juhi's lap, likewise Annie was seated with her head in Naina's lap. 
Both the ladies were caressing their hairs lovingly.. Dev and Yash came down the stairs and saw this seen. They looked towards each other with mischievious eyes, winked and went over towards the others, with frowns on their faces.

"Yeh kya Maa, hum dono thakke ke arraha hai aur aaplog ye dono ko laad karre ho" said Dev. 
"Not fair, humme bhi toh aaplog laad kar sakte na." commented Yash as he gestured Annie to move and she did.
 Whereas on the other hand Vicky still had his head in Juhi's lap with his eyes closed. Dev went over to him and pushed him away and put his head in Juhi's lap, whereas Yash snuggled up to Naina,

Vicky was looking at Dev, with a frown "Bhaii that's not fair, mein yaha tha pehle, tum mujhe push kyu kiya."
 "Vicky, maa ki goadd na takhe we aur mehnat waale bacchon ke liye hai, samjha! Aur hame toh rarely yeh chance milta hai na, kyunki jab bhai yah hote toh hamare toh koi importance nahi hai na." replied Dev. 
At the same time, Dadi walked in, and Vicky rushed to her and complained... "Dekiye na Dadi, yeh Dev aur Yash bhai na bahut fayda utta rahe nai, aur mujhpe dadagiri karre."

" Kyu tum log mere bacche ko pareshan karre hoon, bechare yeh bhi toh taak ke aaya na college se, aaja vicky tu mere paas" Dadi said as she started caressing Vicky's head...

Annie looking at this scene frowned... "Ek baar Maan bhai ko aane do, phir na aap saab ki band bajaogi mai..."  "Oye Maan bhai ki chamchi retorted Yash..."chup kar"...
At the same time Dev's phone started ringing and Dev jumped up with excitement as he saw Maan's name flashing on his screen...

"Kya baat hai bhai, tum 100 saal jiyoge, tumhari he baat karre hai sab..."Dev chuckled

"Meri baat? zaroor meri aachi khasi buraii karre hoge tum lof hai na? Maan raised his eyesbrows...

"Buraaii aur tumhari, rehne doo, mein aur Yash tumhe bahut miss karre, tum toh boss bannne behte ho, kya bigaada tha maine aur Yash ne jo tumne woh darn project hume diya??? 
saara din ussi k chakarr mein saar ghomma wa rehta hai... hum dono ne soochaa tode din ghoomege, graduation ke baad, lekin tumse toh hum bhaiyon ki khushi dekhi nahi gaye na ... khud chale gaye London aur humme phasa diya.. not fairr..." Dev complained

"Oye chal oyee... jab se bakwaas kiye ja raha hai"... Maan frowned... " Acha bhai ek baat bolo... tumhe laadki kaise chahiye shaadi ke liye? kya woh modern, ya traditonal, hot and happening ya phir koi aur... bolo na... woh kya tumhari shaadi ki umaar hogaye sab kehrahai hai aur aab na tumhe shaadi karni chahiye...Dev came into the mood to pull Maan' s leg...

"Tu ladki ki baat karra hai... ya phir koi menu ki... aide pooche Radha Kaise kisse se Italian, Chinese ya continental khana pooch raha hai...kaisi  bakwaas karra hai idiot!! "Aur toh aur phir shuru hogaye tum saab ussi topic ko le kaarr, chain nahi hai kya tum saab ko, ya phir tum dono ke paas kaam ki kami hai... Maan was irritated

"Hahahahhaaaha ... mazaak hai bhai, as u say take a chill pill... Dev laughed.

"Acha aur batao kya chalra hai ghar pe?  Maan asked taking a sigh of relief...

"Kya hoga kuch nahi... hum log aaye hai ghar... aur Dad aur chachoo abhi office mein hai... Dadu 
rest karre hai aur Dadi. Mom aur chachi  yahi par hai betewi hai...aur Yash aur mein... Dev was about ot complete but Maan cut him off ..." HUmesha ki taara free..haina???...Maan completed Dev's sentence while laughing...

"Haan ha has lo... meri bhi bari aaye gi na tab dekh longa.." Dev pouted. "Achaa aab mein rakhta hoon, bahut kaam hai mujhe, tum log ki taara free behta nahi hoon..." Maan laughed

"Bhaiii""... ha jao aur aish karo " Dev exclaimed

"Chal bye"... and the phone disconnected...

Maan he did all his work by himself. He didn't like to hire help for himself only. He knew that if they found out at home, Dev and Yash would make a laughing stock out of him... and the elders would definitely scold him for not taking care of himself...

"Kyu saab meri shaadi ke peeche pad gaye yaaar...kuch toh zaroor pakra hai Maan...tu zaara 
sambhal ke rehna... aur to aur yeh Dev ur Yash donoo ko nahi chodunga... zaroor sab ko in dono ne hi uksaaya hoga"... pouted Maan...

And this is is the end of chapter 2. Hope u guys like it and pls comment it would mean a lot.


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