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Tales of Love-MG FF update link (Page 2)

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 4:58pm | IP Logged
  Hey guys I am done the first chapter, I don't think it's that good but I'll leave that up to u guys. Thanks 

  Chapter 1

    "Daddd, yeh bhai ko kya hua hai, kaam diye jaa rahe hai" Dev whined as he sat down on the .             couch.
   "Aur nahi toh kya, khud gaye hai London, doosre project ke liye, aur yaha hame phasa diya" Yash        exclaimed as he sat down beside.


"Tum log sirf bahana banao, time pe kaam maat karo. Aisa kaunsa zyada kaam diya hai Maan nai, jo tum log se nahi hora", Raj commented. "Saab drama hai in log ka, inta thora kaam aur inta zyaada nataak, kuch nahi hoga inka" Akshay said, as he rolled his eyes.

All had come back, from office tired, and just sat down before dinner. As Maan was away for a business trip, Dev and Yash were left with another project to do in his absence.

"Yeh Vicky aur Annie kaha hai, dekhai nahi dere" Yash exclaimed. "Tum ne pookara, aur hum chale aaye" sang Vicky as he entered the mansion with Annie tagging along behind him. "Nautanki ki kaami thi, ki tum shuru hogaye" Akshay said shaking his head.

"Annie tum kyu itni chup ho?" asked Dev.

"Bhai i was thinking, kab Maan bhai aayenge, because I need to tell him to do my shopping there." "Isse dekho, yaha hum log soch raha hai ki, kuch serious hai, aur ye apni shoppng list ki soch rahi hai" vicky exclaimed rolling his eyes.

"Arrey tum log ka karre ho, jao fresh hojao aur dinner ke liye aao said Dadi to all of them.

They all went to their rooms, and freshened up and came down for dinner. Dinner is a very big affair. It's the time when the whole family sits together and chats about the day and all its happening.

"Mamaaa kaha hai aap, jaldi laaye khana, bahut bhook lagi ha, screamed Vicky. "Yeh kya taarika hai Vicky, kyu chilara hai ho said  Dadaji.

Naina and Juhi came and set the table with all the food.

"Dadu, aab inti mehnat se padhai kara ha hoon, toh aab tiredness aur bhook toh hogi na."
"Vicks tum aur mehnat, what a joke!! Annie said laughingly
"Oye Annie banani, Kya bolri hai tu ha, Mai bahut mehnat karta hoon, yeh alag baat hai ki sab ko dikhta Nahi dete ok!!
"Badi Ma Delhi na yeh Vicky mujhe tang karra hai!!" " Vicky chup baito kyu tang karra ho usse, khana khao khamoshi se" Naina glared at him and Annie smirked. 

         Everyone started to eat with  Vicky and Annie glaring at each other.

Over the seas, in London, Maan was getting ready for office. "Yeh project toh bahut time leraha hai, aur pata nahi kitna time lagega. Ghar ki bahut yaad arrahi hai" thought Maan as he was getting ready. He got ready, drank his coffee and left for office.

Here in India, the Khurana family ate their dinner and were sitting in the living room chattiing when Dadi bought up the topic of Maan's marriage. " Raj! tumhe Maan ki shaadi karwani hai ya nahi?" she frowned at him, "Jaha jao log yahi pooch rahe hai, tum log ka kya kehna hai?" "Ha ma, hume karni hai na Maan ki shaadi, pehle usse wapas ajane diye na, phir sooch te hai" replied Naina.

"Haaahahahah", Dev, Yash and Vicky laughed together, while everyone stared at them.

" Hum ne joke maara kya, ki tum log hass re ho" irritated Juhi asked. "Ya tum log ko pagalon ka daura para hai, Akshay commented. Dev, Yash, and Vicky controlled their laughs and said " aap log ne aisa baat kehdi ki hasi aagaye, bhai aur shaadi impossible. Aap log na unne aane dijiye, kya pata unne koi pasand ho.

 " Kya Maan kissi ko pasand karta hai?" asked Dadu "Arrey nahi, hum ne kaab kaha, hum log kehre hai ki bhai se toh poochliye ki woh kya soochte hai.

" Agar Maan kisse ko pasand karega toh hum maana thodi na karenge" replied Dadi. "Accha aab chalo sab sone jao, Dev aur Yash tum dono aapna presentation ready rakhna, kaal present karna hai tumme samjhe Akshay said while going away. All left to their rooms, except Vicky, Dev and Yash.

"Bro maaza aaega na, agar Maan bro ki shaadi fix hogaye, unki toh halaat kharaab!" Vicky exclaimed and they all burst out laughing.

"Chal Vicky tu soja, aur Yash chal hame yeh manhoos presentation khatam karni hai, ek bhar bhai agaye, unse toh badle leke he rahoga Dev said annoyed.

"Mummaa!!! khana nikaliye, mujhebahut bhook lagrahi hai exclaimed Geet as she came in to the living room. "Geet tujhe aab bhi bhook lagi hai?. Abhi toh raste mai tu ne gol gappe khaye, aur phir bhi tujhe bhool lagrahi hai?," commented Arjun as he followed her inside. "Itna maat kha, moti hojayigi". "Bhai, mai zyada nahi khati hoon, ok. "Nahi tu khati hai, aur aab moti bhi hojagi, motiii" laughing Arjun replied.

" Mummaa!! dekho na bhai mujhe tang karre hai! screamed Geet. "Arjun kyu tang karra hai geet ko rebuked Rano as she came and set the table with food. "Kaha se moti dikhre hai meri beti tujhe?" "Mumma aap ko na, kya hua hai, itna khayige toh moti toh hojaye gi  na! " Arjun replied.
 Geet sat down, with a pout on her face. Nobody knew that Arjun loved to tease geet, because he found her to look like an adorable baby when she pouted and he would then start to manao her.

 "Arrey meri princess kyu bura mangayi, he said n pulled her cheeks adoringly. "mai toh mazaak kara tha na, agar mein tujh se mazaak na karo toh phir kisse karro. Tu toh meri gudiya hai na. Chal mai tujhe aapne haath se khilauga tujhe" Rano stood there watching her children lovingly as Arjun fed geet, and geet fed him also. She had tears in her eyes, and a hand came forward and wiped them. She looked to her side, and saw her husband mohinder who was wiping her tears.

Geet looked to the side and saw her parents gazing at each other lovingly. She nudged Arjun and told him to look to side through her eyes. Arjun glanced and he saw his parents. He looked back at geet and they both had a mischievious glint in their eyes. They both got up, and quietly went close to their parents, and both whisled. "Wheeet" Their parents shocked, look up to see their badmaash duo, smirking at them.

"Oye hoyeee... dekha bhai yaha toh scene hi romantic hai. Dekho na... mummaa aur papaa toh aapni hi duniya mein khogaye." Arjun smiled widely "Ha geet, sach kehra hi toh, inne dekhe ke koi bhi kahega ki nayi jodi aur kon mannega ki inne 2 bade bacche bhi hai."

"Hahahahaha... " they both laughed,

"Badmashooo... koi aise kehta hai aapne maa-baap ko, haa said Mohinder. "Aur kya, hamare romance karne mai koi ban lagawa hai kyaa, hum toh abhi bhi jawaan hai samjhe tum log! " "Aap bhi na kya kehra hai bacchon ke samne Rano said blushingly.

"Oye hoye... mumma blush to aise karre ho jaise papa ne I LOVE YOU kaha aapse" said Geet and Arjun while laughing loudly.

Rano blushed even more, and she was just to embarrassed, but replied to them. "Chalo aab tum dono jao sone warna bahut pachtaoge" Arjun and Dev went away laughing to their rooms, while in the living room mohinder nudged Rano and said "Oh mai kya gi I love you" and hugged her.

That it for Chapter 1. Please like and comment it would be a great support! 

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 6:05pm | IP Logged
Interesting yaar.: love the concept... Ab yeh dono ko kaise ho ga pyaar? Cont soon hun

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 6:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayurmaaneet

Interesting yaar.: love the concept... Ab yeh dono ko kaise ho ga pyaar? Cont soon hun

Thanks for ur comment it really means a lot, dekhte jao Kaise hoga pyaar, gradually it will come in.


Edited by heart882 - 24 April 2016 at 6:14pm
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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 6:53pm | IP Logged
hi 
congrats for new start ,,
character sketch awesome ..
please don't add arshi or some another leads ..
want story on maneet ..
thank u 

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 6:59pm | IP Logged
part 1
really loving ..all the people love each other and r happy ..

maan's parents want him to get married ..but maan is in london ..
geet too has a loving family ..
thanks for update ..
waiting for next

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 7:00pm | IP Logged
please post that u updated part 1 on the first page ..under prologue ...so that all can see that 

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 11:46am | IP Logged
hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! superbly written! wonderful intro 2 the Khurana n Handa family! dadi talks abt Maan's marriage! Dev n Vikcy talk abt this! Geet n Arjun share a lovely bond! they tease their parents! update soon! waiting 4 Maan's entry! thanks

Edited by khwaishfan - 25 April 2016 at 11:47am

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Posted: 25 April 2016 at 6:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tabby999

hi 
congrats for new start ,,
character sketch awesome ..
please don't add arshi or some another leads ..
want story on maneet ..
thank u 

Thank you so much for ur comments it really means a lot to e who is a new writer 

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