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Posted: 26 July 2016 at 12:21am | IP Logged
Dear Stuti!
I think that you are changing with each chapter as a writer, moving to a higher level. This chapter despite the fact that it sharply divided into two parts, chapter remains united. Very  precisely noticed, grief often brings not a union but separates of near and dear  people. Despite the fact that it is so filled with feelings and emotions in the first part and the tense action the second part - everything is very compressed, compact, anything superfluous. .Thank.

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Posted: 26 July 2016 at 12:51am | IP Logged
wait evening ko padhke comment karungi

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Posted: 26 July 2016 at 12:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by alffim

Dear Stuti!
I think that you are changing with each chapter as a writer, moving to a higher level. This chapter despite the fact that it sharply divided into two parts, chapter remains united. Very  precisely noticed, grief often brings not a union but separates of near and dear  people. Despite the fact that it is so filled with feelings and emotions in the first part and the tense action the second part - everything is very compressed, compact, anything superfluous. .Thank.
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Thank you so much Zehana!Hug Your review is very much valuable to me as a writer. Relieved to know that the second part has not lost the pace and compactness, as I was very much tensed about that. LOL
Thanks again!Embarrassed

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Posted: 26 July 2016 at 12:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by piya58

Nice chappy de
Both getting close to revel sad feeling s
Update
Thanku
Thanks for commenting dear. Smile

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Posted: 26 July 2016 at 1:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by haya_gorgeous

yeah thnks for updating..
awesome chapp..
u've describe d their feelings so well.. they've nvr talkd about hasan and husain like that before..
nd precap is.. haha abul mali as king.. this can be possible here only..
waiting for nxt part
update nxt soon
thnks for pm
Yeah at last I updated. LOL 
Thank you so much for liking this chapter and adding your 2 cents dear. Embarrassed And wait for precap dear Wink Abul Mali has someone in his own home who has the power to change the whole game.

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Posted: 26 July 2016 at 1:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kavya_P

Originally posted by Kavya_P

Res stuti 

Unres dear 
Awesome chappy 
Loved the way you described their feelings and emotions 
Update soon buddy 
Precap is shocking 
First as always.Hug
thank you so much buddy. Glad to know that you have liked it. Big smile
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Posted: 26 July 2016 at 1:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kartikaJA

awesome update
waiting for precap
precap was shocking
update soon
Thank you dear. Embarrassed
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Posted: 26 July 2016 at 1:23am | IP Logged
The first part was quite emotional one
Jalal just like a kid doing zidd of not eating
Everywhere now they remember that night
Blaming themselves for their death
Finally they poured out everything
Update soonish
Well I know the pattern ur updating ur stories
I m excited even for the both
Thanks for PM

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