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Rahiramesh Senior Member
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Posted: 27 June 2016 at 6:21am | IP Logged
WOW buddy a long update after a long timeClap
Enjoyed thoroughly, Jodha and Shehenshah now declare their real feelings for each other
Jo's dedication and love towards Jalal brought him back to life, a NEW LIFE
Beautiful scripting buddy. You are awesomeBig smile
Precap is interesting Wink, post soon



Edited by Rahiramesh - 27 June 2016 at 6:20am

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Posted: 27 June 2016 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Superb chapter dear..
Thxxc 4r pm
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Posted: 27 June 2016 at 7:32am | IP Logged
SUPERB CHAPPY
FINALLY JODHA AND JALAL CONFESS THERE FEELING WITH EACH OTHER
JODHA CARES FOR JALAL
PRECAPE IS DAMN INTERESTING
UPDATE NEXT SOON

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Posted: 27 June 2016 at 7:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Akdhalover6898

SUPERB CHAPPY
FINALLY JODHA AND JALAL CONFESS THERE FEELING WITH EACH OTHER
JODHA CARES FOR JALAL
PRECAPE IS DAMN INTERESTING
UPDATE NEXT SOON

THANKS DEAR FOR PM
AND SORRY FOR LATE REPLY
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Posted: 27 June 2016 at 7:41am | IP Logged
Amazing chapter dr n thnxx for pm
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Posted: 27 June 2016 at 10:25pm | IP Logged
Superb update
finally both share pain with each other
loved it
update soon

thnks for pm
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Posted: 28 June 2016 at 1:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by moni_06

Finally the two reconciled
Was waiting for a NEW LIFE...
That incident was excruciating both of them but now its all over
Their repartee was full of love and pain for each other
Finally we have the apology
I loved the way you described jala's agony 
A very sentimental and heart touching chapter
I had read this story on Facebook really very philosphically written
Try updating soon
I guess your exams are over?
Thank you for the pm
Thank you for such a beautiful comment dear.Embarrassed Thank you for all your words.Heart 
Yes xms are over

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Posted: 28 June 2016 at 1:55am | IP Logged

Jalal tried to smile, but the smile lost in the lines of emotions that had been crafted in his face. He gulped and widened his eyes to control the coming tear; in a husky, broken voice he started -"Pata hay Jodha, hume lagta tha... hume yaakin tha ki jitney mohabbat hum aapse karte hay, aaj tak utni mohabbat iss dunia me kisine kisise nehi ki hogi. Jalal ka mohabbat uske jaisa hi anukha hay, sabse bara hay, sabse sandar or sabse uncha hay! Yaakin nehi, ghamand tha hume aapni mohabbat karne ki takat pe... ghamand tha aapne dil ki takat pe... bohot zyada yaakin tha hume aapne aappe!" [You know Jodha, I used to think that... I was confident that the love that I do for you, none in this world can love anyone equal to that. Jalal's love is as unique as him, the greatest, the most shining, the highest! Not only confidence, I was proud on my strength of love... I was proud of the power of my heart... I was over-confident!]

i am speechless.u have nailed it out.jo kaam show nahi kar paya usko tumne kar dikhaya.hats off u.dil ko bahut sukun mila.                                                           Jodha kept on staring at him. He gripped her hand tightly and continued- "Par jab bari aya aapne mohabbat ki takat ko sabit karne ka, jab imtehaan ki waqt ayi, jab khudrat ne humse saaboot manga aapne mohabbat ka, hum..."[But when the time of proving the love came, when the test came, when nature claimed proof of my love, I...] he sighed hopelessly; "Hum har gaye Jodha! Uss imtehaan me khare hi nehi utar paye! Itna ghamand tha aapni mohabbat ki takat pe; waqt aya to pata chala ki usme koi takat hi nehi hay... Ek mamuli insaan ke mamuli pyar se bhi kam hay meri dil ki takat.Pata chala ki kinti kamzor hay hum, kitna kamzor hay humara mohabbat! Har gaye hum! Aapne aapse har gaye..." [I lost Jodha! I could not pass the test! I was so proud on my power of love; when real time came I understood that that has actually no strength... The power of my heart is even less than the common love of a very common man. I understood that how much weak am I, how much weak my love is! I lost! I lost from myself!]
these confessions of his are heart wrenching.i am stunned how beautifully and elegantly u portrayed all his sufferings and inner turmoil.big hug for these sentence.please keep writing u are a gem  for reader.thanks for pm.                                  

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