Jodha Akbar


Jodha Akbar
Jodha Akbar

NEW LIFE: Thread 2 (Page 50)

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Posted: 29 June 2016 at 3:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kavya_P

Awesome chappy dear 
Jo n jalal r getting close 
Finally they opened their hearts to each other 
Way of describing the feelings is great 
Precap is damn interesting 
Update soon buddy plz 
Thanks for reading dear.Embarrassed

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Posted: 29 June 2016 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aishg1698

EmbarrassedUNRESING HAPPILYBig smile
Baap re kitna long comment hay! You quoted the whole story!Shocked
Originally posted by Shinning_Stuti

 A bright beam of smile reflected inside the pale orbs of the emperor's eyes; the slight smile of victory gave a trace of colour in his white, bloodless face... AWWW! KYA HAAL KAR DIA JALLU KAOuch


It has been day, and the emperor has become able to interact with the visitors after the victory against death. The last 24 hours have told upon his heath very prominently... it seems his age has increased for 10 years in a single night. He has almost got mingled with the bed, with his regal eyes which used to be full of youth and enthusiasm all the time staring listlessly. The natural glow has hidden behind the pale and pallid shade of face; as if someone has sucked out all the blood from him. His head was loosely lying on the pillow with his right hand kept on his chest, and the left arm, the wounded one, which had a long way ahead to get back the capacity of moving it normally, was lying beside, with the palm touched by Maan Singh, who was sitting on knees on the ground beside the bed with a sad yet relieved face. The king of Amer, Bhagwant Das and others were standing near his head and the important officers like Todarmal, Mahesh Das and some others were standing at side. All have a trace of relieved smile in their eyes to see the emperor out of danger after the long drastic night.OH MAAN SINGHEmbarrassed HEHE

Bechare ka shadi tha yaar!LOL

Jalal for once moved his eyes toward Maan Singh, and smiled affectionately while moving his fingers to caress his hand. Blinked decently to him to ensure that he is fine now, he looked at Todermal with his weak yet professional eyes. After a bit trial he managed to speak with very low and listless voice "O...or Sa..samar..kand?"I WANT TO SAY PLS SHEHENSHA STOP STRESSING SO MUCHLOL

Tension maat lo. Jodhu hay na?EmbarrassedLOL

"Uaha se abhi koi sambad yeaha tak aya nehi hay Shahenshah, parantu hume purn ashtha hay iss baat par ki paristhiti humare sath hay!" [No news from there has still come, but we hape complete hope that the situation is in our favour!] Todarmal stated while everybody nodded to agree. Jalal tiredly closed his eyes and sighed of relief; his face was now glowing with a content satisfaction... HMMM

An officer was going to propose something more, but was cut by a sudden entrance of a melodious, yet authoritative voice "Abhi Shahenshah ko bishram ki avasyakta hay. Iis liye unke sath rajkarya ke bisay me abhi jitni kam charcha ki jaye utna hi accha hay." [Now his Majesty needs rest. So it will be better not to talk much about politics much in front of him.] AAGYI BILLILOL

Billi? R u serious?LOL

Jodha nodded with a decent smile in her lips. The courtiers bid her respect and went off the room one by one. "Todarmal ji..." she stopped Todarmal suddenly. "Kuch pata chala kisne hamla kiya tha uss bare me?" [Did you get anything about the attacker?] MAIN BATA DU JODHALOL ITS ABUL MALITongue

She can't hear you though. LOL

"Atatayi ka parichay mil gaya hay. Ek mamuli sa khuni hay jo paise leke khun karta hay... Par Hindustan se nehi... Gajni se aya tha..." [We got the identity of the attacker. He is a hired killer... But he is from Gajni, not from Hindustan...] He looked thoughtful. "Pata nehi kon hay iske piche. Khoj chal raha hay Begam Sahiba... Asha karte hay kal tak asliyat samne aa jayega." [Don't know who is actually behind this. Investigation is going on, hope to reveal the truth by tomorrow.]WOW GOOD WORK TODARMAL SAHABBig smile

Yup!Thumbs UpI like Toddy. He is so decent and honest na? Embarrassed

"Jo bhi ho, nehi lagta ki o Hindustan se hoga... Sayad Kabul se..." [It does not seem to be from Hindustan. Maybe from Kabul...] Jodha bit her lips in thoughts. "Jo bhi pata chale hume zarur batayiyega..." She smiled. "Or ek nivedan kare aapse?" [Please make me aware of every detail. And may I request one other thing?]SAHI PAKDE HAI JODHA

Isn't she smart? Big smile

"Adesh kijie Begam Sahiba." [Order, your highness.]

"Shahenshah abhi bhi thik nehi hue hay... Aisi sharirik avastha me rajniti ke bare me zyada sochna unko haani poucha sakti hay..." [His majesty is not fit till now... In this condition of health thinking much about politics will tell upon him...] She moved her eyes towards Jalal for a while who was now lying on the bed lifelessly closing his eyes and sighed. "Hume gyat hay ki abhi Hindustan ki jo paristhiti hay uaha Shahenshah ki avasyakta hay... To hum kahe rahe the ki..." [I know that in this situation of Hindustan it's very important to have his presence... So I was telling that...]  She stopped to breath and then continued, "ki Shahenshah ke swasth hone tak agar koi avasyak paramash karni ho unse, aap unse pahele ekbar hume bataiyega..." [That may you tell me once before you approach his majesty for any important matter during these days?]VERY AUTHORITATIVE YET SIMPLY SPOKEN THE ENTIRE IMPORTANT MESSAGEEmbarrassed THIS JODHA IS CUTE

Happy to see you liking this part...Embarrassed

"Zarur Begam Sahiba."[Obviously your highness.]Todarmal understood what she meant and readily accepted the proposal. He bid her and his majesty, and left the room. HUI OBVIOUSLY NAHI SURELOL

Hua ne ek hi baat! Tongue

"Shahenshah!" She called again, this time touching his hairs. He opened eyes with difficulties, gulped to fetch strength and tried to smile though could not. She affectionately started caressing his hairs and he gazed at her eyes with his hazy glare, unable to move his eyes... She has bathed just now; the droplets of water are still shining on her face, the wet locks has come out from the barrier of the yellow veil that has covered her hairs, are kissing her glossy cheeks with passionate affection... She was in a ordinary blue lahenga with yellow veil, without any type of ornament adorning in her beautiful body, any type of makeup brightening her beautiful face... she was unadorned...she was complete... like the drizzle of the first monsoon, like the pure morning dew... her presence itself was enlightening the strangulating environment of the room, was spreading the solace of peace... He kept on gazing and gazing till the eyelids get heavy again, forgetting all his physical agony... her presence, her touch itself is the best medicine to heal Jalal! Perhaps he was so lost in her, that he did not notice that another pair of beautiful hazel eyes, with cloud of tears, are too staring at his face, with same mesmerization, same eagerness, same peace...WELL THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL THAT I COULD SEE THAT FRESH AND SIMPLE LOOKING PARIDHI AS JODHA.Day Dreaming THANX STUTI


"Iske pahele ki bukhar firse char jaye, jaldi se ausadhi pee lijie..." [Before it increases more, you have to take medicine...] She ordered. "Hum aapke liye khana lekar aye hay. Kal sare din aapne kuch nehi khaya... abhi bina khake ausadhi bhi to nehi le sakte na!" [I have brought food for you. You have not eaten anything yesterday. You cannot take medicine without eating anything.]She turned back and signed something to her follower maids. Jalal's eyes had totally missed the battalion of maids behind, now he got to see them... there were 3-4 girls holding some plates containing food, medicine and other necessary accessories. One of the maids handed a bowl to Jodha after her order in sign language. The sight of the bowl and the thought of eating something suddenly raised a vomiting tendency inside, the physical turmoil came back, and hence he was dropped down into the real world which includes pain, suffering, separation and loneliness! WAIT HE DID NOT SEE THE MAID HEHE THATS SO CUTE.

He was only seeing Jodha and Jodha everywhere. Blushing

"Hum.. hume... baiythna hay!" [I... I want to sit!] he completed the sentence. "Ma...madat kijie na!" [ me please!]I KNOW AB DANT PADEGI


The spoonful of a white paste, which is the mixture of boiled semi-liquid rice and all the nutrients without a touch of any spice, readily came in front of eyes. "Thora sa kha lijie Shahenshah!" [Eat a little shahenshah!] Jodha pleaded, but he turned his face with puking expression.

"Agar nehi khayenge to sakti kaise milegi shahenshah?" [How will you regain strength without eating?]Jodha touched his chin. "Thora sa kha lijie." [Eat a little...]

"Nehi!" [No!]Jalal uttered like an adamant child. AWWW I COULD JUST DROOL OVER THI CHILD FORGETTING HASSAN HUSSAINStar

Jee bhar ke drool kar lo.LOLLOL

"Ummm... ummm..." Jalal's protest did not work as she already had inserted the spoon inside his mouth. He gulped the paste with a lot of difficulty and a jolt from deep stomach seemed to spout out. He placed his right palm against his mouth to control the jolt and moved his head in a negative gesture. OuchOuchOuchpoor soul

He is suffering, but will recover fast.Embarrassed

He raised his head, supported that on Jodha's arm, drank the bitter liquid with shrinking face with lots of apathy and placed his hand to throat simultaneously to reduce the feelings of chocking... Jodha wiped his lips with the corner of her veil, cared his hairs which had come on his eyes and he, after staring at her eyes for a moment listlessly, released himself on her chest... his head full of rough and clumsy hair swayed on the curve of her healthy breasts, slowly swinging between the valley of her deep cleavage, and his hot breaths brought a storm in Jodha's soul and heart... aahmmm Embarrassed 

Kya hua?WinkLOL

After how long time she got his touch so intensely? It seems to be a long era... It seems all the cells of her body were dying in the thirst of the touch... The warm touch of her man take over her womanhood, her soul filled with an uncanny completeness. He had poured his face inside the depth of her cleavage, slowly kneading his face on the soft moulds of flesh with a suppress moan from inside. Jodha's pallu which had covered her choli had been removed long back; the warm breath was directly touching her skin... She shivered in a long-lost emotion... her heart moved in a strange feeling- was it passion of her womanhood only? Maybe, maybe not! At this state, the warm touch of her love after a long era brought a perfect blend of affection along with passion in her heart... it rejuvenated the mother inside her again. Perhaps all the women become mother sometimes... wow

Thank you.Embarrassed

"Ekaant!" [Leave!] She ordered before she could hold his head against her body even more tightly. She clenched his body from back, took him inside her arms, leaned his head on her collar bone rubbing her cheeks on his hairs. He opened his eyes; preventing the heavy eye-lids to close with hardship, he tried to say something... His lips quivered, no voice came out, a drop of water rolled down from those eyes... i almost forgot about maids lol thankew JodhaLOL

Maids play negligible part here.LOL

She made him to lie down on her lap, started patting him with all her affection till he gets sleep. She was unable to bind the flood of tears from her eyes...




Jodha. His love Jodha... She has magic in her touch. When she touches, all types of pains, all types of sufferings get vanished. Who said that love hurts? Love heals... True love heals the burning heart of the lover with the soothing touch of tears, gives the immense peace for which people fight for whole life forgetting their actual entity! Love is magic... love is divine... love is everything... love is the main reason of the existence... sure she is a deviEmbarrassed

AwwwDay Dreaming

"Abhi thora accha lag raha hay. Hain na?" [You're feeling better now. Isn't it?]Jodha asked after bathing him. She was applying ointments on the incisions made by the doctors. Jalal nodded silently. His eyes were fixed to the droplets of sweat on Jodha's forehead. She is serving him without any rest from morning. She has not left his side for a moment from then. She can feel what Jalal is feeling, she can understand what Jalal needs now, much before Jalal can tell anything about that. Releasing himself completely on her, he is relishing his rest and she is happily relishing his dependency and not leaving any smallest gap to ensure his comfort... She has not even tied her hairs today- forget the ornaments... Jalal never has seen this look of Jodha... and he believes now that this one is the purest look of her divinely beautiful wife. JOOODHAAA love her like anything!

So glad to see you liking her this image.Big smile

"Dekhiye to kya haal bana diya hay us khuni ne aapka?" [Look what that murderer has made of you!] Jodha complained like a little girl in her wet voice. Then in an angry tone she spoke to her own. "Ekbar asli aparadi ki pata chal jaye, hum jaan se mar denge use!" [I will kill the real convict once he gets caught!] hehe billi

Oye billi nehi sherniAngryStarLOL

Jodha looked at his eyes for once, Jalal also looked at her eyes intensely. Then both of them took back their glares. Jodha became much busier in her work to hide the blushing, and Jalal started checking the quality of his own hair, as he had nothing in front of hand to show himself busy. No sooner than this, they both started giggling and simultaneously hiding their smiles from themselves... EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

The strangulated environment of the room got some oxygen today... after a whole long year...

"Rani Sahiba aap jaiye, Jodha aapke piche piche jayenge." [You may leave Rani Sahiba, Jodha will go behind you.] JODHA B NA


"Kuch kahena tha?" [You had something to tell me?]

"Haa... Bohot dino se..." [Yes. From a long time...] He suddenly stopped and sighed. Then after a little hesitation, he fixed his gaze on Jodha's eyes, uttered slowly- "Kya aapko pata hay ki hum aapse kitni mohabbat karte hay?" [Do you know that how much I do love you?] He told in a strange sentiment while his heart beat increased again. Jodha's glare lost for a moment in the flow of his words, but she readily gripped her emotions and smiled. "Yeh bhi koi batane wali baat hay Shahenshah? Hume pata nehi hoga to kise pata hoga?" [Is this something to tell your majesty? Who will know it better than me?] she told casually. Confused okay now the tough part...

the most significant part.Embarrassed

Jalal tried to smile, but the smile lost in the lines of emotions that had been crafted in his face. He gulped and widened his eyes to control the coming tear; in a husky, broken voice he started -"Pata hay Jodha, hume lagta tha... hume yaakin tha ki jitney mohabbat hum aapse karte hay, aaj tak utni mohabbat iss dunia me kisine kisise nehi ki hogi. Jalal ka mohabbat uske jaisa hi anukha hay, sabse bara hay, sabse sandar or sabse uncha hay! Yaakin nehi, ghamand tha hume aapni mohabbat karne ki takat pe... ghamand tha aapne dil ki takat pe... bohot zyada yaakin tha hume aapne aappe!" [You know Jodha, I used to think that... I was confident that the love that I do for you, none in this world can love anyone equal to that. Jalal's love is as unique as him, the greatest, the most shining, the highest! Not only confidence, I was proud on my strength of love... I was proud of the power of my heart... I was over-confident!] sobsCryCryCryCry

Row maat!CryEmbarrassed

Jodha was trying hard to control her tears, but at last she gave in. The tears rolled down from her cheeks, and she suddenly started sobbing hard. "Hume aapse koi bhi sikayat nehi hay shahenshah! Hum jante hay aapne jo bhi kaha andhi akrosh me akar kaha... Aapne antar ki aag ko bujhane ke liye kaha... Parantu Shahenshah!" [I have no grievance on you, Majesty! I know you told all those under blind rage... to extinguish the fire of your heart... But your majesty! ] Her voice sank in the flood of tears... "Uske baad... uske baad aap Jodha ko bhul gaye Shahenshah! Ek pal ke liye usse aapne paas nehi bulaya aapne! Ekbar dekhne bhi nehi aye ki o jivit hay ki mar gayi hay??" [After that... After that you forgot Jodha! You never called her closer for a moment! Never came to see that whether she is dead or alive?] Automatically her face clung on his chest with an agonized grievance. "Bohot nisthur hay aap Shahenshah! Bohot nithur hay aap!" [You are so cruel Majesty! So cruel!]Jodha broke down and made me cry tooCry

Awww dear.Embarrassed

"Hum jana chahte the Jodha... Par humare pair hilte nehi the... " [I wanted hard to go... But my legs did not move...] He told as if he was talking with his own. "Dil chir jata tha aapko ekbar dekhne ke liye, aapko ekbar chhune ke liye... Par himmat hi nehi juta pate the... Na jane kitne hazar bar raat ki andhere me aapki mehel ke samne se gujre hay hum, par andar jane ki himmat nehi hua... Kya kahete, kaise kahete, kis muh se khara hote aapke samne... Jab aapko meri zarurat thi humne aapki mamta ki rusbahi karke aapko aapne zindegi se dur kar diya! Aab jab mujhe aapki zarurat hay kis muh se aapke samne jakar khara hote hum!" [Heart used to tear up for seeing you once, to touch you once... But could not gather courage... How many times I have passed through the corridor of your palace at midnight, but could not have the courage to enter... What to say, how to say, how to face you... When you needed me I distanced you from me insulting your motherhood! And when I needed you, how could I face you!] He grabbed his hairs in rage on himself. "Bhag te fir rahe the hum... ek bhagore ki tarha aapne zindegi se, sach se bhagte fir rahe the! Sab bhul jana chahte the siyasat me dub kar; sab dard mita dena chahte the sarab ki nashe se... Kayar hay hum!" [I was running away from myself... Like a coward- from my life, from everyone I was running away! I tried to forget everything sinking in the sea of politics; tried to wipe out the pain by the addiction of alcohol... I am coward!] He pronounced the adjective which he hates the most very prominently. "Kayar!" [Coward!] hmmm i have lot of sympathy for both of them

I tooEmbarrassed

She looked back. Jalal looked at her firmly and said "Zubaan kat lena mera, agar kabhi bhi, aisi galat baat muh se nikla to!" [Cut off my tongue if I ever tell such an offended word!]

"Aapke zubaan kat liya to baato baato me humari tariff kon karega? Main ruth gayi to mujhe manayega kon? "[If I cut your tongue then who will appreciate me in each moment? Who will cool me down when I will get angry?] Jodha smiled broadly and that spread on Jalal's lips too. But he was not ready for the next phrase. "Tab humari maang pura karne ke liye Sarifuddin ko zinda humare pair ke samne kon pesh karega?" [Then who will present an alive Sarifuddin in front of my feet to keep my wish?] and this is prehaps the best part of the whole chapter. THE NEW LIFE!! THE NEW BEGINING and NEW YET OLD JOJA


Awww thank you sooo much.Hug

There was a spontaneous spark in Jodha's eyes perhaps that lit the dull eyes of Jalal suddenly. The bright eyeballs, which had temporarily been dimmed, sparked again. Both of them kept on gazing at each other for a moment, both had the same smile at the corner of their lips that was telling the same words... STUTIIIHug

OMG! Hug


Precap: Kiss... Wink OMG! waitingEvil Smile

moni_06 Senior Member

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Posted: 29 June 2016 at 3:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shinning_Stuti

Originally posted by moni_06

Finally the two reconciled
Was waiting for a NEW LIFE...
That incident was excruciating both of them but now its all over
Their repartee was full of love and pain for each other
Finally we have the apology
I loved the way you described jala's agony 
A very sentimental and heart touching chapter
I had read this story on Facebook really very philosphically written
Try updating soon
I guess your exams are over?
Thank you for the pm
Thank you for such a beautiful comment dear.Embarrassed Thank you for all your words.Heart 
Yes xms are over
Ok so does that mean we will get update asap
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Posted: 29 June 2016 at 4:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by savindi.db

Don't you think it's too fast to request?LOL
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Posted: 29 June 2016 at 4:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shinning_Stuti

Originally posted by savindi.db

Don't you think it's too fast to request?LOL
not at all Embarrassed i can't wait, after reading the previouse chappy and the precapDay Dreaming
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Posted: 29 June 2016 at 9:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet_diksha

finally, they got their peace... and thanks for giving ur readers their peace of mind...WinkLOL
He he..LOL
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Posted: 30 June 2016 at 4:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by haya_gorgeous

superb chappy dear..
jalal is bcoming ohk..
jodha is a vry strong woman
awww love this talk btween jodha nd jalal
finally the gap btw them has been end
they r fully in love in each other which can't be reduced bt will grow everyday.. their love got New Life
very beautifully written dear
u made my day today
nd thnks for pm
Thanks for reading dear. Yes Jodha is very strong. Their love never ever had reduced, only was hidden which has got the new life. Thanks dear.Embarrassed

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Posted: 30 June 2016 at 5:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by savindi.db

update plz...Cry
Let all the readers to comment first.LOL

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