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Posted: 25 May 2016 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shinning_Stuti

Originally posted by -AkDha.Lover-

Stuti diii... finally, finally and finally back to my story...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed Haan okay, I know it's yours... but ek hi baat hai na? WinkLOLEmbarrassed
Yooo! We are soulmates na?Wink

Naah... Soul-sisters! LOLLOL

The best written part of the chapter was Jalal's state of mind and body after the attack. That is commendable! Clap
Thank you so much dear. Embarrassed

You're most welcome di. Embarrassed

The first was good too. Only goes on to prove how tactful a player time is! It does what it likes, it can tear you apart in a second... and make you feel the happiest on earth the next moment! Also tells how vulnerable we humans actually are. 
Seriously?Big smileI was actually thinking to omit that part from the chapter.I had told u too.LOL

Yeah I remember. Actually it did seem like a filler scene, so I just wrote what it showed. LOL

This happens just after falling in love. 

^ Jodhu bhi na...LOLLOL As if people who had fallen in love long ago never think about each other! Moreover, she's saying even after she knows that she herself spends half the day thinking about Jalal. And vice-versa, though she doesn't probably know that yet...LOL

Is she mad that she will confess that in front of a hall full of gossiping ladies? We all are afraid of leg-pulling.LOL
Aree she knows it... None knows Jallu better than her.Wink

Haha...true! LOLLOLLOL

So sad that Fakhr takes Jalal only as a golden egg laying hen. Though being such distant relatives, they aren't expected to be close.. but still... the fact that they are together only for a purpose makes me wonder whether it's too costly to be an emperor. Ouch

Also Jalal does not take Fakhr more than a weapon of him... And there is no actual bond- Fakhr can ditch Jalal any day, and also Jalal will not hesitate for once to chop of Fakhr's head if situation wants it. The world revolving around the throne of empire is really very dirty!

True... and rightly said - the last line. Ouch

Chalo good to see, at least the elephant was thought of. I mean without it toh it would have been easier to kill Jalal na. Though it didn't help at all, but still, they at least thought of it. 

Actually it helped a little... If he had been in horse, the arrow would have pierced his heart directly and he would not have survived.

Oh haan... I forgot that while writing! TongueLOLLOL

And this Tunga is a dedicated professional I must say! Since he was here for money, I had thought he would either escape, or get caught.

Suicide killer. He will never let him to be caught in any situation. 

[How is the name Tunga?LOLLOL]

Apt. StarLOL

Haan I know, but it was written somewhere na that he was here for money, that's why I thought he won't kill himself.

And what to say about my Jalal, he's a rockstar as always...StarStarEmbarrassed The way he cared for his aawaam even in such a painful condition, his mental strength, and the way he tries to tell Maan Singh about the paigaam - work being the most important for him - I loved every bit. Jalal... you rock! StarClapClap

He is dedicated to his position and his dutiesStar A real emperor he is!Big smile

For the last time he opened his eyes with all the strength he had inside... Yes, she is coming... she is coming to him! She is coming to give him warmth, to pacify his pain, to get him back in his senses... Jalal concentrated all the energies to see her properly. He could see nothing beyond her... everything surrounded by him was blurred- only her eyes was brightly beaming in front of him. Her eyes were full of shock for this unexpected moment- she has even forgotten to become nervous! Her lips shivered once- did she try to say him something? Jalal could not hear... She was now closer to him... she is to hold his hand... but Jalal is going far from her... her face is slowly getting blurred... she is going to be lost again...lost forever!

Jalal tried to stretch his hand towards her... his hand could not reach to her... Suddenly someone dropped a black screen in front of his eyes!


^ Very touchy lines...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


Especially @bold. He fears going away from her again, just like that night.

Thanks dear. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed BTW about which night are you talking about?Tongue

The night when Jalal blamed Jodha.

Aww... how he was trying to reach her, but could not. Ouch

Embarrassed


Time to dance!


LOLEmbarrassedBig smile


Edited by -AkDha.Lover- - 25 May 2016 at 11:58pm

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Posted: 26 May 2016 at 12:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -AkDha.Lover-

Originally posted by Shinning_Stuti

Originally posted by -AkDha.Lover-

Stuti diii... finally, finally and finally back to my story...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed Haan okay, I know it's yours... but ek hi baat hai na? WinkLOLEmbarrassed
Yooo! We are soulmates na?Wink

Naah... Soul-sisters! LOLLOL

You are Jalal and I am Jo... Forgot it kya?LOLLOLLOL 
[Soul sisters to hum hay hi!]

The best written part of the chapter was Jalal's state of mind and body after the attack. That is commendable! Clap
Thank you so much dear. Embarrassed

You're most welcome di. Embarrassed

 --->EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

The first was good too. Only goes on to prove how tactful a player time is! It does what it likes, it can tear you apart in a second... and make you feel the happiest on earth the next moment! Also tells how vulnerable we humans actually are. 
Seriously?Big smileI was actually thinking to omit that part from the chapter.I had told u too.LOL

Yeah I remember. Actually it did seem like a filler scene, so I just wrote what it showed. LOL

O accha...LOL

This happens just after falling in love. 

^ Jodhu bhi na...LOLLOL As if people who had fallen in love long ago never think about each other! Moreover, she's saying even after she knows that she herself spends half the day thinking about Jalal. And vice-versa, though she doesn't probably know that yet...LOL

Is she mad that she will confess that in front of a hall full of gossiping ladies? We all are afraid of leg-pulling.LOL
Aree she knows it... None knows Jallu better than her.Wink

Haha...true! LOLLOLLOL

So sad that Fakhr takes Jalal only as a golden egg laying hen. Though being such distant relatives, they aren't expected to be close.. but still... the fact that they are together only for a purpose makes me wonder whether it's too costly to be an emperor. Ouch

Also Jalal does not take Fakhr more than a weapon of him... And there is no actual bond- Fakhr can ditch Jalal any day, and also Jalal will not hesitate for once to chop of Fakhr's head if situation wants it. The world revolving around the throne of empire is really very dirty!

True... and rightly said - the last line. Ouch

Chalo good to see, at least the elephant was thought of. I mean without it toh it would have been easier to kill Jalal na. Though it didn't help at all, but still, they at least thought of it. 

Actually it helped a little... If he had been in horse, the arrow would have pierced his heart directly and he would not have survived.

Oh haan... I forgot that while writing! TongueLOLLOL

Concentrate Shagun...LOLLOL

And this Tunga is a dedicated professional I must say! Since he was here for money, I had thought he would either escape, or get caught.

Suicide killer. He will never let him to be caught in any situation. 

[How is the name Tunga?LOLLOL]

Apt. StarLOL

Haan I know, but it was written somewhere na that he was here for money, that's why I thought he won't kill himself.

The Mughal soldiers would have make his korma if he was caught alive you understand na? So suicide is always a better option.
[Somehow this scene was half inspired by the scene of the movie JA. And other half from another novel I was reading that time.Tongue]

And what to say about my Jalal, he's a rockstar as always...StarStarEmbarrassed The way he cared for his aawaam even in such a painful condition, his mental strength, and the way he tries to tell Maan Singh about the paigaam - work being the most important for him - I loved every bit. Jalal... you rock! StarClapClap

He is dedicated to his position and his dutiesStar A real emperor he is!Big smile

For the last time he opened his eyes with all the strength he had inside... Yes, she is coming... she is coming to him! She is coming to give him warmth, to pacify his pain, to get him back in his senses... Jalal concentrated all the energies to see her properly. He could see nothing beyond her... everything surrounded by him was blurred- only her eyes was brightly beaming in front of him. Her eyes were full of shock for this unexpected moment- she has even forgotten to become nervous! Her lips shivered once- did she try to say him something? Jalal could not hear... She was now closer to him... she is to hold his hand... but Jalal is going far from her... her face is slowly getting blurred... she is going to be lost again...lost forever!

Jalal tried to stretch his hand towards her... his hand could not reach to her... Suddenly someone dropped a black screen in front of his eyes!


^ Very touchy lines...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


Especially @bold. He fears going away from her again, just like that night.

Thanks dear. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed BTW about which night are you talking about?Tongue

The night when Jalal blamed Jodha.

Ooo accha...

Aww... how he was trying to reach her, but could not. Ouch

Embarrassed


Time to dance!


LOLEmbarrassedBig smile
Stop showing teeth and read the next part. Angry I want the review before tonight!LOL

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Posted: 26 May 2016 at 12:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kavya_P

update soon stuti baby
Not before Shagun Bebe completes commenting for all the rest chapters.LOL

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Posted: 26 May 2016 at 12:32am | IP Logged
update soon stuti
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Posted: 26 May 2016 at 12:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kavya_P

update soon stuti
No way!OuchLOL
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Posted: 26 May 2016 at 1:29am | IP Logged

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Posted: 26 May 2016 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shinning_Stuti

Originally posted by haya_gorgeous

Firstly sorry for late reply, my phone is broken..
Awsome chappy dear
Finally jalal is fine
The differences btween them has been cleared nd they r back together as always
Love to see jo's care nd jalal holding her hand as she will go far away..
Precap is minblowing
Update nxt chappy soon
Thnks for pm

It's okay dude... how is the phn now? Got a new one kya?LOL
Thanks for liking the chapter so much.

nah.. Phone to abi sahi nahi hua
wish k jaldi se sahi ho jaye
nxt month se exam start h to new phn milega bt after exams..
Living without my phn is like nothing is intrsting in my life..
I really luv my phn so thnks for the concern about it..

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Posted: 27 May 2016 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by haya_gorgeous

Originally posted by Shinning_Stuti

Originally posted by haya_gorgeous

Firstly sorry for late reply, my phone is broken..
Awsome chappy dear
Finally jalal is fine
The differences btween them has been cleared nd they r back together as always
Love to see jo's care nd jalal holding her hand as she will go far away..
Precap is minblowing
Update nxt chappy soon
Thnks for pm

It's okay dude... how is the phn now? Got a new one kya?LOL
Thanks for liking the chapter so much.

nah.. Phone to abi sahi nahi hua
wish k jaldi se sahi ho jaye
nxt month se exam start h to new phn milega bt after exams..
Living without my phn is like nothing is intrsting in my life..
I really luv my phn so thnks for the concern about it..
Ooo so sad! I can't even think about a whole day without phn!Cry

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