you update next chappy then they can comment for both chappy together na๐
you update next chappy then they can comment for both chappy together na๐
wonderful chapter dii!๐
jodha is so caring towards jalal!caring like a mother!๐finally both let out each others pains...๐ณjodha forgave jalal...interesting precap๐update soon!๐
Before the detailed reply here for the courtier> Idhar shehenshah ki jaan abhi bhi aadhi hai aur courtier ko paigam ki padi hai?๐ก๐ก aur badatameezi dekho, bed room mai hai?๐ Iska toh sar kalam kar do.๐๐
For JALAL>> Yaha umar kam ho gayi hai aur siyasat soojh rahi hai๐ก๐ก
For the blood drained out, treatment given is pipe se Jalal ko khoon pila rahe hai๐๐
AFTER SOME BLOOD GAIN๐คฃ
Courtier in bed room,๐ahah..
So the Shehenshah is back to business, not recovered properly yet. Stuti you described the recovering man very detailed-the age, the wrinkling, the glow etc.
Oh, whole gang is present- BL, BD, MS, TM, MD๐๐.
Ahah Jodha๐ฅณki entry aur sabki baati gul๐๐ sabko bhaga diya๐๐ akele rehne ke liye๐โค๏ธ BL is smart,he caught the hint๐๐ akhir baap hai๐๐
Jodha wants to know about the killer from TD, and he has some info that he is from Kabul. They do have spies and security ๐๐ unlike JA show. Why should Jodha make a request to TD๐ก๐ก๐ก? she is Mallika E hind Dont be Ekta๐๐ and well she is right, there is no need to stress over the sultanate matters, a day or two can pass.
Jodha and Jalal togetherโค๏ธ
I knew it, Shehenshah ki tabyat thodi theek hui aur romance chalu๐๐ Jodha ki khubsurati mei kho gaya, arre khoon ki kami thi nah๐๐คฃ uska kya hua๐๐
Jodha becomes thermometer๐. Ok so she is nursing him and feeding him. So seeing food Jalal feels like to puke but he can lust over her, ahah๐๐คฃ๐คฃ
Now Shehenshan wants to sit on his own, macho man๐๐๐ but could not, khoon jo nikal diya hai๐๐. Jodha is tending to him, despite his horrible allegations, duffer does not deserve it, but kya kare hamari writer sahiba is Jalal fan naa๐๐. Jalal phir se beauty mei lost๐๐ jaldi theek kar do writer sahiba.
The detailing you have given is thorough๐๐ and remarkableโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ. The food, the symptoms, the weakness, the vomiting, pain and tiredness, the way Jodha makes him eat. Touch se kuch kuch hota hai๐๐ ๐ฒ
Jalal is back already๐.. naughty huh!!๐๐
Oddi baba, the romance is on. But nicely described the yearning in Jodha and desire in Jalal. So Love is back in their livesโค๏ธ.
Finally some regret and some guilt in Jalal๐๐. He now understand that his words hurt Jodha.
If we see words are the most powerful tool to win over someone or to hurt someone. They are nothings but sound from ideas to which we attach meaning to make ourselves either happy or sad.
You have shown Jodha to be mature and sensible enough to understand the situation and react accordingly. She deals with it aptly.๐๐ผ
I dont know why but your lines about Jalal not coming to Jodha after he realised he was harsh and obnoxious, for some reason reminded me of the hindi poem by Maithili Sharan Gupt about how SIddhartha (Gautam Buddha) left Yashodhara his wife, must have felt when he left her without informing.
Good Jalal realised that Jodha is selfless in loving and caring for him.
OMG, precap is Kiss๐๐๐, are u really going to describe it? and more...๐คฃ
awesome...loved it...
wow precap..suprb
Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam
Courtier in bed room,๐ahah..
๐คฃNaughty gal!๐
So the Shehenshah is back to business, not recovered properly yet. Stuti you described the recovering man very detailed-the age, the wrinkling, the glow etc.
Hehe thanks.๐ณ
Oh, whole gang is present- BL, BD, MS, TM, MD๐๐.
Bilkul!
Ahah Jodha๐ฅณki entry aur sabki baati gul๐๐ sabko bhaga diya๐๐ akele rehne ke liye๐โค๏ธ BL is smart,he caught the hint๐๐ akhir baap hai๐๐
๐คฃ
Jodha wants to know about the killer from TD, and he has some info that he is from Kabul. They do have spies and security ๐๐ unlike JA show.Why should Jodha make a request to TD๐ก๐ก๐ก? she is Mallika E hind Dont be Ekta๐๐ and well she is right, there is no need to stress over the sultanate matters, a day or two can pass.
Aree Jodha was requesting him being modest and polite. It was actually an order in the form of request.๐ TD has understood it. ๐
Jodha and Jalal togetherโค๏ธ
I knew it, Shehenshah ki tabyat thodi theek hui aur romance chalu๐๐ Jodha ki khubsurati mei kho gaya, arre khoon ki kami thi nah๐๐คฃ uska kya hua๐๐
His RBC production has increased 10 times seeing and touching Jodhu. He will be overflowing with blood very soon.๐
Jodha becomes thermometer๐.
๐คฃ ๐คฃ ๐คฃ
Ok so she is nursing him and feeding him. So seeing food Jalal feels like to puke but he can lust over her, ahah๐๐คฃ๐คฃ
Now Shehenshan wants to sit on his own, macho man๐๐๐ but could not, khoon jo nikal diya hai๐๐. Jodha is tending to him, despite his horrible allegations, duffer does not deserve it, but kya kare hamari writer sahiba is Jalal fan naa๐๐. Jalal phir se beauty mei lost๐๐ jaldi theek kar do writer sahiba.
๐คฃ ๐คฃ Aab to bechare ko maaf kar do. Marte marte bacha hay due to your curse.๐ก๐ Haa haa thik kar denge. Pahele kuch sick-time romance to kar le.๐
The detailing you have given is thorough๐๐ and remarkableโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ. The food, the symptoms, the weakness, the vomiting, pain and tiredness, the way Jodha makes him eat. Touch se kuch kuch hota hai๐๐ ๐ฒ THANK YOU.๐ณ Touch se bohot kuch hota hay.๐
Jalal is back already๐.. naughty huh!!๐๐
Akhirkar o Jalal hay.๐
Oddi baba, the romance is on. But nicely described the yearning in Jodha and desire in Jalal. So Love is back in their livesโค๏ธ.
๐คฃ
Glad to know you liked it.๐
Finally some regret and some guilt in Jalal๐๐. He now understand that his words hurt Jodha.
He had understood and regretted it long before.๐ก Only could not express his feelings and apology to her.๐ญ
If we see words are the most powerful tool to win over someone or to hurt someone. They are nothings but sound from ideas to which we attach meaning to make ourselves either happy or sad.
True!
You have shown Jodha to be mature and sensible enough to understand the situation and react accordingly. She deals with it aptly.๐๐ผ
So at last I have made you happy with her.๐
I dont know why but your lines about Jalal not coming to Jodha after he realised he was harsh and obnoxious, for some reason reminded me of the hindi poem by Maithili Sharan Gupt about how SIddhartha (Gautam Buddha) left Yashodhara his wife, must have felt when he left her without informing.
O really? Never knew about this poem.๐ณ
Good Jalal realised that Jodha is selfless in loving and caring for him.
Hmm. ๐ณ
I especially included that zubaan kat lena wala dialogue only for you!๐๐โญ๏ธ
OMG, precap is Kiss๐๐๐, are u really going to describe it? and more...๐คฃ
Will try my best to detail the kiss... and more after that... umm... I am too shy though.๐
Originally posted by: sr0560982
Awesome chappy di ๐and precap is amazing ๐by d way don't forget to send me pm๐
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