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Posted: 06 May 2016 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RamSiyaRam

The chapter was dedicated to Jodha's fear, pain and ventilation and strength. You described every thing well and the flow was fine too. Her anguish and anger with Lord Krishna, support from Dadisa and Moti. The moments with Jalal, his sub conscious remembrance of Jodha, his regret, his pain was good. The only sore point or thorn in this whole chapter was mention of Hussain death. I found it pricking the heart and  it spoiled the mood.
Thanks for the pm and the update. Embarrassed
Though I was expecting a humorous comment from you like everydayLOLLOL, but I loved this one too. Big smileBig smileEmbarrassed Thank you so much!Hug 

The memory of Hussain's death itself is heart-piercing, but I thought to add that to show the inner trauma of Jalal and Jodha regarding that horrible incident.

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Posted: 06 May 2016 at 11:34am | IP Logged
wow superb chapy dear
thxxxc 4r pm

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Posted: 06 May 2016 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by alffim

Dear Stuti!
Very strongly written chapter! You wonderfully to wrote despair when the person begins to lose faith under the blows of fate. This is a very difficult ethical, philosophical, moral problem. I really very like that you go beyond romantic or historical novel
For me it's always the question: how people manage to keep the faith, losing all their loved ones and friends?
Soon 9 may. In Russia will celebrate Victory Day. But it's tragically and sad  the holiday.  So many were killed and died in the 2nd World war! More than 20 million killed in Russia, 6 million Jews in the Holocaust.
As it was to keep the faith?
In Russia practically every family has suffered from this war.
There is a cynical saying: "lot of people - this is a statistic", but woe to one person as a magnifying glass. How can a mother accept the death of children?
And why tragedy was severed their relations and not to united Jalal and Jodha? So, was the flaw in their relationship before?
But this "purgatory" through which they pass should merge them now. I hope.
Impatiently wait your new chapter. Thank you!

Thank you so much for such a delicate and deeply thought comment!Embarrassed It is beautiful!Star

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Posted: 06 May 2016 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ANJIJHA

Awesome chappy dear...
Just loved it...
First jo is crying this much after her kids death...
Ja health is improving...
Jo is really a great n strong woman...
Pld update ASAP...
Thank you for reading dear.Big smile
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Posted: 06 May 2016 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by wanita

your update is amazing..so u..Smile...update again sooon..
Thank you!!Hug

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Posted: 06 May 2016 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet_diksha

amazing chappy...Jo's fight just touches our heart...and so good to see her coming out of her bitter past shadows...but will Jalal forget it as well??
Thanks you so much for commenting.Embarrassed Yes, they have to move forward from the past now.Smile

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Posted: 06 May 2016 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1357raksha

Amazing update dear. ...
Jodha's battle with god u have written that so good...
Nd her emotions where in peak...
Good to knw jalal like is bet out of danger. ..
Nd jodha doing everything to get him back...
Nd forgive everything to be with him...
Nd jalal on other had is worried leaving d past nw...
Update soon. ..
Nd thanks for pm. ...
Thank you so much for reading dear.Embarrassed 

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Posted: 06 May 2016 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by haya_gorgeous

amazingg chappy
jalal gettin fine
nd they r getting back closer by this incident
update nxt part soon
Thanks dear. Hope to update soon.Tongue

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