Originally posted by Shinning_Stuti^^^^
1) Well Siya Di, don't you think that seeking forgiveness this way (falling on feet and all) will become too much melodramatic??? Toh kya hua, blaming Jodha bhi toh melodramatic hai aur excellence wale qualities in Jalal Blaming Jodha portion was not written by me! phir kaun kathor dil hai voh?
The writer of JA or kaun!
Dear, I mean writer of this story BTW you promised to add it, NO going back Thik hay, thik hay. Dekhte hay how I can write in omitting the melodrama! Arrre melodrama se hi toh maza hai, like nahi-3 times keh do ki yeh jhooth hai Was watching JA today, Jalal was handling a whip to Jodha to beat him for his offence and I was like . I will write same in my story? Oh acha, I am having busy time and guests had come or Dad watches news or something so JA is getting amiss. But wish they showed whipping once now and next flogging after the twin baby death I hated that so much that stopped watching it Mr Cruel and insensitive and inhuman You really wanted whipping??I hated that part so much in God's track! Aree he is Akbar yaar, kuch to rahem karo! Blaming after twin's death was quite unexpected...I could not believe the particular dialogue for a long time. But after that they showed Jalal as psycho and we get to know that whole drama was made to justify Chittore massacre! But then everything was alright.
Yeap that would be befitting his sin, if he gets at least one whip on his behind BTW in Garuda Purana there are defined punishments for those commit sins. In chapter 17 Jalal has begged apology and Jodha has forgiven him. Now who will whip whom? Jalal will whip himself- "Humne galti ki hay hume saza do" and Jodha will stop him? Nahi, Jodha ko sadbudhhi do, opportunity knocks the door once Use it. I will bash Jodha if she does that Aree if your husband starts melodrama like that, you too will try to control him! This one deserves it for his unforgivable sin a punishment so that its not repeated. Well, I will work on it soon. Let Jalal come out first from ICU. Arre say let Jodha come out of daasipan Come on Jodha is not so much 'daasi' Parantu yehi satya hay! Maybe Jodha is reserved and quiet...but she is not 'Kanak' type... (You don't know Kanak...She is the heroine of a famous Bengali serial! 'Adarsh Bahu!') Ouch why have you chosen WRONG inspiration for Jodha NOT FAIR Its Nope its prejudice against Jodha. Baat yeh hay ki the Jodha of JA always resembled with that character in my eyes. So obviously my JO is better... Aree she will show her jalwa too.Don't get tensed 2) I could have made Jodha too; but problem is the ideal bahu picture of Jodha has been embalmed in my brain. And also, Jodha's love for Jalal is too unconditional to be bored off and Jalal's love for her is also genuine unlike Abul Mali so no match with Fakhr. what do u mean? Ideal bahu's are brainless nope they are smart, intelligent and talented and above have self esteem. The problem is you have taken inspiration from Ekta's daasi bahu hence the mess up. If she were your own true blue creation, she would have been brilliant and shinning.
To be honest, the basic character of Jodha in this story totally follows Ekta's JA wala Jodha's formula. As I have chosen all the characters from the show only, I am somehow bound not to change them fully as per my imagination.
And is Jodha really brainless here? She has not got any chance to show herself that's it.
Dekha maine kaha tha nah. Its all brain washing of EK. Magar yaar you have such a creative brain which can think of Fakhr, assassin, Abul and so on then why not break the myth of EK Yeah Jodha is, what does she do? except PPD chance toh tab milega jab talent hoga Jodha has come in maika to attend the marriage of her nephew, what special work can she do? Here Jalal is enough to manage the politics and Sharif and co; what can be Jodha's work in all these? Yeh bahana toh purana ho gaya! She can do everything that MCP is doing and do it better, only thing is will to do
She can do, but as per the protocol it shall be done by Jalal as he is the dominating personality of the empire.
You can say that I could have start the story with an active Jodha, just like Jalal has deviated his mind through works she could have also... But the prologue itself said that it is not. Now I have to rewrite from first if I want to reduce the 'daasipan' as you said it. Where did the prologue say that JOdha is PPD only in the story if thats so then thats what i have been saying all along and you have been refuting it It's looking like I am not getting you and you are not getting me. Better stop the discussion.
And also, in that male-dominated society, maximum a woman can work along with her husband; cannot cross him. Fakhr is exception, she is plotting and conspiring against her husband and family. Being a white character Jodha cannot do that.
I can write Fakhr, Abul, assassin smoothly as they are gray...Jodha is purely white! Oye yaar, aisa kuch nahi hai, Jhansi ki rani thi nah. India had Indira as PM for the longest period of time. And Noor something u had said had ruled over Jehangir nah. So there is nothing like women cannot do it.
I didn't say that woman cannot do it. Please don't get it wrong.
Akbar was not Jahangir. I don't think example of indira gandhi is fitting here. Jodha can become Jhanshi ki Rani too when it will need. So no need to think that I am under-estimating womanhood.
I will pour all the qualities in the Jodha of Destined Love. Though it is going to be kiddish. Yeh sun sun ke I am bored You mean I will get a flirty,ambitious and no nonsense Jodha?
I can try only... if you believe me to be able to write a character like that...
Waise I don't know what is the future of Destined Love. I could sense that hence this story ONLY. Destined Love ka future toh destined hi hoga aur kya You have already shown the sparks of course you can. Dekhte hay! I wish to see