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Posted: 22 February 2017 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Sujamal had seen him from close for only once, maybe before 2 and a half year for a very small time. That time he had a mild trace of childishness in his chin; though there was a strange dominating personality in his appearance, he had a touch of impulsive eagerness in his nature and that was clear in his eyes. It looks like the time has wiped out the little bit of immaturity he had from his personality forever. The person who is standing in front of him is such a man in front of whom head bends in awe automatically.

Jalal looked at Sujamal to bid goodbye; Sujamal stared at his face surprisedly. How can someone's face break like this in one moment? The loss of fatherhood is no doubt the greatest pain on can get ever! Suddenly Jodha's words rang in his ears


Wonderful story Stuti...had been following ur story all along... very good concept...i liked the chapters where jalal got injured and the recovery ones the most...@bold i like those particular lines the most...it says a lot about the character and also about the writer... itz so beautiful...

I understand you are going to finish this ff soon, but i really do hope you wont do it in a rush...and bring it a satisfactory end...

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Posted: 23 February 2017 at 12:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by piya58

Woow awesome
Naughty Jalal Soo nice
Jodha sujamal part emotional but needed too aur stupid poor sharif
Precap interesting
Update sooon plzzz
Thanku dr Clap Smile

Thank you so much dear. Big smile
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Posted: 23 February 2017 at 3:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RamSiyaRam

You dont even like me?Broken Heart
And you didnt ans about Fakhr?

Ooopppsss missed Fakhr's part. Tongue Yes, she will show her face once more obviously. First let Birbal to reach Kabul. LOL
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Posted: 23 February 2017 at 4:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by selvi1275

Sujamal had seen him from close for only once, maybe before 2 and a half year for a very small time. That time he had a mild trace of childishness in his chin; though there was a strange dominating personality in his appearance, he had a touch of impulsive eagerness in his nature and that was clear in his eyes. It looks like the time has wiped out the little bit of immaturity he had from his personality forever. The person who is standing in front of him is such a man in front of whom head bends in awe automatically.

Jalal looked at Sujamal to bid goodbye; Sujamal stared at his face surprisedly. How can someone's face break like this in one moment? The loss of fatherhood is no doubt the greatest pain on can get ever! Suddenly Jodha's words rang in his ears


Wonderful story Stuti...had been following ur story all along... very good concept...i liked the chapters where jalal got injured and the recovery ones the most...@bold i like those particular lines the most...it says a lot about the character and also about the writer... itz so beautiful...

I understand you are going to finish this ff soon, but i really do hope you wont do it in a rush...and bring it a satisfactory end...


Thank you so much for such a lovely comment...Day Dreaming Loved it to the core!! I am amazed that you've caught those very small and poignant lines from the whole chapter so particularly. Thank you a lot!!
I am trying to delay the ending as much as possible and to give it the best ending. Embarrassed

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Posted: 23 February 2017 at 4:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shinning_Stuti

I am trying to delay the ending as much as possible and to give it the best ending. Embarrassed

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Posted: 04 March 2017 at 6:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amSavindi

Angry

Yaar I am trying to write but description is going very bad.Cry Rewriting it.

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