thnks for update.. nice chappy
lov'd the romntic part nd jalal's shayari.. awww
jodha is an awesom dtctive.. she rmmbred the cntents of that letter..
lov'd the teasing about the 'prem-patra'..
really fakhrunissa in a vry dangerous lady.. she only believs in politics..
wht will hppn nxt.. mirza misunderstood jalal for killing his mother.. omg he will b against him..
looking forwrd to see how jodha helps jalal in coming problms about kabul..
the way ur writing all the parts.. its jst soo awesome.. this made a fan of urs.. u r an amazing writer..
eagerly waitng for nxt part
plz update soon
nd thnx for pm
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