NEW LIFE: Thread 2 - Page 9

Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam

Oh dear I was just having fun. There is no competition and every comment from the heart is important for the writer.

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

You told the most important line!!

Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam

Oh dear I was just having fun. There is no competition and every comment from the heart is important for the writer.

Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam

Which one?😉 the one that I was having fun😉🤣

Congo for new thread stuti..
its soo amazing..oh god jalal lyf is in danger..
cont soon..

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Congo for new thread stuti..
its soo amazing..oh god jalal lyf is in danger..
cont soon..

Edited by RamSiyaRam - 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anu012

Awsome chptr

Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam

Another brilliant chapter with Fakhr and the assasin. I liked these two the most.

I was quite sure about that.😆

Poor Maan Singh did not get to romance😉  his wife. what is actual😉 business u mentioned? Women are gossiping😆 but where are the men? drinking &😉

About actual business- 😉 soch lo jo sochna hay!😆 

Men are sleeping like old buffaloes after drinking.🤣

Jodha and sukanya convo was ok.

Was planning to delete the whole part but then thought not to do it.😛

The attacker escapes from Jalal and his troops?😲😲😲. The fellow is smart😎! Jalal, Bhagwan Das, Mahesh Das and others discussing about the search was well described. The connection with his kids was good but I felt that would imbibe regret in him for blaming his wife but well men will be men😆😆 Mahesh Das elephant ride idea was good.

Or kitna regreat karega!🤣 Ek bar aankho se Ganga-Yamuna baha chuka hay na!😆😆

🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳Fakhr is back  🥳  🥳  🥳  🥳🥳

I liked the whole convo and how cleverly she deals with Abul. The way she tries to extract info from him and finally succeeds, woohooo , she talks through his dream, his failings, his drawbacks and concern for him!!👏👏 Abul says sharif aur uska buddha baap😆😆. Abul strategy is good actually. He is so much better than Sharif🤪. Acha why does Fakhr not like Abul?🤔.

Yes he is much better and cleverer than Sharif and loves his wife too.😆😆 

Fakhr has got bored with Abul.😆😆😆 And so now want to boss the Kabul!

Well, in short, maybe Abul Mali demands to love Fakhr, but he never tried to explore her qualities, has always thought her as a material of entertainment and the stairs of get the dreams. This constant disrespect has made her desperate to get the actual power.⭐️   

Wish Fakhr becomes Mallika e Kabul at least⭐️ Abul was good too👏 At least he is trying to do things to achieve something. Fakhr does not need Jalal for her goal, she is int😭elligent enough to do it on her own😎

Jalal is the pawn of Fakhr.😎

Next the assassin enters🥳 very nicely described. The idea of taking a woman's get up to quick thinking and adapting his plan to the current situation, superb⭐️👏 The dipping of arrow in poison to ensure max damage from the shoot, wow, brilliant job⭐️👍🏼 Running off from his messy attire and climbing the roof and from there shooting off the arrow, 😎. When he realises there is no escape he kills himself😭 Why? He could have run away😃😛

I enjoyed to write this part very much.😃 Was imagining all the sequences being enacted in the TV scene.😭

He could have run away, but it would raise the hopes that he will be caught someday.😆 So decided to 'tamaam' his 'kaam'.😆

Anyway it was very interesting and thrilling read.😳 Keep writing😛

Thank you. 😳 beware:The next chapters will be full on howling and crying.🤣

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