Half Shot : The Last Dance (Updated) - Page 2

17.sonal

@17.sonal

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Posted: 8 years ago

This ws half Shot..??? I thot it as a teaser...but later i thot..no its actually a Half Shot...🤣

And it ..ws simply amazing...

Few lines told the whole story...

🤗

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

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Posted: 8 years ago

Is this a story on Yuvi?😲

Oh and dont doubt your capability just because of the lack of response in comments, the time difference between us all means that half the people of this forum are probably asleep when you post it so give it a day or two before you decide its fate 😳

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_AppyFizz_

@_AppyFizz_

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: .Ragini.
Okay its like super late over here and i feel like a zombie now so i'll be back tomorrow to comment on this
res for now
lol wait for me 😎

lol okay😆😆

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_AppyFizz_

@_AppyFizz_

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 17.sonal
This ws half Shot..??? I thot it as a teaser...but later i thot..no its actually a Half Shot...🤣
And it ..ws simply amazing...
Few lines told the whole story...
🤗

It is not big enough to be a one shot so thought why not call it a half shot😆
Thank you so much!😳

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_AppyFizz_

@_AppyFizz_

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tranquility123
Is this a story on Yuvi?😲

Oh and dont doubt your capability just because of the lack of response in comments, the time difference between us all means that half the people of this forum are probably asleep when you post it so give it a day or two before you decide its fate 😳

Yup this is how I picture Yuvi's love if he was able to let Twinkle go and move on instead of turning into a crazy obsessive lover.

Thank you so much for those kind words!😳 That was really sweet of you😳

Its just that I am not very confident about my work and hence I put up that silly comment😕

Oh if you dont mind, may i know your name or do you wish me to refer to you as Tranquility? Anything is fine lol😆

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Harshitha

@Snowflake0923

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Posted: 8 years ago

This is so well written
Loved it

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Sherni_Jerry

@Sherni_Jerry

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Posted: 8 years ago

It was awesome. so short yet so beautiful. very well written

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_AppyFizz_

@_AppyFizz_

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: harshi2000
This is so well written
Loved it

Thank you so much :)

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_AppyFizz_

@_AppyFizz_

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry
It was awesome. so short yet so beautiful. very well written

Thank you so much! 😳

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_AppyFizz_

@_AppyFizz_

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dmgomg
This was so beautiful :)

Thank you so much!⭐️

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