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RagSan/Sangini Fanfiction "Fanaa" by Rup (Page 2)

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 12:10am | IP Logged
Hi Rup & welcome!!! Smile
I have read one of your ffs 'Haule-Haule ho jayega pyaar' and it was nice.
This one is great too!!! Update soon!!

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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ShikhaAgrawal

JSJ Rup and welcome to magical world of raglak plz feel free to join the ragya AT

Sorry but as i am new i don't know how to... if you will tell me i will surely... feeling a little stupid haha... 
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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 9:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pheunli

Hi Rup & welcome!!! Smile
I have read one of your ffs 'Haule-Haule ho jayega pyaar' and it was nice.
This one is great too!!! Update soon!!

Yeah i am continuing also that ff... thanks ... will post ad soon as i can
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Posted: 21 April 2016 at 9:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Radhadreamlove

You!! The haule haule ho jaayega pyaar girl, right?
Oh my..thank you that u joined here too..I jz love ur RagLak ffs...
Plz write some RagLak ffs here too..Big smile..I m greedy..LOL
N yes, do join our RagYa AT..

Haha sure... but I am already writing RagLak's 4 fanfictions... will see what to do haha
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Hi Rup 
Welcome to the forumHug
I love all your FFs
Do write more RagLak ffs here
Please continue soon
Waiting for ur next update

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interesting plot. waiting to see how it play out. it seems to have a tragic ending though...which i wish it didnt have. but looking forward to reading how the story plays out.

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"Fanaa" Fanfiction by #Rup part 2:
Ragini slowly opened her eyes... She looked around and she found herself tied on a chair in a dark room... some goons were standing in front of the door and were facing Ragini... 
Ragini sighed closing her eyes and left her head bow back but doing this she hit something with her nape... she turned how much she could and got shocked seeing Sanskar all tied on another chair behind her.. the back of Sanskar's chair was merged to the back of her chair.. 
Ragini: Yeh yaha... - she recalled how Sanskar saved her from the club's tortures... and when some goons kidnapped him.. 
While Ragini's mouth wasn't tied.. Sanskar's mouth, hands, legs.. all was tied to the chair..
Tears flew down from Ragini's eyes: Hamari vajah sai inhey... 
Just then the door opened.. 
Ragini looks on... her eyes became bigger and she started sweating and sobbing...
Camera shows someone from bottom to top (played by Zain Imam)... he was wearing black leather boots, jeans with belt and a black t-shirt... he had a silver necklace with a big "V"... around his neck..
He made a gesture with the hand and the goons in the room went out... 
The guy came towards Ragini and knelt in front of her... he smirked looking at her and passed a hand on her cheek... Ragini closed her eyes tightly...
The guy smirked again: You know Ragini... jab tum mujhse darti ho na.. to tum aur bhi khoobsurat lagti ho...  - he took his face closer to Ragini who turned her face on the other face closing her eyes more tightly... 
Guy: Arey.. don't worry.. dil to karta hai abhi tumhe apna bana lu.. lekin kya karey... I am a gentleman... aise tumare sath zabardasti thodi na kar sagta... jab tak tum khud mujhse shaadi karne ke liye tayaar nehi ho jaati tab tak mein kuch nehi karu ga..  
A sob came out from Ragini's mouth...
The guy immediately cupped her face making her look at him: Ragini? Tum ro rahi ho?? Kya hua?? - he looked at her tied hands and feet - mein bhi na! aise bandi hui ho... dukh to hoga hi na..
He immediately untied the rope that was tying Ragini and made her stand holding her hands..
The guy looked at Ragini's wrist.. there were the signs of the rope: Chodu ga nehi mein inhey!! Meri Ragini ko chot paunchaai!! Himmat kaisey hui inki!! Jaan le loonga in logo ki!!! 
He was about to go but Ragini stopped him..
Ragini: Nehi... hamari vajah sai kisi ki jaan nehi jaani chahi hai... aur ham aapkey nehi hai! Aur aap jaise rakshas kai sath shaadi karney ka soch bhi nehi sakti!!
The guy's eyes became reddish for rage.. he slapped Ragini hardly making her fall on the ground..
A tear from Ragini's eye fell on the ground... she started to laugh..
The guy looked at her confused..
Ragini: Abh aap kya khudki jaan lainghey?... voh kya hai na.. aapne bhi abhi hame chot paunchaaai hai... aur voh aap hi the na jo hame aag pai chalne ke liye us club mai bheja tha... 
The guy clenched his fists: Shut up Ragini!!! - he sat near Ragini and shook her holding her by shoulders - tum samjhti kyu nehi ki mein tumse kitna pyaar karta hu?!!!
He stood up and looked at the other side: Vijay naam hai mera... jeetna mera kaam hai! Aaj tak kisi ne bhi mujhe na kehne ki himmat nehi ki.. aur jo bhi mere khilaf jaata hai usey mein us club mai bhejta hu.. vaha usey sabak sikhaata hu... tumne mujhe na kahi hai Ragini! Vijay ko! Aur Vijay ko yeh baat pasand nehi aai.. lekin.. - he turned towards Ragini again and sat in front of her-  iska matlab yeh nehi ki mein tumhe pasand nehi karta!... Mera pyaar saccha hai!
Ragini: Yeh tumara pyaar nehi pagalpan hai, zid hai.. yeh sab ek tumari bohat badi galti hai!! 
Vijay slapped her again.. Ragini screamed..
Vijay immediately cupped her face again: Ragini! Tumhe chot to nehi laghi?! Thik to ho na! I am sorry.. lekin tumhe pata hai na ki jab mujhe gussa charta hai to mujhse aisi galtyiaan hoti hai.. lekin mein vaada karta hu.. jab tum mujhse shaadi karlo ghi na... mein yeh sab chod doonga...
Ragini: Nafrat kartey hai tumse! Aur agar tumse shaadi karli to khud sai nafrat karne laghey ghe! 
Vijay: Nehi Ragini.. aisa mat bolo.. mein tumare liye kuch bhi kar sagta... tumhe kya chahi hai? Paisa, jewellery, sona, gaadi... jo bhi chahi hai tumhe mein doonga! Kisi cheez ki kami nehi hone doonga!
Ragini: Tum hamara sath khareedne ki koshish kar rahe ho Vijay?!
Vijay: Agar tumhe aisa lagta hai to aisa hi socho.. tumare sath ke liye mein kuch bhi bheec sagta hu.. tum bas haan kehdo!
Ragini: Hamare sath khareedne ke liye tum apni zindaghi bheec sagtey ho?! 
Vijay didn't say anything... after a while he stood up and went towards Sanskar.. he looked at him with angriness and hatred: Iskey liye tum mujhe thukra rahi hu na?! Chodu ga nehi mein is sai!! Maar daalu ga saale ko!! 
He grabbed Sanskar's collar and was about to punch him when Ragini held his arm: Nehi!
Vijay angrily looked at her: yehi hai na voh vajah jiskey liye tum mujhe na bol rahi ho?! Yehi hai na tumara so kodey ka aashiq?!
Ragini: Ham to isey jaantey bhi nehi hai!
Vijay: Jhoot! Agar tum isey jaanti nehi ho to kyu isne tumhe bachaaya?!
Ragini: Kyu ki yeh insaan hai! Insaaniat hai isme! Kisi ka dard yeh mehsus kar sagtey hai... tumare jaisa jaanwar nehi hai!!
Vijay: Insaan to mar bhi jaatey hai na... aur agar yeh tumara kuch bhi nehi lagta to isey maar daita hu... tumhe kya faraq padta hai na?!
Ragini: Nehi! Ino ne hamari zindaghi bachaai hai!
Vijay: To is liye yeh tumari zindaghi ban gaya? Ragini kaash tum meri mohabbat ko samjh paati.. to aaj ham dono sath khush hotey.. lekin tumne isko hamare bich laa kar asha nehi kiya!
Ragini: Kash tum hamari zindaghi mai nehi aate.. lekin kya hai na.. har cheezeein hasil nehi ki jaa sagti.. yeh "Kaash.." kabhi kabhi bich mai aa jaata hai..
Vijay held her wrist tightly and pulled her towards him: Ragini tum zyaada bolne laghi ho.. mein hamare pyaar ki kadar kar raha hu aur chup hu... nehi to tumhe paata agar mere andar ka asli jaanwar bahar aa gaya.. to bohat bura hoga..
Sanskar slowly opened his eyes... his vision was blur... he tried to move his hands to rub his eyes but realized that he wasn't able to do so... he opened his eyes fully... and the first thing he saw was the closeness between Vijay and Ragini... 
Sanskar looked around and found himself tied... he tried to free himself: Yeh.. yeh kya ho ra ha hai?! Mujhe yaha kyu lai kar aaye?!
Vijay left Ragini and looked at Sanskar: Oh.. to Maha Raja Ji ki aankh khul hi gai.. dhuk ho raha yeh kehte kehte ki abh hamesha ke liye band hone wali hai!!
He took a knife from his belt and angrily moved it towards Sanskar but before he could stab him Ragini came between... Vijay stopped immediately.. 
Vijay: Ragini hato!
Ragini: Nehi Vijay! Tumhe hamari kasam!! Chod do isey!
Sanskar was looking at them confused... 
Vijay: Who is he?
Ragini: He is.. no one..
Sanskar looked at her.. 
Vijay angrily threw away the knife and went away...
Ragini immediately took the knife and cut the robe that was tying Sanskar.. Sanskar stared at her..
Tears were flowing down from Ragini's eyes: Aap thik to ho na?
Sanskar smiled: Aaj aapki vajah sai 2 haaste hue mere sath... lekin ek sai aapne hi bachaya... so thank you..
Ragini looked down: I am sorry... hamari vajah sai aaj aapkey sath itna kuch hua...
Sanskar: Aap sorry mato boliye please... to kya hua.. mujhe thoda sa kast uthana pea.. lekin zinda to hu na... aur jab tak zinda hu tab tak.. no tension... - he smiled to Ragini to cheer her mood up..
Ragini: Aap kuch zyaada hi optimist nehi ho... kabhi kabhi itna light-hearted hona asha nehi hota..
Sanskar stood up almost with a jump: Jeene kai hai 4 din baaki hai baikaar din... yehi zindaghi ka usool hai... usool banaya hai to.. nibhana to padega nehi?
Ragini gave him a bitter smile and then looked down again..
Sanskar: Vaise ham kaha hai?.. voh abh jo hona tha ho gaya... abh ghar bhi to jaana padega.. mere dost ko koi to pata batana padega..
Ragini: Ham club kai back side mai hai..
Sanskar: Ok...  - he took his phone out from his pocket and called Omi - haan Omi... yaar choti si problem ho gai thi.. and I am coming out of the club.. ghaadi lai kar vahi hi aa jaana.. mein tumara vahi intezaar kar raha hu.. - he cut the call and turned towards Ragini - Aapko ghar drop kardu?.. raat zyaada hoghi hai to aapka akela jaana sehi nehi hoga..
Ragini: Aapko suddenly kisi ne kidnap kiya.. aapko hosh aai to ek ladka aapko maarne wala tha... aur aapne hamse ek question bhi nehi pucha?! 
Sanskar: yeh aapki life hai.. jisme do pal ke liye mujhe aana pada.. lekin mein us type ka insaan nehi hu jo kisi kai personal baatein mai interest hai.. haan.. agar koi ajnaabhi ki help karney ki baat hai to mein hazir... vaise mene ek question pucha to hai abhi... aapko ghar drop kardu?..
Ragini smiled: answer bhi to aapne hi de diya.. Raat zyaada ho gai hai.. to hamara akela jaana safe nehi hoga... 
Sanskar smiled and the 2 went out of the room..
After a while..
Omi came with a car that was seeming 2nd hand to take Ragini and Sanskar...
They sat inside silently.. 
Omi was driving and Sanskar was sitting next to him while Ragini was sitting on the back seat.. 
Sanskar was continuosly looking at Ragini through the mirror while she was looking down... 
Sanskar: Aap kaha rehti ho?..
Ragini: Voh... bas yaha sai right and then sidaa... road kai end mai hamara ghar hai...
Sanskar: ok...
Omi drove till Ragini's house and they left her there..
As soon as Ragini went away Omi turned towards Sanskar: Abh bataa.. ho kya gaya hai tumhe?! Kaha tha itni dair tak?! Ek minut ke liye tumhe iske sath kya chod diya tum to pata nehi kaha chaley ghe!..
Sanskar: Arey kuch nehi yaar.. tum ghar jaa.. neend aa rahi hai..
Omi started the car grumpfing: Asha hai... aaj ek ladki ki vajah sai mujhe ignore kar raha hai na.. dekhna jab ladki ko patana padega to mere paas hi aayega..
Sanskar: Omi yaar thodi si akal ki baat bhi kar liya kar!
Omi laughed lightly..
The next day...
Sanskar and Omi were going somewhere in their car when they saw a lot of people gathered in front of Ragini's house... 
Sanskar: Omi ghaadi roko! 
Omi: Kya hua?
Sanskar: I said ghaadi roko!
Omi immediately stopped the car and Sanskar fastly came out of the car.. 
Sanskar made his way among the people and is shocked to see the house burning in fire and smoke..
Sanskar: Yeh kya ho raha hai?!
Man: Pata nehi yeh sab kaise hua.. Gadodia Parivaar ka ghar hai... Sharmishta ji aur Shekhar ji ko to mene dekha subah subah kahi jaatey lekin unki bityiaa abhi bhi andar hi hai.. abh pata nehi kaise bahar aaye ghi... Bhagwaan hi bacha sagtey hai abh..
Sanskar recalled Ragini backing off from the fire bed: unhe aag sai dar lagta hai..
Man: Ji?
Sanskar didn't reply and ran inside the house without caring about the fire that was increasing..
Omi came there and saw him: Sanskar!! - but Sanskar was gone... 
Omi: Jaldi sai koi kuch karo... Sanskar ko bachana padega!! Arey yaha khadey mera mu kya dekh rahe ho!! Jaldi koi firefighters ko bulaao.. police.. ambulance.. kuch to karo!!! 
The man near him immediately called the firefighters..
Sanskar was inside and was trying to make his way among the flames: Koi haiii?!!! 
He didn't even know the girl's name.. what he could do?! 
Sanskar: Koii haaii!?!! Suniye agar yaha koi hai to please kuch bolo... mein aap tak paunch saku..
Just then he saw a girl lying unconsciouss on the ground... the dupatta was covering her face...
Sanskar ran towards her and removed the dupatta from her face.. it was Ragini..
Sanskar looked around and saw the wardrobe near them burning... the flames were too big and the wood of the wardrobe could fall on them..
Sanskar fastly covered Ragini with her dupatta but just then he saw the wood that was about to fall on them...
He immediately took Ragini in his arms and rolled over himself lying on the ground... 
He stood up taking Ragini in his arms and started to walk among the fire paying attention on Ragini to not get hurt..
He finally get succesfull to take her out...
They came outside where the crowd started to clap seeing Ragini in Sanskar's arms..
Sanskar's eyes were only for Ragini.. 
Omi ran towards Sanskar: Sanskar ho kya gaya hai tumhe yaar?! Yeh ladki hai.. not the award for the best singer.. iske liye tum mar kyu rahe ho?!
Sanskar: Ladki hai is liye... Omi tum please yaha kaam sambhalo.. mein isey ghar lai kar jaata hu...
Omi: Tum mera dost nehi bhai hai is liye maan raha hu.. varna mein aaj tumhe chodta nehi.. 
Sanskar gave him a bitter smile and went towards the car making his way among the crowd..
He placed Ragini on the seat and sat next to her... he started to drive..
Later... 
In a little bit dark, simple room:
Ragini, who was lying on a humble bed, slowly opened her eyes and looked around... through her blur vision she saw someone sitting next to him...
She rubbed her eyes with her fists and tried to get up but started to cough...
The someone in front of her immediately gave her a glass of water and made her drink it putting a hand on her back...
Ragini drank the water and took a deep breath closing her eyes... then she opened them and saw Sanskar's face in front of her clearly: Aap?!... aapne hamari jaan bachaai..
Sanskar: Lagta to aisa hi hai.. by the way.. mujhe lagta aap hi voh ajnabhi ho jisko meri help ki zaroort hai.. kismat hame baar baar mila rahi hai.. so asha hoga agar hame ek dusre ka naam to pata chaley hai na?.. I am Sanskar.. nice to meet you... - he forwarded his hand toward Ragini... 
Ragini looked at it for a while and then said: Kehte hai anjaan logo sai.. khaas kar kai mardoon sai.. hath nehi millate.. 
Sanskar smiled: Log kuch zyaada hi kehne laghey hai.. lagta hai aap hamari dost nehi ban na chahtey..
Ragini: Aisi baat nehi hai ki ham ban na nehi chahte.. ham kisi kai dost ban nehi sagtey... - jus then he realized where he was... he started to look around and sweating... she was trembling..
Sanskar was confused to see her in this state.. he held her shoulders: Aap thik to hai?..
Ragini pushed his hands away shouting: Nehi!! Aap hame hath mat lagaye! Aapne hamari jaan bachaai... thank you.. lekin hame jaana hoga.. ham yaha nehi reh sagtey.. aapke liye asha nehi hoga..
She stood up and set her dupatta muttering: Aapne asha nehi kiya hame yaha laa kar.. - she wasn't looking at Sanskar who was still sitting on the bed and looking at her confused...
Ragini was about to go when Sanskar held her dupatta from behind.. Ragini closed her eyes while tears flew down from her eyes: Yeh aap acha nehi kar rahe.. jitna aap hamse nazdik aaye ghe... utna hi zindaghi sai dur jaaye ghe...
Sanskar: aap hamesha yeh dupatte waley suit pehnte hai?..
Ragini turned: Ji?
Sanskar: nehi mein soch raha tha... aap mujhse hath to nehi milaana chahte.. kyu ki aap yeh nehi chahte ki koi aapko chue hai... lekin aap mujhse dosti to karna chahte hai.. to phir aaj sai.. aap meri dupatte wali dost...
Ragini looked at his smile for a while... without any expression on her face.. then a bitter smile appeared on her lips and soon it turned in a sweet laughter.. which she hided covering her mouth with her hand...
Sanskar started to laugh too along with her... 
Ragini was continuing to laugh... when Sanskar slowly stopped and looked at her... she was looking so angelic while laughing.. so beautiful... her eyes..which became little as she use to close them halfly while laughing... and her laughter.. it was music for Sanskar's ears.. he looked at the corner of her dupatta in his hand and an unknown smile appeared on his face...
Sanskar: Aapko pata hai aap haste hue bohat ashi lagti hai...
Ragini stopped laughing... but a smile remained on her face: Sacchi?..
Sanskar nodded: Mucchi..
Ragini: Lekin hame hasne ka mauka aur hamari hasi ko vajah kabhi kabhi hi milti hai... aaj ham pehli baar dil khol kar hasey hai.. thanks to you.. 
Sanskar: Asha?... lekin yeh to galat baat hai.. hasna sehat ke liye bohat asha hota hai.. kabhi suna nehi aapne?
Ragini: Aap kabhi dukhi nehi hue right?
Sanskar: kabhi nehi.. dukhi hone ki vajah hi kabhi nehi aai... Maa jaane sai pehle keh kar gai thi.. ki hamare aansu bohat keemti hotey hai... isi liye zyaada rona nehi chahi hai.. banda gareeb ho jaata hai.. 
Ragini: Aapki Maa kaha hai?
Sanskar: Papa kai paas..
Ragini: aur aapke papa?
Sanskar: Bhagwan kai paas.
Ragini looks on.. 
Sanskar: Meri Maa anparh thi.. lekin maa bhaley hi pari likhi na ho.. lekin duniya ki har zaroori baat ham maa sai hi seekhtey hai...
Ragini looked down.. after a minute of silence she said: Aap kabhi pyaar aur nafrat kai raastey mai nehi padey na?
Sanskar sat on the bed: nehi.. nafrat to puri duniya mujhse kar nehi sagti.. aur mein un kaamon mai dihaan nehi daita jisme duniya ka interest na ho.. kyu ki uska matlab hai voh itni important nehi hai.. aur pyaar.. mohabbat abhi hui nehi...
Ragini sat near him: Asha hai.. mohabbat bohat dukh daiti hai..
Sanskar shook his head and stood up walking ahed: Mohabbat dukh nehi daiti.. bas umeedeey maar daiti hai ... isi liye ham pyaar ki baatey kam hi kartey hai.. aur mera maan na hai ki ham sab ko duniya ki har khushi ka haq hai.. ek bar haq jataa kar to dekhna chahi hai..
Ragini: Hamara yeh maan na nehi hai..
Sanskar turned: Aap yeh na maan ne ko majboor ho na?..
Ragini looks on: Ji?..
Sanskar: Koi cheez hai jo aapko yeh na maan ne ko majboor kar rahi hai.. 
Ragini: Aap yeh kaise keh sagtey hai?..
Sanskar: Aapki aankhein bohat khoobsurat hai.. sacchi hai.. sab batati hai..
Ragini looks at him...
Episode ends..
Will Ragini tell to Sanskar her life's truth?.. What is exactly her life's truth?... 
Precap: kuch kuch meetha.. kuch kuch khatta..

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Thank you Rup can't wait to read it

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