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**MaNan ff - Sab tera updated EPILOUGE pg 34 ** (Page 23)

reet0143 Senior Member
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Posted: 03 May 2016 at 4:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kyaramalhotra

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Originally posted by kyaramalhotra

Originally posted by reet0143

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">oye ladoo kaisi hai ab tu,,,,,,,,</font>
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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">tujhe hospital jyada pasand a gaya ya vo nurse tujhe jyada achi lagi jo dobara se hospitalised ho gayi,,,,,,,,,,</font>
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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">dhyan nahi rakh sakti kya apna...</font>
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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">happy bday to mom vaise,,,,,,,,,,,</font>
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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">excited hona achi baat hai ,.,</font>
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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">but itni uchal kood karne ki kya jarurat thi tujhe,,,,,,,,,</font>
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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">ab phir se pain hone lag gaya na,,,,,,,,,</font>
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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">mujhe to kitten se pata chala...</font>
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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">itmi careless kyun hoti hai baby tu,,,,,,,,</font>
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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">u know na we can't see u in the pain got damm it...</font>
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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">arghh am so angry on u...</font>
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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">thik to hai na tu kiddo...jyada serios to nahi hai na???</font>
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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">pls yaar apna khyal rakh...thode din rest karle uske baad jitni masti karni hai kar lena...</font>
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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">phir chahe marathon mein bhi part le lena but pehle thik hoja pls...</font>
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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">i love u lot baby,,,,,,,,,,pls take care,,,,,,,,,,,,i so wanna talk to u ...send me ur contact details in pm...</font>

ohho meri siyaapa queesn chill am perfectlyy fine..bas mediciene skip ho gya tha thats why pain ho rha tha..m tottally ohhkay chill .. Smile


lekin skip hui hi kyun,,,,,,,,,,ab na i think har time tere piche kisi ko chodna padega...kyunki tu ta apna khyal rakhne se rahi,,,,,,,,next time aisa caeless behaviour dekha na maine tera i'll kill u by myself...no no i can't kill u because i love u...but ha daant daant k maar dungi tujhe main...tu pakka thik hai na??? ya fir main kitten se puchu...because she will definetely tell me ...

hehe aww my sissy ab m apna pua dhayan rakhungii my siyaapa queen..and yess kitten ko mai kitten boltii hu plzz use kitten mat bolo give her new nicknamee..like unique cute sweet ..i love u my sissy ..m feeling so protective with u guyzz thank uu thank u soo much


cupcake naam kaisa rahega...actually uska name mujhe yaas nahi tha na to.isiliye kitten bola...

haha thats cute my sissy love uu..and chill tumne koi crime nhi kiya haiLOL

MAINE RAKHA HAI CUTE TO HOGA HI...LOLLOL.JOKES APART...AM HAPPY THAT U LIKED IT,,,,,,AND APNI KITTEN KO AB BATA DENA K MAINE USE EK NEW NAME DIYA HAI...AND THANK GOD TUJHE LAGTA HAI K MAINE CRIME NAHI KIYA...MUJHE TO LAGA THA AB IS JURM KI SAJA ME MISS LADOO MUJHE SAJAYE MAUT KI SAJA SUNANE WALI HAI...BACH GAYI,,,,,D'oh...ROFLSilly...I LOVE U MORE MERI JAAN...LOVE U LOTS...MUUUAAHHH...GET WELL SOON HONEYPOT

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Chapter 4

Manikk pov

Ohh  manikk I miss u ...she said hugging me more cozily I just wanna push her.. ve..veebha I said I look toward nandini she is smiling but the smile is not reaching her eyes  she look toward me I blink my eyes and she gave smile which always fill my heart with love..i forcefully broke the hug afcorse am uncomfortable that's only my nandu's right hii veebha I said smiling afcorse fake am not nice to meet her she again lean toward me...

Manikk suddenly I hear my buddies voice cabir dhruv alya I smile ahh they are my saviour and they all jump on mee  guyzz I cant breath I said aww they love me soo much  and they release me but in second they  they push me and hug nandini matlab in a moment they are in extremely love with me than other moment am a forgot thing huhh...

**No one pov..**

Ohh my god nandini u r soo beautifull all time chirping alya said hugging nandini.. nandnin smile with twinkling eyes  and hug her back aree bhabhi kiski hai cabir said and side hug nandini to which nandini chuckle  afcorse meri dhruv completed and nandini giggle..manikk release nandini frm them Ohho guyzz shutup.. nandini he is cabir pointed toward cabir she is alya and he is dhruv my buddies nandini smile and guyzz she is nandini manikkk said griining to which everyone giggle and nandini  blush we kno that manikk cabir said  and they again laugh ..suddenly veebha came and stood beside manikk closely.. she held manik's arm ohh come on manikkk  mai london se tumhare liye aai hu and u r not even talking with me she said like a innocent girl which is more looking like fox in mask of sheep.. manikk made a distance from her ohh hiii vebbha kaise ho tum he ask awkwardly she move closure to him ab thik hu she said cheesily there was awkward silence there to cool the atmosphere nandini clear her throat umm hii am nandini she introduce herself with warm smile  veebha look toward nandini as in she is some commoner veebha !!she said in not interested tone to which nandini frown .. manikk  grimaced look toward veebha but she ignore it tottalyy..  manikk look toward nandini with helpless look she smile half heartly ...

Aree mere bacche aa gye nyonika came wiping her hands with towel she side hug nandini baccho mile meri  nandu se they all smile and veebha roll her eyes chaloo abhi sab khana kha lo  and bacche toward manikk and nandini be ready with ur answer nyonika said and left from there after pecking nandini's forehead.

Manikk turn toward his friends toh uncle aunty kab aa rhe haii he ask cabir was about to answer for what veebha ask  they all look toward as she is an alien aachu suddenly they hear voice ..they turn and saw navya all wet becoz of rain sneezing aachu ..nandini side hug her navuu are u fine .. ..madam ne baarish mai khade hoke cold drink piya hai or kya expect karrhi ho abhi came  from back wwith muktii they all giggle while navya huff  .. than abhi saw everybody aree hello tum sab aagye sorry wo mai receive karne aane waala tha par .. muktii cut him parr merii wajah se nhii aa paya  sorry they all smile..ye mere bhai hai abhimanyu she is muktii my bhabhi and she is navya who is sneezing  ...

Hiii aachu navya said  cabir and dhruv hug abhi while alya hug muktii ... chalo jaoo navya go and change ..  and guyzz u go fresh up fir dinner karlete hai.. abhi said  smiling one by one thay left .. manikk and  nandini look at eachother and  smile..than they left.. manikk was abt to walk but veebha held his arm umm manikk wait manikk freed his arm what veebha he ask tottaly iriitatated u are marring that girl veebha ask  ohh come on manikk your taste is not that bad that's it for manikk mind ur language veebha otherwise I'll forgot that  u are my childhood friend..his eyes where showing anger which shook veebha yes am marrying her and she is nandini .. my nandini not any common girl like u he said with anger in his voice and left from there leaving  a froze veebha..

On the other side nandini over hear their every conversation ..  her heart is beating fastlyy .. she cant express her feeling.. she have tears in her eyes .. tears of happiness she run toward her  bedroom ...

**Nandini's pov**

I love him I love manikk .. yess ..the way he treat me it feels soo special ..  now I can never imagine my life without him ..  he .. hee too loves me .. or mai dumb itna time laga diya apni feelings ko samajhne mai huhh stupid nandini ... the way he said my nandini I feel so protective  .. he is really special for me becoz I .. I love him ohh am feeling soo good..  my life became soo colourfull I love u manikk...

                                              Knok knok

Kanna come fast  sab intezar karrhe hai I hear amms voice aarhi hu amms I also shout I quickly glance myself in mirror and left giggling damn watt happened to me aiyaapa help me !!

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After dinner they all were sitting in lounge nandini and mukti came with tray of payasm .. the blush is not leaving nandini's face and veebha is not leaving a single chance to get close with manikk which is irking not only manikk and nandini but their friends too ..manikk saw nandini he grin and gave her bright smie to which she smile too.. they serve payasam . mukti sat beside avantika and nyonika cabir dhruv and abhi they are sitting together navya is busy with alya  and veebha  and manikk was sitting alone nandini took her payasam and was searcing place to sit ..manikk signal her to sit beside him she smile and walk toward but before she can sit veebha came and sat beside manikk .. manikk glare her but she ignore it .. he look toward nandini her face have hurt expression but still she force a smile on her face and sat beside navya and alya and mukti also join them..

Manikk is continuoslyy looking toward nandini's face  and she  is hiding her hurt face with smile.. veebha is continuoslyy poking manikk .. nandini beta plzz sit beside manikk suddenly nyonika said to which manikk grin and veebha anger rose..why aunty veebha  ask in irritate tone they all look toward in shock why not beta avantika ask her calmly nothing aunty she move frm there and nandini sat beside manikk and they smile raj started the conversation beta we want to kno ur answer manikk and nandini they both look upward toward their parents harish said beta tum donoo jo kahoge hu wohi karenge manikk look toward nandini than daad wo umm .. we are ready suddenly nandini said  mannikk look toward her in shock which soon turn into smile they all got up and congratulate them between this veebha left from there angrily manikk and nandini they both were glancing eachother with a sligh tint of blush..

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Manikk pov.

Life could be this better I never imagine nandini se milne se pehle  my life was good happy also when when she step in my life it became magicall colourfull it became heaven I cant imagine my life without her no not for a second yess I .. I love nandini ... my happiness have no boundaries am soo happy am in love with my nandu..we came inside hand in hand .. I cant believe  day after tomorrow she will be mine forever humeska k liye ohh god amm soo happy .. I fall  on bed ... finnaly the love of my life is going to be mine forever .. wait I have to do something with this veebha  becoz of her my nandu is sad I can see that in her eyes..

Cabir pov..

Ohh finnaly my bro is going to marry  am soo soo soo happy for him that I cant express ..  nandini she is such a sweetheart  she is perfect for my broo the way theu look at  eachother ahh I got my bhabhi uff kitni acchi feeling aa rhi hai bhagwaan hayyye.

And that girll kya naam tha uska umm navyaa kitnii cute hai na the way she was sneezing her red nose shivering body hayye I think I love her uff  navyaa kya kardiya tumne mujhee  .. umm mujhe manikk se baat karni hogii abt navyaa uske shadi k sath sath mai bhi kar lunga nice pplan mr. cabir dhawan I like it..

Ye mujhe kya ho rha hai .. kya ho rha hai  ohh am thirsty pyas lagi  hai mujhe chal betta pani peeke aate haii ..'ohh zara zara touch me touch me touch me ohh zara zara'  ye kitchen mai kon haii .. I peep inside and there I saw meri madhubala se bhi khuubsurat navya jii hayyy maar daala..i grinnn I slowly tip toed walk toward her and booo I shout and expected she jump in horror uff aiyyapa  she sigh soo cutee cabir ji she greeted her teeth I chuckle and she  smile aap yha kya karrhi hai navya jii  as usual  she blush I like it.. navya u r eating ice cream I shout she held my hand relax dheere bolo  abhi bhai daatenge she said huhh like seriously jaise mai chod dunga u r not eating this samjhii .. I yell I cant believe why she ask continuing the argument and I have no words umm u were sneezing sooo bhigi billi kahika she huff and left from there aare navya ahhm navya ji sunno but she left jai mata di..

Nandini pov..

I cant believe am going to  be mrs. Malhotra .. day after tommoroww .. amm nervous no no am not nervous at all arrghh my hands are too cold that's means am nervous ohh aiyappa but more than that am happy amm soo happy .. yes I love manikk yess.. I have too confess him .. but when ..before marriage no after marriage umm wait let him confess first than I will.. ohh aiyappa thank u soo much for everything really ..  mujhe use baat karni hai but how .. I will talk to him tomorrow .. neend toh nhii aarhi thoda payasam kha  leti hu I grin payasam is my fav  lets go miss murthy..

No one pov..

Sleep is far away from both manikk and nandini here nandini is busy relishing payasam but tottalyy lost in manikk thoughts and manikk is also busy in his nandini's la la land roaming here and there ...

He was passing by kitchen  but stop when he saw the most cutest scenario  in front of him nandini is sitting on kitchen slap and eating payasam by her hands making cute faces..

Manikk pov..

Ohh my nandu she is such a kid heart such a cuteness and yes she is only mine this thought always fill my heart with proud love and what not I just love  her .. I think she also .. I shook my head and walk toward her ..

No one pov..

Ahhm ahhm manikkk clear his throat and nandini jump on her place  and sigh ohh thank god tum ho she said licking her finger and manikk chuci hokle toh  yaha kya karrh he ask taking bowl from her hand she gave him sarcastic smile wo mai marathon ki practice karhi thi she said snatching bowl .. manikk again sanatch the bowl arree am ur future husband .. we should share it he said with smirk enough to make her cheeks red she shrug future husband ohhk  abhii ye mera  hai she again snatch the bowl and again start  eating to which manikk make pout she look toward him ohhk fine ye lo she said he brightly smile .. which soon turn into smirk and nandini raise her eyebrow he slowly lean toward her  making her heart beat stop .. their lips were inches away from eachother ..manikk slowly kiss her near her lip where some payasam  were stick .. good night my future wify he said huskily near her ear and left from there hiding his blush here nandini face looking like tomato  her whole body is shivering she slowoly open her eyes and shyly blush..

At morning murthy villa is totally decorated with flowers after all its their  daughter's wedding.. everycorner of villa is decorated beautifully  south Indian style with mix punjabi.

. everybody is running here and there  preparing for mehendi ceremony .. they all are in 9th cloud except one who is burning in jealousy that's is veebha she is doing everypossible thing to create misunderstanding between manik and nandini .. but who cares they are in immence love with eachother...

In manikk room

He is standing in front of mirror wearing white kurta payjama  combing hair whistling suddenly someone came from back and hug him he turn push her whats wrong with u veebha .. problem kya hai tumharrii . I respect u that doesn't mean tum kuch bhii karogii .. veebha stood up whats wrong with me manikk ?? whats wrong with u ?? how can u marry that's bitc .. before she  can complt someone  slap her hard ..that's nyonika how dare u veebha .. tumharii himmat kaise hui meri beti k bare mai aise bolne ki .. nyonika's eyes were spiiting anger and veebha is standing there holding her cheek .. mom mom relax kuch nhi hua hai its ohhk  manikkk said hugging his mom get out veebha otherwise the result will be worst nyonika said and veebha left frm there tapping her feet..

Whats wrong with her manikk nyonika ask tottalyy frustrated I don't kno mom but plzz u relax manic said  smiling .. finnaly nyyonika smile she peck his forhead tu khush hai na mere bacche he smile .. nhi tu khush nhii haii bohot khush hai she said .and the son mother duo laugh I love u mom he said I love u to mere bacche ...

Outside**

Mukti and navya they both are dezining heena on nandini's palm and teasing her


.. alya  is dancing with some girls and dhruv is serving juices their parents also arrived and relatives also .. cabir is busy in navya's land..

Harish and raj they both are busy in talking laughing and the mmost eating .. avantika and nyonika they both are with some ladies near nandini ... manikk came outside folding his sleeves .. he look toward nandini and his eyes got locked in her he got mesmerized by her beauty  .. she is laughing and blushing because of navya's and mukti's tease ... Manikk is smiling like idiot .. suddenly nandini felt gaze on her she look toward direction and found manikk looking toward her with smile . she shyly look down . he walk toward her with abhimanyu ..

Are manikk tumhe bhi mehendi lagani hai kya muktii tease him to which everyone laugh including nandini  muktii tumhari shadi hone do fir mai tumhe bata hu manikk said and they all burst in laughter and muktii blush aaha not more than abhimanyu mai toh yaha  mehendi dekhne aaya tha  manik said looking toward nandini nandini shyly look down ..

Umm mai aati hu pyas lagi hai nandini said  and left frm there  cabir alya and dhruv came there manikk nandini gyii tu yaha kya karrha haii  dhruv said manikk was looking here and there mai .. wo maii maii .. umm papa bula rahe hai by and he left frm there and they all burst in laughter..

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Aiyyo ab mai ye glass kaise uthau she said .. uff aiyyapa help me suddenly suddenly glass appeared in front of her she look up and saw manik  .. he make her drink water .. she tries to wipe her mouth he took a tissue paper and wipe her mouth .. she smile thank u .. pleasure is all mine future wify he said.. she shyly smile she was about to walk  suno he said she turn ha .. mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai he said nervously she smile kaho .. wo mujhe .. mujhe ye kehna hai kii .. nandini avantika call her aai ma and she left frm there giggling..

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They all are getting ready as amm said that they have to vivit aiyyapa's temple before marriage .. so youngers are driving by car and elders are in train.After taking blessings from aiyyapa they left .. this time youngers in train and elders in car.. nyonika tried to took veebha with them but raj stop her and let veebha go in train..

In train nandini is standing near  door outside its raining .. I love rain suddenly she hear manik voice she turn and saw him she smile I also she said.. u kno baarish hi wo cheez hai jisne mujhe tumse milaya he said she shyly look outside  he came in front of her mai tumhe kabhi khona nhii chahta nandini he said looking deeply in her eyes she also got lost in his deep brown eyes  tum meri zindagi ho he said leaning toward  .. suddenly the train stop with jurk and they both colllid with eacother in hugging position I .. I love u nandini he said nuzzeling in her hairs .. she smile still hugging ..they slowly broke the hug she smile and runn outside..

Cham cham cham.. 

Zulfon se bandh liya dil          (she started singing looking toward manikk)
Seene pe se udne laga aanchal (everyone came ouside frm train and manikk is smiling brightlyy)
Mujhse naina mila ke              (she move her hands near her eyes)
Mausam hone lagge paagal
     (navya alya and mukti join her while the boyzz were enjoyinggg smiling)


Sabse hoke befikar                  (she sang  shrugging her hand)
Nachun main aaj cham cham cham (hey!)
Cham cham cham
Cham cham cham..
                  (they all did the signature step of  this song )

Main nachun aaj cham cham cham (hey!)       (she again sang and this time other passenger also join her and manikk  ruffle his hair )
Cham cham cham
Cham cham cham..

Rain drop bouncing                (manikk  abhi and cabir did some steps and sand this song enjoying)
My heart is announcing
You got to take me away

Let's start jumping                  (nandini and girls join them )
My heart goes pumping          (they move with rythmm smiling at eachother)
I love you in every way          (while dancing manikk and nandini got close to eachother )


Dhadkano pe boondein jo giri  (he sang looking in nandini's eyes )
Toh nachun aaj cham cham cham (hey!)         (she broke his trance by singing )
Cham cham cham
Cham cham cham..

Main nachun aaj cham cham cham (hey!)       (they again did the signature step of this song including boyz)
Cham cham cham
Cham cham cham..

Baarishon ki taal pe yeh     (she took some water droplets in her palm and slpash on herself)
Khanak mere dhadkano ki  (manikk laugh at her craziness)
Keh rahi hai jee le tu zara
    (she  look toward him and gigglr)

Baar baar saath mere   (she took mukti's hand )
Saare ab thirakne lage  (and twirl her and muktii land on abhi's armm)
Dole zameen naache aasman  (nandini open her arms and feels the rain drops on her face  )


Main toh hawa hun                 (she walk toward manikk .. and manikk was about to hold her)
Hath na aaun                           (but she run frm there giggling and manikk rufflr his hair)
Marzi se apni, udti hi jaaun     (she jump like a free bird enjoying whole heartlyy .. her brother abhi is soo happy watching his baby sister happy)

Ho khud ki karun main kya taarife  (again girls start dancing.. nandini sang those lines and manikk cross his arms with smirkk)
Raat ne churaya mera kaajal               (she make pout while singing)
Mujhse naina mila ke                          (she again pointed toward her eyes)
Mausam hone lagge pagal                  

Sabse hoke befikar                  (she again shrug and dace crazilly)

Nachun main aaj cham cham cham (hey!) (they all again did the signature steps all this while veebha  was fuming in anger and jealousyyy)
Cham cham cham
Cham cham cham cham cham..(x2)

Cham cham...                         (they all started dancing .. doing weird steps..)
Sab naache aaj
Cham cham cham..

They all were dancing crazily cabir is dancing with navya doing weird steps ambhi with muktii alya and dhruv they all were enjoying rain manikk and nandini they are also dancing crazily playing with water abhii grab nandini's hand and nandini turn toward abhi and dance crazily .. veebha agrilyy walk toward manikk .. she grabb his arm and drag him frm there .. while the others were dancing..

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The rain has stop and they were sitting on station's bench having tea.. suddenly nandini came adjusting her duppata bhai manikk kaha haii she ask abhimanyuu I don't kno nandu dekho yahi kahi hoga he said.. or ye veebha bhi nhii dikh rhi hai pata nhi kaha haii dhruvv said making faces  .. mukti I wanna go washroom plzz  come with me alya said mukti smile and stood up ruko am also coming navya said and they left frm there don't worry nandini wo yahi kahi hoga cabir said nandini smile..

**Nandini pov..**

I think mujhe jaake dekhna chahiye .. bhai mai abhi aai .. he smile and I left frm there kaha hoga woo and the  worst thing is veebha bhi nhii mil rahi haii .. I don't kno but I really don't like her she is always stick with my manikk I kno mujhe aisa nhii bolna chahiye but mai kya karu aiyyappa mujhe acchha nhi lagta manikk kisi or k sath.. I stop when I saw the worst nighmare scenario in front of my eyes my heart stop beating I felt  llump on  my throat .. tears made their way out frm my eyes .. I saw my manikk is kissing veebha .. I love u nandini .. tum meri zndagi ho .. mai tumhe kabhi khona nhii chahta his words enchoed in my ears .. tears were  continuously flowing frm my eyes  suddenly he push veebha .. I cant see more I started running frm there nandini he call me no I wont stop no .. usne mujhe dhoka diya .. he betray me .. why manikk ?? why ??..


(u kno guyzz i got new nickname "cliff hanger" hehe .. u kno aaj maine is chappy mai kuch bhi likh diyaa like seriousllyy . mere dimag mai jo aaya maine likh diya.. so if u like than pllzz like .. or agar like se zyada laga than plzz comnt hehe thank u .)



Edited by kyaramalhotra - 12 May 2016 at 4:32am

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Posted: 12 May 2016 at 5:02am | IP Logged
it was so  cute

it was so beautiful

it was so romantic 
it was so   nice

then

why  u   did    this ??????///



why you created a cliff hangr thr ??????///


veebha  is too much



how s manik gonna  solve this  ?
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Posted: 12 May 2016 at 5:04am | IP Logged
OMG yeh kiss kyun hui. I can't imagine. Plz plz plz yeh kiss na hui ho.  I wanna kill that bloody vibha.Angry
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Posted: 12 May 2016 at 5:17am | IP Logged
wow wonderful story i read one in go.thabks for this story.i love the title i dont knw hindi bt i can undrstd somewat i think it"all yours".i love this very much frm strating & every bit.
u penned each & every emotion perfectly.but true to myself & you i wanna say i dont like last chapter last part.ur title itself says its all yours means frm 1st to last & soul to body its all her.so i couldnt digest the fact that b***h kissed him.even though its story we always imagine & see it as a real one.so it somewat pricking.in ur story i think nandhini is his 1st girl he showed interest,so it will be feeling like hell for him too .plz if u can do something & show us that he didnt share his 1st kiss with that bimbo,plz do that.becoz in life it will always remain memorable even if we want to erase it.i knw its fictional story.bt i didnt get that feeling am reading fictional story.its like am reading real story.its not my mistake obviously its urs.u r one who made this story like real one.plz i beg u just dont leave that bitch to steal his 1st exp which is nandhini's right.i knw u already made ur entire plot &impossible to change any scene for any mere reader like me,bt i wish that thing didnt happened& hope like its just the act of veebha to show nandhini & break her marriage.if its happens like this i will be surely on cloud 9 while reading.sry if i said anything wrong& hurt u unintentionally.i love this story veerrry verrry much.thank u so much.i hope my wish comes true.

Edited by Glara - 12 May 2016 at 5:20am
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Posted: 12 May 2016 at 5:25am | IP Logged
Awsmmm


Awsmmm


Awsmmm


Superrr


Final one is shock

Bring   manan to gether plsss


Thanks for the pm

Coun sooon
kyaramalhotra Senior Member
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Posted: 12 May 2016 at 5:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jamunamanik

Awsmmm


Awsmmm


Awsmmm


Superrr


Final one is shock

Bring   manan to gether plsss


Thanks for the pm

Coun sooon

thank uu so muchh Big smile
kyaramalhotra Senior Member
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Posted: 12 May 2016 at 5:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by thamannamanan1

it was so  cute

it was so beautiful

it was so romantic 
it was so   nice

then

why  u   did    this ??????///



why you created a cliff hangr thr ??????///


veebha  is too much



how s manik gonna  solve this  ?

amm soo sorry for that .. waise thank u

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