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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 7:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by prerulalli

Mukta HugHug
 HELLO PRERNA HugHug
Iam back to comment on ur work but on a different forum...Wink
YEAH...AND I'M GLAD ATLEAST I FOUND YOU HERE...Big smile
i know i couldn't comment there as i have my exams nearing just like uSmileSmileSmile

But no probs..
 
OH YOU TOO HAVE YOUR EXAMS...ALL THE VERY BEST THENSmile

This story is so heartwrenching in the beginning only to end in a beautiful way
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Loved it to the core
THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR COMPLIMENTS...'GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED ITSmile

Hope u r doing well with ur exams
YAAR STILL SUBMISSIONS ARE GOING ON...EXAM WILL START AFTER 28TH APRIL...
All the best and do write moreSmileSmile
ALL THE BEST TO YOU TOO...AND YEAH WILL TRY TOSmile
Love,
PreranaSmileSmileSmile
STAY BLESSED
MUKTA..
MY REPLY IN BLUEWink

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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 8:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hs77

Loveliest piece of fiction, that too without using names 
I loved how manik brought her out of the darkness with his patience and TLC
You described nandini's trauma beautifully 
And loved his mom's part too, though I'd say she was at fault for dragging her otherwise well intentioned idea 
The confrontation at the park was much needed and it provided the most prominent aspect of the story 
Well if this is your first, then girl you're here to stay! And rock! 
Keep writing 
HEY...THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR WONDERFUL COMMENT...
 
GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED THIS IDEA OF NAMELESS FICTIONSmile...
gIRL WENT THROUGH HELL SO IT WAS NATURAL FOR HER TO LOSE IT YET SHE HELD THAT INVISIBLE THREAD AND HE WAS THERE HOLDING OTHER END..
 
HIS MOM WAS AT FAULT TOO BUT SHE WAS MOTHER AT THE END AND WANTED GOOD FOR HER CHILD..
 
YES...YOU SAID IT RIGHT THAT CONFRONTATION WAS MUCH NEEDED, SO GLAD O KNOW YOU THOUGHT IT TO BE MOST PROMINENT ASPECT OF THE STORYSmile
 
WELL IT'S ACTUALLY MY FIRST STORY IN THE SENSE OF THIS WAY AS IN NOT USING NAMES ELSE I HAVE WRITTEN QUITE FEW ON OTHER COUPLES...IF YOU READ OTHER THAN MANAN THEY YOU CAN CHECK IT...LINK IS IN MY SIGNATURE OR I WILL TRY TO POST THEM ON MANAN TOO...
 
THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN AND STAY BLESSED
MUKTASmile
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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 8:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by KhdAne

AND I DONT HAVE WORDS WHAT I FELT AFTER READING YOUR WORK...YU JUST PRESSED MY MOST SENSITIVE NERVE...HER CAUSE OF PAIN..TEARS FLOWING THROUGHOUT THE STORY HW I CONTROLLED MYSELF ONLY I KNOW.
OFCOURSE YU HAV WROTE AN AMAZING PIECE KUDOS!! HOPE TO READ MORE FROM YOU!!
KEEP SMILING!!
WELL I LOVE EMOTIONAL STORIES :) :) Clap Clap
 
HEY...THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR WONDERFUL COMMENT...
 
GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED THIS IDEA OF NAMELESS FICTIONSmile...
gIRL WENT THROUGH HELL SO IT WAS NATURAL FOR HER TO LOSE IT YET SHE HELD THAT INVISIBLE THREAD AND HE WAS THERE HOLDING OTHER END..
 
YOU LIKE EMOTIONAL STORIES?
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THEN I GUESS YOU WILL LIKE MINE TOO AS IT'S MY MOST FAV GENRE OF WRITING...
IF IT MADE YOU CRY THEN I WILL TAKE IT AS COMPLIMENTEmbarrassed..BUT SORRY TO DO SOSmile
 YEAH WILL TRY TO WRITE MORESmile
 
 
THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN AND STAY BLESSED
MUKTASmile
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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 8:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by elsaanna

so beautiful..
pure..
wonderful..
tremendous job..
beautifully written..
thanks for this truly commendable,superb story..
keep writing..
i would love to read..again and again..
God bless you..
HEY...THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR WONDERFUL COMMENT...
 
GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED IT AND THOUGHT IT TO BE BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN..
 
IT IS BEST COMPLIMENT THAT READER WANT TO READ AND REREAD  THE STORYEmbarrassed 
THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN AND STAY BLESSED
MUKTASmile
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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 8:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ershilpavyas

One amazing story it is Smile I really loved it Embarrassed
THANK YOU SO MUCH DEARSmile
GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED IT
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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 2:47am | IP Logged
Beautiful story..

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 5:43am | IP Logged
beautiful hearttouching os

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 6:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by soothu

Beautiful story..

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