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Originally posted by: monstermanik

beautiful n heart touching story...
loved it

keep writing
u r amazing writer

Originally posted by: payal94

Wonderful os

Originally posted by: prerulalli

Mukta 🤗🤗

 HELLO PRERNA 🤗🤗

Iam back to comment on ur work but on a different forum...😉

YEAH...AND I'M GLAD ATLEAST I FOUND YOU HERE...😃

i know i couldn't comment there as i have my exams nearing just like u😊😊😊

But no probs..

 

OH YOU TOO HAVE YOUR EXAMS...ALL THE VERY BEST THEN😊

This story is so heartwrenching in the beginning only to end in a beautiful way

👏

Loved it to the core

THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR COMPLIMENTS...'GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED IT😊

Hope u r doing well with ur exams

YAAR STILL SUBMISSIONS ARE GOING ON...EXAM WILL START AFTER 28TH APRIL...

All the best and do write more😊😊

ALL THE BEST TO YOU TOO...AND YEAH WILL TRY TO😊

Love,

Prerana😊😊😊

Originally posted by: hs77

Loveliest piece of fiction, that too without using names 

I loved how manik brought her out of the darkness with his patience and TLC

You described nandini's trauma beautifully 

And loved his mom's part too, though I'd say she was at fault for dragging her otherwise well intentioned idea 

The confrontation at the park was much needed and it provided the most prominent aspect of the story 

Well if this is your first, then girl you're here to stay! And rock! 

Keep writing 

Originally posted by: KhdAne

AND I DONT HAVE WORDS WHAT I FELT AFTER READING YOUR WORK...YU JUST PRESSED MY MOST SENSITIVE NERVE...HER CAUSE OF PAIN..TEARS FLOWING THROUGHOUT THE STORY HW I CONTROLLED MYSELF ONLY I KNOW.
OFCOURSE YU HAV WROTE AN AMAZING PIECE KUDOS!! HOPE TO READ MORE FROM YOU!!
KEEP SMILING!!
WELL I LOVE EMOTIONAL STORIES :) :) 👏 👏

Originally posted by: elsaanna

so beautiful..

pure..

wonderful..

tremendous job..

beautifully written..

thanks for this truly commendable,superb story..

keep writing..

i would love to read..again and again..

God bless you..

Originally posted by: ershilpavyas

One amazing story it is 😊 I really loved it 😳

Originally posted by: soothu

Beautiful story..

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