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kyaramalhotra Senior Member
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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 6:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by muktai

Originally posted by kyaramalhotra

Originally posted by muktai

Originally posted by kyaramalhotra

thats beautufull yaar
love everything of it
emotional too
u took my heart babes
keep it up
write more
soo beautifull
last scene was also fab
soo beautifull awww
take care
love kyara ;)
HEY KYARA...
 
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR LOVELY WORDS AND COMPLIMENTSEmbarrassed
 
GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED THIS...
I WILL TRY TO WRITE MORE IN THIS FORUM DEPENDING ON RESPONSE TO THIS.
 
STAY BLESSED
MUKTA

heyy mukta woww i also wanted some name like this but wht can i do my dad name me *lol*
ur welcome
plzz write more yaar
 u r awsmmm
love uBig smile
Dear Kyara SmileSmile
yes
You liked my name EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
very muchBig smile
Your name is also really nice Embarrassed
really aww *blush*
Thanks a lot for your appreciation dear .
ohh thats ohhkEmbarrassed
Will try to write moreSmile
preety plzz heheSmile

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monstermanik Senior Member
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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 7:28am | IP Logged
beautiful n heart touching story...
loved it

keep writing
u r amazing writer

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payal94 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 7:39am | IP Logged
Wonderful os

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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 7:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nandininiti

emotional yet beautiful
love it
HELLO THERE...Smile
GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED ITSmile
gudda_k Senior Member
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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 7:58am | IP Logged
Hey Mukta ...
Beautiful it was...m speechless...
No words...
This story is so damn beautiful...
Loved it...
Every line ... every emotion...its just MAGICAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!...
Great yaar...
I can't believe this was ur first attempt to write...
Do write more...
Loved this story...
Thoda sa emotional bhi tha ...
But as I said ... it was magical...
Great work...
Do write more ...
N do pm me...
KHUSHBU

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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 8:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gudda_k

Hey Mukta ...
Beautiful it was...m speechless...
No words...
This story is so damn beautiful...
Loved it...
Every line ... every emotion...its just MAGICAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!...
Great yaar...
I can't believe this was ur first attempt to write...
Do write more...
Loved this story...
Thoda sa emotional bhi tha ...
But as I said ... it was magical...
Great work...
Do write more ...
N do pm me...
KHUSHBU
HEY KHUSHBU...
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHOWERING ME WITH ALL SUCH LOVELY WORDS...
THEY DO MEAN ALOT...Smile
 
ACTUALLY IT WASN'T FIRST WORK OF MINE ON IF I HAVE WRITTEN QUITE FEW ON OTHER COUPLES...BUT IT WAS VERY FIRST WHERE I REFRAINED MYSELF FROM USING ANY COUPLES NAME
...INSTEAD I OPTED TO GO WITH TWO INDIVIDUALITIES AND LEFT THE CHOICE TO READERS TO DECIDE WHOM THEY CHOSE AS LEADS...SO FIRST IN THAT SENSE...
 
THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN FOR SAYING IT TO BE MAGICALSmile
YEAH WILL TRY TO WRITE AND PM YOU IF I CONTINUE

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prerulalli Groupbie
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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 8:23am | IP Logged
Mukta HugHug
Iam back to comment on ur work but on a different forum...Wink

i know i couldn't comment there as i have my exams nearing just like uSmileSmileSmile

But no probs

This story is so heartwrenching in the beginning only to end in a beautiful way
Clap

Loved it to the core

Hope u r doing well with ur exams

All the best and do write moreSmileSmile

Love,
PreranaSmileSmileSmile

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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 8:41am | IP Logged
Loveliest piece of fiction, that too without using names 
I loved how manik brought her out of the darkness with his patience and TLC
You described nandini's trauma beautifully 
And loved his mom's part too, though I'd say she was at fault for dragging her otherwise well intentioned idea 
The confrontation at the park was much needed and it provided the most prominent aspect of the story 
Well if this is your first, then girl you're here to stay! And rock! 
Keep writing 

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