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Breaking Away or Breaking Apart? An IshRa TS - Part 4 updated on pg 11 (Page 13)

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Posted: 28 May 2016 at 3:25am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by Sri1091

Amazingly written pb Clap the way u potrayed Raman is jst awesome and d way ishita was in so much pain hearing to it and Raman saying to her dat let him get it all out of him as he is decaying from inside it jst amazing yaar Pihu his sole reason to live she is really a blessing for Raman her cry brought him to reality and his justification of y he didn't tell Pihu abt ishita is perfectly put and his stry abt Buddha I loved d way u put it and now he is coming to d point y he was soo angry continue soon yaar


ThanksSmile..this was actually a tough part to write..glad you liked it.can i know your name?

Hey my name is balasri

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Unres on 11
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Part 3
Awesome update 
Loved that they had a proper talk
That box...wow...brilliant touch you added
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Part 4
Just too good
Loved every line
I could Divan literally playing out the scene
Continue really soon 
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Pb, Awesome story !! ClapClap. Very beautiful, emotional & poignant. Read all the four parts in one go.  The way you captured & justified the emotions of both Raman and Ishita perfectly is really commendable. Tongue. Hats off woman!!!. Thumbs UpHeart

I was expecting something very similar in the show. I loved the very fact that these two are not the ones to get influenced by others, not even their own blood, be it their mother or brother, to get a character certification about each other. This was quite evident in Ishita's self talk about Romi speaking Ashok's language and Amma forgetting that once she took pride in calling Raman as her son. Smile.

I loved the aspect that neither Raman or Ishita let others take any decisions for them this time ; be it Raman's indirect statement that he's ready to do what Ishita wants  or Ishita's decision that more than other's opinions about their life, her talk with Raman is most important at the moment. 

It was heartwarming to see both of them, open up their heart and share the anguish and pain they had been through all these years.  Only Ishita can see the soft, loving heart beneath her ruthless Ravan Kumar & only RKB can bring out the insecurities and pain of his JKR from within. No, not even, the so-called Ishita's soulmate Mani can do it.  I loved the line, where Raman asked Ishita "Have you ever lived in the guilt of having to live". That sums up his physical & mental state all these years. Ishita still preserving that tiny tear box,Tongue which has been her solace all through these years in her times of loneliness, was a good touch Pb...

Pb, I just loved these lines :-
"I was a beast that night Ishita, he continued ,there is no two ways about it, but I thought you would scream at me, cry , leave me alone maybe, but ending your life? What were you thinking woman? The day I gave my heart and soul to you Ishita was the day you and me ceased to be two different people. If Ishita did not exist, how did you ever imagine Raman could?  Tell me Ishita, did it ever occur to you , that by deciding to end your life , you took a decision to end mine too?". - The exact points we all have been ranting & putting across ever since leap. right?

And then these lines "You know they say suicide is a split second decision and it's never done slow,  but I think i wanted to torture myself and didn't want to let death come easy.  I wanted to feel your pain lshita,  as you thought of ending it, I wanted to somehow reach out, and somehow see you again,  if not in life , at least in death. "- This one moved me to tears Pb..Cry. We got to see something on these lines during the lift scene, where he wished she took him away in death as well, rather than leaving him to live in the world, without her..

I loved the fact that Ishita questioned Raman about the need to keep her identity hidden from Pihu and Raman's perspective was quite reasonable. The only possible justification that is acceptable, I would say. Smile

I must admit, I visualized KP and DT in every single dialogue that IshRa spoke and could easily relate to them. It would have been beautiful to see these two enact such poignant conversations. Alas, the makers had brains!!!Unhappy

Pb, I would be glad to read the continuation of it, specifically the reconciliation & reassurances between them & their muh tod answers to their family members, most importantly to Shagun & Mani.  If time permits, please continue...Tongue




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Awesome take. Please update soon

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Going through works like this is more pleasing and relieving than show itself. Works of forum writers let us have the scenes that we hope to see on the show but never get to.loved it.update soon.

Edited by lourel24 - 01 November 2016 at 5:06am

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