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Breaking Away or Breaking Apart? An IshRa TS - Part 4 updated on pg 11 - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
Very good pb

Not something expected

Interesting
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: gargpoo

I m sleepy bt cudnt wait to read ..
U r such an awsm writer..
U made me cry with this part 3...
He again tried to mask the real raman
I loved ishita bcs she wants to b selfish...she wants her love her life her raman back...
She still had that box...his tears...kash cvs b ye precious things yaad rakhte...
She showed the box n got her raman back .
Seriously he married a mad woman..
Aussie toh kya he can go to end of the world to get her..it ws Awww
I m glad ishita finally opened up to him..
Their hug...finally they got back their life they can make as well as break each other
He accepted he ws beast that night bt expected her to fight back...bt she chose to end her life n he too died..
He too tried committing suicide?? Omg
Loved it to the core
Waiting for next...
Wish something like this intense v get on screen..


Thank you so much..glad you liked it. .
Getting something similar onscreen? I wish that happens as well, but not getting my hopes up.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: sarunholic_arhi

Awesome...

Waiting for next update


Thanks๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: mayasundar

tear box was a nice touch


Thanks. .I thought the 'saving his tears' was a very poignant scene..hope cvs do remember it later๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome.. Love how Ishra are replaying the memories of the painful 7 years that they lived without each other. Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: -K.13-

First of all - thank you for the update! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

If I had to describe this update in any word - it would be beautiful! You took this "Ishita vs. Raman" scenario and made it real and just to both. I absolutely loved the inclusion of the tear box from Shanaya track!

How I wish you were a writer for the show bc I would love to see KP & DT enact something like this'. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Awww..thanks ..glad you like it.๐Ÿ˜›
The purpose of writing this TS was to get raman and ishita to talk and open their hearts to each other after all the heavy duty drama and constant interferences of everyone possible in their lives...they needed to take a step back and think of whether 'they' still made sense.

Writer for the show. , hahaha...Dunno About that but yes I do visualize KP and DT as raman and ishita when i write๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: Mdwst

Whoa what a fantastic update
Loved the tear box effect
Ishita Raman Bhalla could live , live and love again ..,, loved that line .
I can see the leads playing this scene in yhm .. It will be beautiful... They will rock it .
Thank you for this beautiful update


Thank you๐Ÿ˜›..glad you liked it...
Yes ishita raman bhalla died on that day 7 yrs back. ..and with her the ability for ishita to love again. .yes she had mani and aliya..but thek couldn't help her love again either. 

You imagined KP and DT in the scene? Glad that came through.i do imagine them while writing and so include some of their trait's n this version of ramann and ishita.๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: lahariakarapu

Emotional.

Thanks
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: s2397

lovely update
waiting for next part
update soon


Thanks, will try and update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: --mancityfan--

Very good pb

Not something expected

Interesting


Thanks vyas, did you expect more drama๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†