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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dqno1

Hi!
 
It is six thirty in the morning here and I woke up with this song on my brain.  I was humming it and scanning GF and voila it was as if you read my mind.
 
Dare u make this a sad story Pooja!!
 
I loved the way you incorporated the chor wala part here.
 
Looking forward to more soon.

Oh... read ur mind, it was in my mind for a long time, and finally i got a push with anniversary thread.
i had given up on it but priyanka di made me write anyway.

i am not into tragedy, so it definately won't be a sad story, though there will be challenges.

yes... i like that part also, i was typing in so much hurry that i thought it has become more like an article than a story, then i thought of incorporating a humorous scene.Big smile

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by preeti.1

very nice 

Originally posted by aparna3011

Mind blowing

Originally posted by meera051988

nice concept.

Originally posted by Jyoraj

Lovely story.
Geet found Maan and a loving family after undergoing pain.
looking forward to part 2.

Originally posted by --Fairy--

emotional and beautiful os 

Originally posted by love2_soma

maan geet k milan k bina thodi hi story khatam hoga...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...


Originally posted by jasika08

Lovely OS

Originally posted by soni-zee

Beautiful os...lovely one

Originally posted by fict

Beautiful os. Geet because of her past didn't accept Maan's love but his accident brought her to senses. Waiting for next part.

Originally posted by punam2712

Lovely OS
Waiting for part 2


Originally posted by Maaneet099

very beautifully etched OS. Please please give us a conclusion for this. :D


Thank you everyone for your love and support.
i have got a track in mind to continue this, so there might be another part b4 we see a conclusion.
i will try to update by the weekend. Smile
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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 10:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by khwaishfan

Congrats on the OS! superb start! well written! Geet has suffered so much bt wid Meera n Dev's help she manages 2 get a job n further her studies! Maan is his cousin! Maan arrives n falls 4 her! he proposes n she denies! Maan meets in an accident! This makes her realises! he is in a coma bt awakens! Maan has 2 go on a mission! she wants 2 get married b4 he goes bt he says he doesn't kwn wt wil happen! he assures her! will b waiting 4 next! update soon


thank you dear...
i will try to update as soon as i can Smile
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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
nice one.geet is fearing because of her past.

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
Lovely os dear 

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Looking forward for next part 

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 12:12am | IP Logged
waiting next

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 12:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sundari.

Originally posted by sporthy_smile28

Kya baat hai poojaClap
Too good!!

Mere hisab se this was the perfect end... And agar part two de na hi hai tho it's upto u... Humara kya hai we will get more of this beautiful story to readLOL

Do keep writing!

Oh my god... i hope i am not dreaming
i had long back given up the hope to be able to make u read  my stories, and yet i managed it finally!!! LOL

well even i thought it was the perfect end... but new possibilities opened up seeing all the love pouring over here Embarrassed

Tum ne hi tho kaha tha k u r scared of my commentsLOL

Tho mai ne socha bichari bachi pehle se dari hui hai aur nahi darana chahiyeROFL

On a serious note... Tera na writing style n narration both have come a long way... I've read ur previous os too mujhe tho vishwas hi nahi hua tha it was written by uHeart

Phir meri tere reply to few of ur readers se i got confirmation that it was actually really u who wrote thatShocked

Keep writing pooja.. Would love to read more stories from youHug

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