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MG-SS_Aan Milo Sajna_Epilogue2 pg34 on 25/06/2017 (Page 32)

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Happy that u wrote a happy ending 
Maan is safe and now is with geet...
Want a epilogue too
Thanks for update 
Waiting for next 

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finally all is well that ends well Smile
geet's babaji did not leave geet and her hope.. she got back her maan and maan all hearty and fine Smile
take care and include me in when you start writing the next Smile

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Amazing n wonderful ending

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waiting for epilogue 

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WOW!! fantastic ending...lovely writing...

loved it dear

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Well finally read it...

Thanks for update...

Thanks for pm...


Beautiful end ...

Loved it ... 

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Note- Not that I planned this one, but since I've been getting mortal threats, just decided to save my life!!!
Other than that I also thought there are some loose ends, so just decided to tie them up.

And This one is dedicated to everyone who asked for itLOL
 


Epilogue 1
 


They were driving back to their house from the mansion after taking blessings of his parents', first thing they did after getting married in a temple, and a quiet family affair as Maan liked it. Socializing was something he'd disliked from the beginning, maybe it finds its roots when he was subjected to lot of sympathy subsequent to his parents death, and so this reception thingy was making him all the more awkward! But as usual his masi-maa wouldn't hear any of it.
 
"Can we not postpone it at least; you know I am still weak from the operation.

He tried his luck last time and Geet covered her face lest anyone saw her smile, come on it was a year now since he had that "operation his masi-maa gave him a glare which was in no way less than the famous MSK glare, and finally Geet came to know from where he learnt that from. But she didn't say anything, and Maan kept whining like a kid all the way back. Dev-Meera went home already to welcome them.

Once they'd entered their house with all the rituals, his masi took him on remand.

"We live in a society Maan. I had to agree when you requested for a simple marriage as I thought that exaggerated ceremonies might tire you, but not wanting a reception is just too much, cant you go through it just a couple of hours, not for me or the society but your wife at least. An intelligent man like you must know that every girl has certain dreams about her marriage, yet she has sacrificed all in front of your well being. And all you care about is your fear to socialize!

She was satisfied to see his expressions changing from confused to shock to realisations, she  ignored the gasp that escaped his lips at her last words and continued her lecture not before showing a hand to Geet who was about to intervene.

"Now, did you think I don't know what the matter is? Maa hu tumhari! But there is a limit to everything.

She took a deep breath and continued.

"It was you who promised her a better life and it's high time you started keeping your promises, do you understand?

He just nodded not trusting himself to say something intelligent at the moment. But he agreed with her completely.
 
After a silent dinner which mostly passed in Maan concentrating on his food as he has never seen food in his life while Savitriji looked up from her plate time to time to glare at Maan which he might not see but Geet was sure he could feel it, for others it went away in eye-tennis as they took turns to look at the scene between mother and son; Savitriji sighed heavily and left for her room still not happy with Maan's attitude. Geet didn't know whom to favour, mother or son, hence kept quite till meera escorted her to her room; that was when she remembered it was supposed to be her wedding night and she blushed till the roots of her hair, still not sure the sudden rush of blood came because she'd forgotten it or that she remembered it again!

She sat on the bed waiting for Maan, not knowing what to expect. After the initial nervousness and his delay her thoughts drifted back to his mood being sombre. In her long stay in this house, she'd never seen a difference in opinion between Maan and his masi-maa, and she knew how much it'd affect him.

The door creaked open making her aware of his presence and she left the bed and reached his side immediately to sooth him. She didn't need him to say it; she knew it from his steps that he was in thoughts.

She gave him a worried look but he returned a light smile, nevertheless it reached his eyes and she left a sigh of relief. She pulled him to bed and handed him a glass of water after making him sit. He held her hand rather than glass and gazed at her with eyes full of love, he couldn't believe he was so lucky to have her in his life and actually have a life to spend with her. She gave a confused look to which he nodded no and made her sit next to him as he left her hand and took the water.

"Waise geet, traditionally suhaag raat me wife apne husband to milk glass offer karti hai.

She looked at him with horror written over her face, here she was worried about him and he's making casual flirty comments. Seeing her face he had a hard time to control his laugh and pushed her more.

"Not that I know much, just saw in a couple of movies...

He added with a grin on his face and she looked on with a murder clearly written on her face. She was just about to launch herself at him with an intention to beat him black and blue when he held both her hands his tight grip as if anticipating her move.

"Maan! Here I am worried about your argument with maa, and you are sitting so casually.

She at last voiced her worries and he left her and sat straight avoiding her eyes.

"I can talk her out of it, if you really don't want it we don't have to do it.

She said keeping her hands at his shoulder urging him to look at her. He turned at once and held both her hands in his.

"Do you want it geet...?

"I... I...

It was a simple question, but it was his voice that made her fumble, she looked into his eyes then and spoke clearly.

"Not if you don't want it.

He smiled seeing her sacrificing another of her happiness without a twitch on her face and sighed thinking how much more he will take from her. His hands now left hers and reached up to cup her face.

"Geet! Didn't you think what made me so late to come here?

She nodded in no as she didn't in her worry realise that she was waiting almost 45 minutes in the room before he came.

"I went to see Maa and apologise, I can never have a sleep if she's upset with me forget about starting a new life.

She smiled knowing the same.


"And you know she is right this time, we need this to happen, not just because it is a formality being a part of the society, not only because it is part of a marriage every girl's dream, but I want to show to the world how lucky I am, how happy I am that you are standing with me hard and strong in every phase of life, its ups and downs.
I know it wouldn't in anyway lessen the pain that you have got from the so-called norms of the society, but I want to show that a woman like my Geet is capable of only love even if all she got from life is struggles and harshness.
It's time you stand with your head held high not just because you are married again and have a man's name following yours, but because you are free... free from the stamp of bad omen that this society gave you, and which much to my disappointment you accepted.
You have to free yourself from that geet.
 
He wiped the stream of tears that gathered at the corner of her eyes whilst her lips stretched in a dreamy smile listening to the thoughts of her life partner, she never ever before meeting him had considered herself to be lucky, but now she believed that she was.

"Bolo karogi na... mere liye??

She could just move her head in a slight nod as she was so much lost in his eyes, in his embrace. Rest of the night was just a hazy memory as they had so much to share, and discover that the night only seemed small.
 


As she sat in front of the mirror next morning after taking her bath, she was furious. She took out her bottle of foundation and took a large amount of liquid makeup and rubbed it on her cheeks, her dimples to be precise. She was waiting for Maan to wake up so that she could give him a good earful for biting her cheeks so hard that his teeth marks remained there, though rest of the memories of the night only made her blush deep red in colour. After another unsuccessful attempt to wake him up she left the room the room sighing and went to kitchen.
 
The ritual of making sweet was just as sweet until meera found her love bite even above the thick layer of makeup she'd applied, and all Geet could do was just keep her eyes down and blush. She wondered how much her life changed in just one day, she want able to look at her own sister out of shyness and Meera was just enjoying her shernI sister all turned into chuhiya today. The breakfast was equally fun as she saw smile returning to eyes of the woman who was no less than a mother to her. She couldn't ever bear sadness in her eyes; she bent to take her blessings and was rewarded with a kada for her cooking. Now all eyes were on maan, as he was the only one left to give Geet her gift, but kept eating not getting the cue.

"What?

"Where's your gift?

Dev asked him narrowing his eyes at his younger brother being so obtuse, whilst earlier he was the one who gave him tips whenever he had a fight with Meera and had to manaofy her with a gift.

"What gift? Am I supposed to give one too?

He asked casually.

"Maan...

"Aaah... aa... Maa chhodo mera kaan dukhta hai.

"What do you mean you are supposed to give one? You should've given one in the night and other one now.

"What? Are you crazy? You are asking a jobless man to give two gifts to his wife... Oh God! How will a jobless man afford 2 gifts? Do you know it is equal to emotional abuse? I shall complaint against you... aaah, aaa, Maaa...

Everyone laughed at their drama, it seemed like happiness had finally returned to their house. And Maan did give her not one or two but many gifts but none knew of it as it all happened inside their closed room.
 

@Reception
 
The heavy works of the sherwani he wore was ok with him only if that cactus like cloth in the collar didn't irritate him so much. Just about an hour more, he kept chanting to himself every few minutes in order to bear the torture; the smile on the face of his Geet did help him cope up with it. The throng of people coming to wish them didn't bother him now; he had a smile on his face.


"Congratulations sir, ma'am.

Maan was quick to hug him, it was because of this man he was alive today and he'd no qualms accepting that; he was the only support he had in the days he'd distanced himself from his family. He couldn't forget how Adi had taken care of him in those days just like an elder brother would do.

"You should call me Maan now that I am not your boss anymore. "

Though Maan said that jokingly, he did mean it, but the look at adi's eyes said it all, he wouldn't accept it.

"I am glad you think of me as family sir, but it wouldn't change the fact that you are my employer and will always be, irrespective of you being my boss or the position I hold in the company.

Adi said with a smile. Yes, he was now holding the post of CEO in the company, not because he'd saved the life of the owner but because he was the best man for the job, and Maan was glad that Geet was learning the affairs of the company very fast under his guidance.
 

So, tell me how it was...
PS: Another one on the way, since it was so long I had to break it up!




Edited by Sundari. - 03 June 2017 at 4:20am

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