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MG-SS_Aan Milo Sajna_Epilogue2 pg34 on 25/06/2017 (Page 28)

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Posted: 28 January 2017 at 12:42am | IP Logged
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me first...
I knew it! I knew this is exactly what was going to happen. he would find a donor and be back hale and hearty. Lovely one.

But the best part here was your writing...beautifully written. Just too beautifully written... esply about his doubts and dilemma... his conflict between giving up and holding on...perfect!

I loved everything about this update... her care, them talking and esply the engagement ring scene...so heart touching yaa! And they finally did it! Together! They were back.

The entire story for me was well balanced. You know it started with geet having her own insecurities, her own troubles and it took a hell lot of him to bring her back into the light. And then it gradually shifted to maan.. his army endeavours to his bravery to his battle with death... it was like a full circle. And hence, so well balanced. Totally loved that thing about you.

The ending conversation...his pranks, her anger and then the proposal...oh so cute! i could feel their emotions reaching out to me... like i said, beautifully written. But you know I expected to see maan really biting her dimples on their first night. Wink
Epilogue is coming right?

Ohh what am I asking... it IS coming!!Blushing

Update soon!Big smile


Edited by kawaii_geet - 28 January 2017 at 7:56am

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Posted: 28 January 2017 at 1:37am | IP Logged
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chalo dekhte hain mera comment aata hai ya nahinEvil Smile

Umm maine socha comment de hi deti hoon
tum badi besabri se wait kar rahi hogi..hai na?WinkTongue
 anyways mujhe to koi note nahin dikha mere liyeCryCry
maine socha kuchh special bolna tha mere liye.. chalo ab comment deti hoon

Lol I m scratching my headD'ohLOL
itni asaani se donor mil gaya???ShockedShockedShocked
maine socha koi twist- wist hoga..par yahaan to kuchh bhi nahin tha seedhe donor ko le aayi tumLOL
I liked the update but it was little straight as compare to your other updates of this story.EmbarrassedEmbarrassed aisa mujhe laga..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
Maan got a donor and everyone knows that he is going to get well soon as soon as possible with geet beside him always..
Geet requested him to give engagement ring back to her..Though Maan was little reluctant but geet was not ready to let it go...Finally he surrendered to her wish..
Family too stood strong beside him . Though his confident was little low but Geet was more confident that babaji will not do injustice to them... she knew that he would be back to her for ever.. and he had to come back to the world where his family specially His Love...His Geet was waiting for him.
maan improved with each passing day and he and geet were ready to live a blissful life together ahead..
Nice update pooja..
so this was the only story which i was reading yours.. let's see ab kab milte hain tumhaare threads par.. See you..Byeee

ab jaldi se epilogue bhi do... WinkWink




Edited by Rashmi... - 30 January 2017 at 3:52am

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like pahle hi hit kar diya..ye mat sochna ki padhne ke baad hit kiyaROFL

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waise mera phone kharaab hai do din se issiliye gayab hoon

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Posted: 28 January 2017 at 2:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rashmi...

waise mera phone kharaab hai do din se issiliye gayab hoon
Achha... Kya hua phn ko?

Arre yaarrr.. LOL
I have a note for u in the start of update Wink

2 line bcha hai, ek conversation add karna hai par fit nahi ho rahaAngry

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Posted: 28 January 2017 at 2:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sundari.

Originally posted by Rashmi...

waise mera phone kharaab hai do din se issiliye gayab hoon
Achha... Kya hua phn ko?

Arre yaarrr.. LOL
I have a note for u in the start of update Wink

2 line bcha hai, ek conversation add karna hai par fit nahi ho rahaAngry
soeaker kharaab huaCry
really Note for me? is there something special?
chalo theek hai Note padh loongiTongue

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Posted: 28 January 2017 at 2:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rashmi...

soeaker kharaab huaCry
really Note for me? is there something special?
chalo theek hai Note padh loongiTongue

speaker??

how abt this?

Note- I don't know what gave u impression that I will make a sad ending maybe because I mentioned crying, but read on fearlessly because I won't disappoint you that way at least.

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Posted: 28 January 2017 at 2:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sundari.

Originally posted by Rashmi...

soeaker kharaab huaCry
really Note for me? is there something special?
chalo theek hai Note padh loongiTongue

speaker??

how abt this?

Note- I don't know what gave u impression that I will make a sad ending maybe because I mentioned crying, but read on fearlessly because I won't disappoint you that way at least.

haan speaker

theek hai ye
waise tumne sach me sab ko dara ke rakh diya heart disese is not something to be digested easilyLOLLOL

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