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Manan FF - Kaisi yeh Yaariyan season 3 Thread 1 - till chapter 63 (Page 6)

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Posted: 01 May 2016 at 7:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jamunamanik

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Thank you Jamuna.  Stay tuned.  Will try to post as soon as i can. Keep checking though. 

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Posted: 01 May 2016 at 11:12am | IP Logged
Want to know how u like d latest updates

Edited by rk21 - 01 May 2016 at 12:33pm
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Posted: 01 May 2016 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
Hello read it one go its awesome i wanna ask is it your first attempt? If it is than girl you re blessed with some awesome skills i mean the whole ff was nicely written. And the characters are nicely handled by you like amms, manik's father, and neel are in gray shed not a complete villain but in gray sheds something is fishy with them. Handle them wisely

And the another mark for that convo between navya and nandini u handled hindi nicely that time, that dialogue touched my heart actually there are only few writers who handle hindi or some other language nicely especially in emotional scene. Wha par hindi ekta ke dialogue ke jesa sound karta h and than it turns out lame or uske bad me it kills the feeling but its was awesomely executed by you good job

P.s. - i love the whole story and plot would love to see manik falling in love with nandini once agajn but update thoda chota h well regular h toh chlega but it should be around 2k at least thoda sa length bada karo hope u get more response from your readers

Best of luck
Update soon

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Posted: 01 May 2016 at 7:18pm | IP Logged
amazing
loved it
waiting for next
thanks for pm
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Posted: 01 May 2016 at 7:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aashna_chawla

Hello read it one go its awesome i wanna ask is it your first attempt? If it is than girl you re blessed with some awesome skills i mean the whole ff was nicely written. And the characters are nicely handled by you like amms, manik's father, and neel are in gray shed not a complete villain but in gray sheds something is fishy with them. Handle them wisely

And the another mark for that convo between navya and nandini u handled hindi nicely that time, that dialogue touched my heart actually there are only few writers who handle hindi or some other language nicely especially in emotional scene. Wha par hindi ekta ke dialogue ke jesa sound karta h and than it turns out lame or uske bad me it kills the feeling but its was awesomely executed by you good job

P.s. - i love the whole story and plot would love to see manik falling in love with nandini once agajn but update thoda chota h well regular h toh chlega but it should be around 2k at least thoda sa length bada karo hope u get more response from your readers

Best of luck
Update soon

Thank you Aashna, this is my first FF, though writing is my passion and I have written blogs and stories before.
U r right the characters are all grey because they all have back stories. I want it to be more realistic than pure candyfloss. It would mean a lot if u stay along on this journey and keep sending me your feedback

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Posted: 01 May 2016 at 9:38pm | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
cont soon

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Posted: 02 May 2016 at 12:30am | IP Logged
nice progression of the story..loved their meeting scene..very relatable

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Posted: 02 May 2016 at 1:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rk21

[QUOTE=Aashna_chawla]Hello read it one go its awesome i wanna ask is it your first attempt? If it is than girl you re blessed with some awesome skills i mean the whole ff was nicely written. And the characters are nicely handled by you like amms, manik's father, and neel are in gray shed not a complete villain but in gray sheds something is fishy with them. Handle them wisely

And the another mark for that convo between navya and nandini u handled hindi nicely that time, that dialogue touched my heart actually there are only few writers who handle hindi or some other language nicely especially in emotional scene. Wha par hindi ekta ke dialogue ke jesa sound karta h and than it turns out lame or uske bad me it kills the feeling but its was awesomely executed by you good job

P.s. - i love the whole story and plot would love to see manik falling in love with nandini once agajn but update thoda chota h well regular h toh chlega but it should be around 2k at least thoda sa length bada karo hope u get more response from your readers

Best of luck
Update soon


Thank you Aashna, this is my first FF, though writing is my passion and I have written blogs and stories before.
U r right the characters are all grey because they all have back stories. I want it to be more realistic than pure candyfloss. It would mean a lot if u stay along on this journey and keep sending me your feedback
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Sure would love to u sounds a mature writer and i don't like Candy floss type ka mushy stories i prefer realistic things more and i like that story behind every character that's a good sign of mature writer keep it up Smile

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