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Manan FF - Kaisi yeh Yaariyan season 3 Thread 1 - till chapter 63 (Page 57)

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Posted: 29 May 2016 at 2:57am | IP Logged
Awesomeee
This jealousy always works, with or without memory, hehehehe
Loved the update
Wish the series starts again just the way u have written
Loving it
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Posted: 29 May 2016 at 3:12am | IP Logged
Manik ki memory ho ya na ho..ye banda kabhi ni badlega..!!! Its good to see tht u have kept his habits intact..!! I m loving this new version of kyy alot..recreating the magic of MaNan all over again.. Tongue thanx to those beautiful lines which u use. & plss try ur luck in B-town..m sure u'll get lucky.. Mind blowing writer u r..!!

Okk so manik came to panchgani to confront nandni about the feelings..& there he listned to somone talking to nandu n i was like plsss koi misunderstanding na ho & i heaved a sigh of relief thk god u not ekta kapoor..!

And chirag ko itni saari pappi..sabse correct ladka hai ye LOL

And while reading tht rain wala scene..it was raining in my place too..so the intensity was altogether on diff level...u nailed this scene.. Clap Superbly written..! Plus maniks pic which u used was very apt..u made it more convinent to feel those passion..! And yaiie nandini said No to neel..! & then manik asked then why r u with him... she says u said only 1 ques..hahaha LOL You never fail to press me with ur humorous dialog's..!!!

And about the update i think 3 updates in a week will b good..! U'll b also relaxed plus we will get tym to read..! Or else m okay with anything u decide. Smile

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Posted: 29 May 2016 at 3:42am | IP Logged
wow...now that was something...the pace at which maniks feelings hv developed for nandini..his heart n mind are finally coming to a consensus..loved hw manik was stubbornly MANIK here..wanting to get answers right away and coming to his old self of pulling nandini Wink to him.
Waiting eagerly for the next part.

About your note -  I can speak only for myself. I try to but i dont find time to open IF daily..But since last two weeks the only reason i come to IF is for your story.. I do have other writers on my list, but i must confess its ur writing skills n punctuality of posting stories which has made me login so frequently.

I simply admire ur hardwork and ur dedication to the story. Its a great thing dear.So many good writers(i dnt blame them, im sure they r also busy with their lives) give updates once in a month and for many its 2,3 - 6 months gap. So by and by one tends to forget the story even.
I hv so many stories on my list which i dont even read now once they r updated cause i hv forgotten where it had started.

So i will say keep up the good work, update as n when u can w/o taking long gaps. We all just love ur story to bits, so we will be waiting for it hoping u wont make us wait tooo long.

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Posted: 29 May 2016 at 4:42am | IP Logged
aww...i'm very late this time...sorryy
mostly i will be busy on sundays...family timeEmbarrassed

update was awesome
and was unexpected
manan's emotions were amazingly penned
manik is such an impulsive soul on earth...
he should have talked to her...buy no he and his anger is enough to make his life miserable
but i understand manik's situation too...whatever he is doing is not in his control
he became like a lost child and his only guidance is nandini...when he felt that she will leave her.. again the darkness surrounded him
he was on the verge of losing himself once again
his vulnerability was perfectly pennedClap

but what the first time he did something sensible ...he wanted his answersBig smile
 we should  clear our misunderstandings asap...or they  it wont take time to turn into hatred
finally hh asked her the most important question,,...
and she told him that she don't love neelDancing

ab please neel ki band bajao na..LOL
can' wait for next update

and i'm very happy that you are updating on daily basis
but every time you cant do that..
it is fine if you need time...so you can update thrice  a week..
i don't have any problem with this option too...



congratulations roh you are very much successful in giving us real feelings of ky2 once againClapStar
good job dear
take care

thanks for pm Smile

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Posted: 29 May 2016 at 5:39am | IP Logged
Hey actually i was getting bored and Aashna told me to read your story. When I came here my facial expression was like 'me to mar gayi' 34 chapters LOL and I don't know how I m going to read it but don't worry I will read till night. I just read one chapter and I was like why I didn't came here first. So whenever you are going to update chapter please pm me

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I am a little too overwhelmed with your heartfelt messages. Kya karun, main thori emotional si hoon Smile. So what i think is, i will update as and when i write. On days when I have too much work pressure, I might skip but I will never keep u waiting for the heck of it.
But promise me, you guys will show me some extra love from time to time Wink (Greedy me)

Overwhelmed by your love, I have been writing since 3 am and the next chapter is almost finished... few last minute touches. Even though it should have come tomorrow morning ur time, but since u guys have been so good to i guess i owe this to you. I will take it a littl eeasy after that. And I will reply to all your comments after i post this. So stay tuned...Big smile

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hayee...you made my day by this newsEmbarrassed
love you loads...HeartStar
and don;t worry i will always be there to commentSmileSmile
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 There is a video link in this chapter, DONOT forget to listen to it as you read


Chapter 35

 

They stood there, the only two souls  in that deserted assembly ground. Her prayers had been answered. The first shower of the monsoon had drenched them together. It had washed away her fears and his anger. She couldn't take her eyes off him. Even with the rain blurring her vision, forcing her eye lids to shut, she struggled to keep them open, to drink in the entire sight of him. He appeared calm like the river, but she & only she could feel the ebb and flow of waves inside him.

 

He had a million questions in his eyes, she had them in her heart. She was struggling to keep them  from flooding her eyes..

 

Pehle kabhi, na tune mujhe gham diya

Phir mujhe, kyun tanha kar diya

Guzaare thhe jo lamhe pyaar ke

Hamesha tujhe apna maan ke

To phir tune badli kyun adaa

Yeh kyun kiya?

 

Kabhi jo baadal barse

Main dekhoon tujhe aankhein bharke

Tu lage mujhe pehli baarish ki duaa

 

{You have never given me sorrow before,

Then why did you desert me this time

U were always a part of me,

In the millions of memories we made together,

Then why did you have to change,

Why did you do it?

 

Whenever it rains,

All I want do is stare you till the end of time,

You are a sacred prayer, like the first shower of the season}

 

 

Finally she understood, it was all futile. Her mission.. She was not made for it, she was not born to doubt him, she was not born to hate him, she was born only to love him. He had the key to her soul. He had the power to sway her to his voice, even to his silence. He knew the magic to mesmerize her, today and every single day. Destiny had brought them together, and destiny had torn them apart. And now, it was destiny again that had brought him to her. She might as well let destiny take its course and take her along to wherever she belonged. But in this moment, all she wanted to do was to pray for him.. Or pray to him.

 

Tere pahloo mein reh loon

Main khudko paagal keh loon

Tu gham de ya khushiyaan

Seh loon sathiyaa..

 

aa.. sathiyaa.. sathiyaa..

hmm Koi nahi.. tere siva mera yahaan

Manzilein, hain meri to sab yahaan

Mita de sabhi aaja faasle

Main chahun mujhe mujhse baant le

Zara sa mujhme tu jhaank le

Main hoon kya?

 

{ Let me stay in your shadow,

Let me go bewildered,

Whether you give me sadness or joy, I'll bear, O beloved

 

There is nobody other than you who is mine,

You are where all my roads end,

Wipe out the distances between us,

Take a piece out of me and make it yours,

Look here, peek inside me

Tell me who I am }

 

He let go of her hand. She turned away in silence and he followed her. They walked up to his car, completely soaked and dripping.

 

"Manik ghar chalen?  I have some clothes of my brother Rishab. You can change out of these.Tumhe thand lag jayegi." She explicitly mentioned Rishab's name, not wanting him to assume anything else. He didnt question or comment. He didn't tease her like other days. He silently drove towards her house.

 

Her's was a small one bedroom apartment on the edge of the hill. It was sufficient for her but she felt a little awkward ushering him in. He was used to mansions, he had spent his whole life in palatial houses n her's wouldnt even compare to one of their regular servant's quarter.

It was cute, her place, small and beautiful just like her. She had kept it clean, everything tucked away in its own place. She didnt have too much of furniture, just a couple of rugs and few cute cushions for floor sitting in her living room. Her bedroom too had the bare minimum of a single bed. But even so, it carried her touch. On the bedsheets, curtains, cushions, everywhere he looked, her saw her hand work.

He had lived in mansions, so grand and colossal that one tends to get lost there. But they were impersonal like hotels, you could spend your entire life in one and yet feel like a stranger.

 

He preferred it here, where life could thrive, where the wind could flow in and out and the rain could pitter patter all day long. Even the walls were willing to listen.

 

She brought him a towel and some of Rishab's clothes.   'You go first' He asked her. Her apartment had a single washroom and he was worried she would catch cold.

 

'No you go first, i am used to getting drenched."

 

He complied again.

 

Nandini patted herself dry with a towel and went to the kitchen to make some coffee for them.

 

"Nandini" She heard his husky voice and turned around to see this. She gulped her saliva.


 


 

"Wo actually, yeh shirt thora chota hai, so..." He was blushing, still serious.

 

'Control Nandini Murthy, don't ogle at him so shamelessly.' She lowered her eyes. "Tum coffee piyo, I'll change and come."

 

He picked his coffee and peeped into the balcony attached to the kitchen and stood there speechless.



 

"Acha hai na? Mera personal view?" She asked him jokingly, wiping her hair.

 

"Tumhara personal view itna acha hai to us din jungle men kyun leke gayi thi?"

 

"Who tum nahi samjhoge, thora authentic rakhna parta hai, feel lane ke liye"

 

"Aur kya kya nahi samajhta main?"

 

She was missing their usual camaraderie, his teasing her, his fake attitude, his laughing at her.. He was absolutely quiet today and his piercing gaze almost burnt through her. She looked away, not being able to look into his anymore. She couldn't decide if she wanted to comfort his vulnerable side or smother his sensuous self with an endless trail of kisses.

 

"Waise you play guitar? I saw one in your living room"

 

Nandini nodded.

 

"Will you play a song for me?"

 

Nandini went inside to bring her guitar. She had sung this song uncountable number of times in his memory, this song had been playing in her head all evening since she saw him standing there and now she will sing it for him.. She closed her eyes, while her hands started gliding over the strings like it was her second home.

 

Song link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=emfoQNVnnS4





 

She had expected him to say something, but he didn't. She pulled the guitar over her shoulder and offered it to him.

"Take this"

 

He looked at her questioningly.

 

"Aaj ke bad, whenever you feel you have too many questions in your head, play this."

 

"But I don't know how to play.."

 

"You would know.." Only she could assure him this way.

 

"Nandini I need to go home. Main kisiko bina bataye hi aa gaya tha." Truth was no one really cared if he was at home or not, and he himself cared much less. But he couldn't stay here any longer, for if he did, he might end up doing something silly. And with Nandini, he wanted to be careful.. He didn't want to lose her..he had almost lost her and it had driven him crazy.

 

"To tum Pune se Panchgani sirf ek sawaal puchne ke liye aaye the?"

 

Manik stopped and turned back. "Us ek sawaal pe meri zindagi atki hai."

 

"Aur kuch nahi bolna?"

 

Manik took a long pause, wondering if he should or should not say what he had in his mind. He wasn't used to surrendering before someone. He was scared of showing his vulnerable side to anyone, but if he didn't say it now, he might never be able to say it again.

 

"Will you make a promise?"

 

"What promise?"

 

"Promise me that you would never leave me, no matter what.."

 

Nandini was chocking inside, she had to hold herself tight before her tears gave her little secret away.

 

She cleared her voice. "Nandini promise!" And for the first time in that entire evening, she saw him smiling, like the sun rising after a long spell of showers. He scattered rainbows everywhere.

 

He gave her a quick hug and dashed away.

 

She wanted to drown in those dark brown eyes, she had finally found what she had been looking for ,for three long years. His lips had been sealed all through, yet his silence had screamed loud in her ears. He could never have hurt her intentionally, he was as much a victim of circumstances as her. She would have to be his guiding star once more. She would have to protect him from all evils... and that NEEL, he better watch out. What had he done to Manik that had caused him this amount of pain..

 

"U don't dare mess with Manik, no no... and if you do, you would have to face me first, the old Nandini Murthy." She thought aloud.



Edited by rk21 - 29 May 2016 at 6:12am

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