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Manan FF - Kaisi yeh Yaariyan season 3 Thread 1 - till chapter 63 (Page 49)

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Posted: 27 May 2016 at 2:11am | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
cont soon

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Posted: 27 May 2016 at 3:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shoana

this was super cute
manik sent those cupcakes for his cupcakeWink
and he bought shoes too...so sweet of himDay Dreaming
p.s. he remembered that she is forgetting to make cakeShocked
it means there are chances that this time he may not forget anything
i had a question...is he fully recovered Tongue

nandini sent thank you message ..Confusedbut why didn't it reached maniik
oh i think...she wants to wants to thanks him personallyWink
and manik is waiting for her thank you message...awwTongue


and shocking part was navya seeing cabir
pls bring cabir back
i'm missing him very much...the cupid of manan
and missing manbir momentsErmm
pls bring manbir back...pretty please

mukti wanted to kill navya and her motherROFL
but i loved this twist
pls bring cabir back...and abeer too
cavya a new coupleWink
i know i'm going too far...but kya karun...u make us so desperate for next part


thanks for pm dear
continue soon
take care


"Nopes.. Kuch nahi.. The earliest memory I have is of getting some sort of an electric shock in a hospital in Denmark. Doctors ne kaha tha ki my memory is like a hard disk but ek connection kanhi snap ho gaya hai in between. Agar main Denmark aur Switzerland nahi jata jo it could have been worse. Like Every day  I would have woken up and forgotten what happened the previous day. But ab aisa nahi hai. Jo abhi ho raha hai, I mean life after the memory loss, I will not forget it... but if there's a miracle, someday I may wake up remembering my entire life. But that's that, a miracle and as much as I wish that it happens, I don't have much hope."

I cant answer any other question bcz i cnt answer without giving away too much.  3

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Posted: 27 May 2016 at 5:28am | IP Logged
So guys,  how was it sweet or shocking.. I know u r still reeling under the shock.. Wondering what was it.. I can see that because u all hv asked so mny questions.. Generally i reply to Ll your comments but not this time Wink
Chill i m not angry...  LOL i wont reply because i cant reply without revealing more than i should.  But i want to know are u guys enjoyong? Do u think the way the story is progressing from one chapter to the next,  is it predictable..when u get a new chapter, is it something u had expected or u find something new? 
Wen u read the story,  do u get the real kyy feels? 

Ur feedback is important because it lets me assess where i m standing and where i need to go. Blame it on my engg/business background.. I like to analyse n structure even creative wrk Big smile
I m damn serious about this FF Ouch n i better do a good wrk of it.  So send in ur wishlist nd ur complaint buckets.. 

Love u..all
Rohini
 



Edited by rk21 - 27 May 2016 at 5:47am

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Posted: 27 May 2016 at 6:10am | IP Logged
i got the hint dear
no worries/...continue it the way you wanted to
and my wishlist is mentioned above in last commentEmbarrassed
and tbh i never felt that this is ff...
it looks like kyy is continuing where it was left
and yeah  it's very intriguing..just for once or twice i was able to predict upcoming scenesTongue
this story always keep me hooked to it..
and day by day it becomes more interesting...


once again thanks for starting this dear...

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Posted: 27 May 2016 at 9:53am | IP Logged
Of course m getting feels of watching kyy..!! And the dialogues which u write is the most amazing thing...manik & navyas dialog r something Which i really feel yess even in real kyy they used to speak tht way..!!! U r really doing a wondrful work..!!

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Posted: 27 May 2016 at 10:38am | IP Logged
hello 


hai 


      aaahhh

I don't know how to react     shout louder   laugh like crazy  or jump like a  monkeyyy


hhhuuu...



r u telling me that kabeer s    alive  


navya   s dialogue   was   really  funny 
hamari maa kehthe hai  ...

did  she really saw him ???????????/

then our nandini   madam 


she promised to  bring cake for her bacha party  n she forgot    as she was busy in her monster land



but  surpriseee



she got a parcel 

kids    told its  from her boyfrnd 


the  small gift  box was for the   big kid

LOLLOLLOL

monster is waiting for a   thanq message 

LOLLOLLOL

he selected a shoe  for nandini      awesome part 

nandini murthy don't follow any fashion 

he met her  just one week  before   n he knows her in n out  

{buddu ko samaj mein nahi aatha  hai kyaa     she  s   with him  from   saath janam  }

LOLLOLLOL



but one confusion 

nandini madam   has already    typed  one   thanq  message  no   then why  he didn't receive it  ?????????


did she forgot to press send button  ?

or    signal problem  ????


do something fast   nandini  miss   bcaz  monster is going out of control    waiting for  your  THANQ 


awesome update   


LOLLOLLOL









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Posted: 27 May 2016 at 11:32am | IP Logged
wonderful story...
lived it

manan got separated bcoz of manik's dad ...
he made false promise to his son...
his point was right bt intensions were too bad...
poor manan...

i m loving this new manan journey...
nandu *trying* to hate manik bt alas...her heart disobey her every single time n she ends up caring for him all over again...
hope manik will get his memory back...

u r amazing writer...
keep it up...

cont soon
waiting

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Posted: 27 May 2016 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
I came across this story just this morning  and now I am done with all the chapters. I must tell you, this is a beautiful  story  and you are an amazing writer. You said that this is your first attempt  at writing  ffs and you are doing  a wonderful  job. This story has every emotion  in right proportion, and they are all expressed  beautifully. I had tears in my eyes at times and also smile on my lips at places. That it self shows how good  a writer you are. Now I am all excited   to know  how manan's story will progress  and also eagerly waiting  for the return of kabir or should I say ranvir. Waiting for the next update. Stay blessed. 

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