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Manan FF - Kaisi yeh Yaariyan season 3 Thread 1 - till chapter 63 (Page 44)

etuu Goldie
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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rk21

Originally posted by etuu

Originally posted by rk21

Originally posted by etuu

Res other 8 chapters !!! (18-25) please update little long...


Thank u thank u thanku... for each of your comments :) Please continue sending your comments just like this. I will try to write more frequently so sometimes the post length is short but I will try to write longer. I think for the chapters u r yet to read, they are a little longer... Enjoy... keep reading and keep loving.

By the way, I have been writing since long on and off) but this is my first attempt at an FF. I have mostly written poems and short stories before.

THis my blog link which has my random writings if you ever feel like reading: http://rohiniasablogger.blogspot.com/#sthash.ksRLm3bP.dpbs

Love
RK21



hey,
seriously ur writing style is so amazing...!!!! u have a great talent of writing... !!!! I don't know why you did not get response... I know forum is silent... but still.. ...
I would love to peeped in your other works...
I just finished 20 chapters... it's just I couldn't get enough time to read... I'm just literally messed up... btw r u have wattpad??... wattpad is nice but forum is habit...
when I will be free I'll be finished it as soon as possible...
sure. Take your time dear. My wattpad id is RK21 / 1_drop_of_rain

thanks for understanding... *_* follow u... ^_^

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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 6:51am | IP Logged
superb update

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Boomchelesa Senior Member
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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 8:37am | IP Logged
Itni jaldi toh mai read bhi ni karti jitni jaldi update milta hai..!! Haha LOL Take some rest dear..!! Are u from mumbai..coz i find ur story quite informative..u seem to knw alot of things..i felt this after reafing todays update whn u mentioned Pune to panchgini takes 3 hrs..!! I like this thing in ur story..u put all ur efforts in it..! Smile

So chap 28 & 29 ka reveiw i have given it on whtpad..& chap 30 its here..!! I read 3 updates in a day..mera din toh aise hi ban gaya hai.. Tongue Okk so the best part of the update was obviously 'The night Conversation'...!!

Manik getting blurred images of past..intresting..!!! & plss show lives of other kyy members too..& Arymann wo kahan hai..!! Plss show him too.. Try to carry everyone's life together & not show them only whn they r connected to manan..coz its kyy s3..sab kuch hona chaiye..thoda hi kyun ni..!!

Ronit roy maniks father..yaayiie..!! I wanted him to b his father..!! & kya pyaar hai inka...hiding manik past.. Angry i knw he doesnt want him to get hurt like him..coz nandu too is middle class but still... Cry Manik wont leave his dad..!!! & wo line.. Even a deaf or blind person wud not want to have woman life nyonika in their life... ROFL ROFL So true..!!!

And 1am conversation was tho..kya bolu.. Those line spoke so many unspoken feeling..dil ko chu gaya..! I think towards the end of story i will have trucks of fav scene..!!

God Bless U
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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 9:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Boomchelesa

Itni jaldi toh mai read bhi ni karti jitni jaldi update milta hai..!! Haha LOL Take some rest dear..!! Are u from mumbai..coz i find ur story quite informative..u seem to knw alot of things..i felt this after reafing todays update whn u mentioned Pune to panchgini takes 3 hrs..!! I like this thing in ur story..u put all ur efforts in it..! Smile

So chap 28 & 29 ka reveiw i have given it on whtpad..& chap 30 its here..!! I read 3 updates in a day..mera din toh aise hi ban gaya hai.. Tongue Okk so the best part of the update was obviously 'The night Conversation'...!!

Manik getting blurred images of past..intresting..!!! & plss show lives of other kyy members too..& Arymann wo kahan hai..!! Plss show him too.. Try to carry everyone's life together & not show them only whn they r connected to manan..coz its kyy s3..sab kuch hona chaiye..thoda hi kyun ni..!!

Ronit roy maniks father..yaayiie..!! I wanted him to b his father..!! & kya pyaar hai inka...hiding manik past.. Angry i knw he doesnt want him to get hurt like him..coz nandu too is middle class but still... Cry Manik wont leave his dad..!!! & wo line.. Even a deaf or blind person wud not want to have woman life nyonika in their life... ROFL ROFL So true..!!!

And 1am conversation was tho..kya bolu.. Those line spoke so many unspoken feeling..dil ko chu gaya..! I think towards the end of story i will have trucks of fav scene..!!

God Bless U

SmileSmile I am originally from Kolkata . However, I started my career in Pune and it happens to be my favourite city in India till date. Currently I am in the US...

Haha, u bet I need some rest. I have a very stressful kind of job. So in office I am always running from one meeting to another but still I try to write one chapter a day and the reason is comic as well as tragic.

What I write is not always what I had planned. Sometimes I am guided like both the sunrise scene and the text game scenes came up just like that. So when I write I also get an insight into their lives.

U r very correct about the rest of the FAB 5. And I have it in my mind. You will see them coming in sooner than later. I have never dealt with so many characters simultaneously and giving them each a believable back drop and a purpose in the story is a little overwhelming for me. but thats the challenge, to overcome your fears and do what u havent done before.
Ofcourse I will fail, there will be chapters where u wont be able to connect. Sometimes I will feel writers blocks but i hope I will overcome it all if you keep sending me your love

RK21

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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 9:24am | IP Logged
As always it was perfect dear.u know what I love this manik sooo much.sometimes I feel he is sooo innocent who doesn't know anything about his past.I am sure their is a reason behind him leaving Nandini.once again hatt off to u.

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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rk21

Originally posted by Boomchelesa

Itni jaldi toh mai read bhi ni karti jitni jaldi update milta hai..!! Haha LOL Take some rest dear..!! Are u from mumbai..coz i find ur story quite informative..u seem to knw alot of things..i felt this after reafing todays update whn u mentioned Pune to panchgini takes 3 hrs..!! I like this thing in ur story..u put all ur efforts in it..! Smile

So chap 28 & 29 ka reveiw i have given it on whtpad..& chap 30 its here..!! I read 3 updates in a day..mera din toh aise hi ban gaya hai.. Tongue Okk so the best part of the update was obviously 'The night Conversation'...!!

Manik getting blurred images of past..intresting..!!! & plss show lives of other kyy members too..& Arymann wo kahan hai..!! Plss show him too.. Try to carry everyone's life together & not show them only whn they r connected to manan..coz its kyy s3..sab kuch hona chaiye..thoda hi kyun ni..!!

Ronit roy maniks father..yaayiie..!! I wanted him to b his father..!! & kya pyaar hai inka...hiding manik past.. Angry i knw he doesnt want him to get hurt like him..coz nandu too is middle class but still... Cry Manik wont leave his dad..!!! & wo line.. Even a deaf or blind person wud not want to have woman life nyonika in their life... ROFL ROFL So true..!!!

And 1am conversation was tho..kya bolu.. Those line spoke so many unspoken feeling..dil ko chu gaya..! I think towards the end of story i will have trucks of fav scene..!!

God Bless U


SmileSmileI am originally from Kolkata . However, I started my career in Pune and it happens to be my favourite city in India till date. Currently I am in the US...

Haha, u bet I need some rest. I have a very stressful kind of job. So in office I am always running from one meeting to another but still I try to write one chapter a day and the reason is comic as well as tragic.

What I write is not always what I had planned. Sometimes I am guided like both the sunrise scene and the text game scenes came up just like that. So when I write I also get an insight into their lives.

U r very correct about the rest of the FAB 5. And I have it in my mind. You will see them coming in sooner than later. I have never dealt with so many characters simultaneously and giving them each a believable back drop and a purpose in the story is a little overwhelming for me. but thats the challenge, to overcome your fears and do what u havent done before.
Ofcourse I will fail, there will be chapters where u wont be able to connect. Sometimes I will feel writers blocks but i hope I will overcome it all if you keep sending me your love

RK21


I used to live in dubai..& now shifted to delhi..& a college student..! & dear i just saw the link of ur blog u wrote in soneones comment..m defenitly gonna read it..coz somewhere m really carried away with ur writing..!
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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 11:58am | IP Logged
superb Update...

day by day story bahot hi interesting ho rahi hai...
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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 4:10pm | IP Logged
Amazing update..
Plzz update it soon..

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