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Manan FF - Kaisi yeh Yaariyan season 3 Thread 1 - till chapter 63 (Page 43)

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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 4:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shoana

thanks for the pic dear
and i will be waiting to see neel's  pic... to shower him punches and beat him black and blue


coming to the update
as usual it was superb
so manik's dad things that his friends are responsible for manik's condition
and he was betrayed in love,...so to save his son from this he wants to give him a new identity
manik's dad doesn't knows whole truth...i'm sure nyonika must have manipulated the truth about his friends
aww...manik is missing nandini

their late night convo was awesome
manik is a beast and nandini beauty
this beauty and beast won't be separated ever

the lines of the book depicted their situation
finally manik asked about her leg...
waiting for more manan moments
and hope manik gets more flashbacks in which he could see nandini


thanks for pm dear
take care


You r smart Wink. But u will get more insight into his father's heart today.  Yes d chat was sweet..  I wanted to keep the language similar to what we use.. Abbreviations n short forms.  I hope it gave u d real feels. 

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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 4:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ayeshaz

Ohh myyy myyy myyy yes , this has to be the best story at the same time the best update n again the best game ever played in rom-love story ,

Dear this update s my favorite so far Tho I mark all the previous ones as a favorite too but this stand out, too much,love,mix feelings,fun, n stil too much suspens of words in the game they played,

Awww poor baby Nandini ,she most have travel to the memory lane that's y she couldn't continued , looking forward to more overwhelming n comforting momentums between this two #Manan,
. Thank u thank u thank u for ur lovely comments.  Ur words..  What u liked n what u liked less help me think and write.. Bcz its not just the words but also the plot n d storyline that determines how impactful a scene would b. 
U wanted ashna's id ..  Its chawla_ashna 

Keep your comments coming.  Dont ever change that..  Writing everyday is a huge responcibility but ur love makes it a little less challenging.  '

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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 4:56am | IP Logged
hello  dear 

  I think iam late again  

sorryyy


so   mr  raj malhothra got a   bad past    

some gal dumped him    

then   nyonika   


so basically he don't want manik to  find out about  nandini 


why  he   felt   that  manik s accident happened bcaz of his friends 

it was nyonika  who planned  that accident       right ???????//


as  any businessman  he also wants his son  to  join his business  

so he don't want manik   to know about his passion for music 




but manik   now knows  music  has  something to do with   him

music gives him peace  


he s thankful to nandini  for   that 

so   whatever    Mr malhothra     tells   or tries    our stubborn   monster    will    not let music go from his  life

TongueTongueTongueTongueTongueTongue


but  he is  ready to join his dad s   business 

     that also   monster  is doing    thinking of  his own benefit 

if he shifts to pune    then   he can  meet  nandini   very often     
brilliant    monster  Tongue




midnight   also  he  wants to chat with nandini 

and  thr she  is    .ready   ...any time     any whr   any thing     FOR HIM  




then the game started  


seriously did manik cheat      or   those lines whr    really from that book 


Smile


one more brilliant update  madam 

keep it up 

loved it 

tc   n bye 

with  lots  n lots of  wishes 

thamanna 
 
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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 5:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rk21

Originally posted by etuu

Res other 8 chapters !!! (18-25) please update little long...


Thank u thank u thanku... for each of your comments :) Please continue sending your comments just like this. I will try to write more frequently so sometimes the post length is short but I will try to write longer. I think for the chapters u r yet to read, they are a little longer... Enjoy... keep reading and keep loving.

By the way, I have been writing since long on and off) but this is my first attempt at an FF. I have mostly written poems and short stories before.

THis my blog link which has my random writings if you ever feel like reading: http://rohiniasablogger.blogspot.com/#sthash.ksRLm3bP.dpbs

Love
RK21



hey,
seriously ur writing style is so amazing...!!!! u have a great talent of writing... !!!! I don't know why you did not get response... I know forum is silent... but still.. ...
I would love to peeped in your other works...
I just finished 20 chapters... it's just I couldn't get enough time to read... I'm just literally messed up... btw r u have wattpad??... wattpad is nice but forum is habit...
when I will be free I'll be finished it as soon as possible...
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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 5:11am | IP Logged
Wow that was awesome dear, read all the parts in a go, and it was mindblowing, continue soon.

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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 5:13am | IP Logged
thank u
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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 5:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by etuu

Originally posted by rk21

Originally posted by etuu

Res other 8 chapters !!! (18-25) please update little long...


Thank u thank u thanku... for each of your comments :) Please continue sending your comments just like this. I will try to write more frequently so sometimes the post length is short but I will try to write longer. I think for the chapters u r yet to read, they are a little longer... Enjoy... keep reading and keep loving.

By the way, I have been writing since long on and off) but this is my first attempt at an FF. I have mostly written poems and short stories before.

THis my blog link which has my random writings if you ever feel like reading: http://rohiniasablogger.blogspot.com/#sthash.ksRLm3bP.dpbs

Love
RK21



hey,
seriously ur writing style is so amazing...!!!! u have a great talent of writing... !!!! I don't know why you did not get response... I know forum is silent... but still.. ...
I would love to peeped in your other works...
I just finished 20 chapters... it's just I couldn't get enough time to read... I'm just literally messed up... btw r u have wattpad??... wattpad is nice but forum is habit...
when I will be free I'll be finished it as soon as possible...
sure.  Take your time dear.  My wattpad id is RK21 / 1_drop_of_rain
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Posted: 24 May 2016 at 5:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by thamannamanan1

hello  dear 

  I think iam late again  

sorryyy


so   mr  raj malhothra got a   bad past    

some gal dumped him    

then   nyonika   


so basically he don't want manik to  find out about  nandini 


why  he   felt   that  manik s accident happened bcaz of his friends 

it was nyonika  who planned  that accident       right ???????//


as  any businessman  he also wants his son  to  join his business  

so he don't want manik   to know about his passion for music 




but manik   now knows  music  has  something to do with   him

music gives him peace  


he s thankful to nandini  for   that 

so   whatever    Mr malhothra     tells   or tries    our stubborn   monster    will    not let music go from his  life

Tongue


but  he is  ready to join his dad s   business 

     that also   monster  is doing    thinking of  his own benefit 

if he shifts to pune    then   he can  meet  nandini   very often     
brilliant    monster  Tongue




midnight   also  he  wants to chat with nandini 

and  thr she  is    .ready   ...any time     any whr   any thing     FOR HIM  




then the game started  


seriously did manik cheat      or   those lines whr    really from that book 


Smile


one more brilliant update  madam 

keep it up 

loved it 

tc   n bye 

with  lots  n lots of  wishes 

thamanna 
 
all d lines r from d book.. But both cheated. They only wrote d lines they wanted to write.. Not what they randomly found. 

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