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Manan FF - Kaisi yeh Yaariyan season 3 Thread 1 - till chapter 63 (Page 2)

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Simply beautiful
u penned it so nicely
loved it
continue soon

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beautiful start
cont soon
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thats an amazing story u hv started with..loved it..
pls continue soon.

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Thank you guys for reading and liking the beginning. For those wondering why nandu is engaged, she is not yet engaged but she will be and the reason lies in the past which will uncover slowly.
Please bear with me, i will try to update as soon as I can but my regular schedule is a little hectic. I hope you will embark this journey with me. 
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Chapter 7

Friday, April 23, 2016

 

She felt a hand on her tender shoulder and turned around. "Neel!!" she was caught by surprise.

 

"Man how did you know I was coming today, I wanted to surprise you and here I see you staring out of the window, waiting eagerly for your sweetheart." He teased her.

 

Nandini: "I wasn't waiting for you Neel, I didn't even know you would be coming here."

 

Neel: "Oh really?"

 

Nandini: "Yes really. And that makes me wonder, shouldn't you have knocked on the door before coming in. At this time, people are supposed to sleep."

 

Neel: "Oh c'mmon Nandini, you are my fiancee, I don't need to knock on your door to walk in, I can come anytime."

 

Nandini: "Neel!!" she said loudly in anger.

 

He gave her a stern look and shook his head, gesturing clearly that he didn't approve of her defiance. Helpless, Nandini fell quiet.

 

"I have come so far from Zurich leaving my job just for you and you don't have the minimum sense to even give me a smile. You know the extents I have gone and continue to go for your sake and this is what I get in return. You are so selfish that you don't even think about chacha and chachi."

 

"I am sorry" is all Nandini could manage to say. She wasn't sorry, not an inch but Neel knew too well when to press the right button And she was all but a puppet in his hands.

 

Neel: "That's better. Now give me a smile." He stuffed a packet in her hand. " Designer dress for you...in your favourite colour red. I want you to wear this on Saturday. And be ready I am going to pick you up in the evening."

 

Nandini: "I will leave for Panchgani in sometime. I will only return on Friday evening.

 

Neel: "What do you mean? Are you kidding me? I came from Zurich for the engagement and you bloody f**king cant take a week off from that godforsaken school of yours."

 

"I think we had agreed on keeping music out of this. If you go back on your words, I might have to reconsider the engagement." This time Nandini didn't lose her temper, she was cold and sharp, just like her to be fianc.

 

"Cool. I have some one important in my car. I have to drop him home. N you thank God for him because otherwise I would have given you a taste of your defiance." Neel gave her a disgusted look and dashed out.

 

Nandini let out a silent prayer to her Aiyappa for whoever that person was, for unknowingly having saved her from Neel's wrath.

 

She turned towards the window once more to see Neel's car. She tried hard to have a good look at that person but couldn't.

 

A silent tear rolled down her cheeks. "I hate  you Manik.. I hate you.. I hate you...I hate you...I...love you damned." She started sobbing and sank on the floor.

 

 Manik wanted to knock on the door. No it would be wrong to say he wanted to. His feet dragged him to the entrance door. He saw the name plate 'Moorthy's". He was just about to knock when the door opened and Neel walked out. That's when Manik realized the stupidity of his impending action. He was about to knock on a stranger's door at 4.30 am. What was wrong with him?

Was it a wrong decision to take a release from the hospital? But the doctors themselves had released him. Then why was he acting so weird. He pushed the thought away from his mind and followed Neel to his car. As he opened the door, he turned his head around for one last time to look if she was still there at the window. He found no one there.. He got inside and the car drove away towards his home.

 



Edited by rk21 - 23 April 2016 at 6:31pm

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Chapter 8

Friday, April 23, 2016

 

She covered her mouth with both her hands stifling the sound of her sobs. Both Chacha and chachi were up and the last thing she wanted was for them to see her cry.. and cry because of Neel. But was she crying because of Neel?

His shrewdness, his manipulative ways could break any girl down. But Nandini wasn't any girl. Nandini was strong, she could stand up for herself or could she not? She no more knew what she was capable of, she no more knew who she was.

 

"Nandini" she heard her chachi call."Beta get ready, you will miss your bus. I am making you some chole so you could have on your way."

 

"Yes chachi, I am getting ready." Nandini wiped her tears. She walked into the washroom for a quick shower. She  couldn't afford to miss her bus to Panchgani, away from Mumbai, from Neel, from her past and all her memories.

 

She already had her bags packed. She hadn't infact unpacked her bag from Saturday night. She quietly pushed the door to Rishab's room and tiptoed inside. Her little brother was fast asleep. She bent down to kiss him on his forehead, careful not to wake him up. She pulled the blanket over him and retraced back her steps.

 

She hugged her uncle and aunty and slipped in the lunch box in her rucksack.

 

"Nandu beta, whats wrong, you seem so sad today." She could never truly hide her emotions from her chachi. She loved them dearly and so did they. "Did Neel say something Nandu? See you still have a week, if you want to reconsider your decision, we are with u beta. Wish Manik hadn't left." Chachi immediately realized her blunder and tried to cover up her words. But it was too late. Nandi walked out, without turning back for a final goodbye.

 

Chachi thought she had upset an already sad Nandini by mentioning Manik. Little did she know the turmoil that was ransacking Nandini's little head, tormenting her day in and day out for 3 relentless years. Little did she know Nandini didn't turn back because the tears, which she had carefully wiped away in privacy had come back with a revenge and it was not in her power to stop them.

 

 

 



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Chapter 9

Friday, April 23, 2016

 

This has been her routine for the past six months, ever since she took up a music teacher's job in one of Panchgani's boarding school. Everytime she got a weekend off, which was roughly twice a month (for on the other two weeks she had classes on Saturday), she took a bus from Panchgani in the afternoon.  She would reach home quite late in the night, spend the Saturday at home with chacha chachi and Rishab and then take an early morning bus back to Panchgani on Sunday morning. The school had provided her with a small one room apartment at the picturesque foothills of Panchgani.

It was hectic, 5 days of work and then a 7 hour journey. But she preferred it. The once bubbly girl now liked to stay alone, especially since her alone days were now numbered. In less than a week, everything was going to change. The more she tried to think about life post engagement, the more it baffled her. So one fine day she told Aiyappa to deal with it, to decide which way to steer her life and she promised to follow suit. But sadly she had lost faith in Aiyappa too. That's the problem with love, if you love as deeply as Nandini loved Manik and then loose that person, you lose a part of you too. 'Hope', the one thing she always endorsed, the one thing that had brought love and happiness in her, that 'hope' was dead. She lived, survived one day at a time for her family, she cracked jokes and smiled when she was with her students, but in melancholy she was a mere shadow of her former self.

 

Nandini boarded the bus and took her usual window seat. The tears had still not stopped flowing. What had Neel told her "How come she was waiting for him at the window without her knowing that he was supposed to arrive today." Bloody hell, she wasn't waiting for him. She detested his mere sight. Had it not been for the entire mess up, she would have never ever agreed to get engaged to that retard. But she didn't have options did she.


 


And who was she complaining about? Neel, that guy was an outsider who blackmailed her into marrying him. At least he didn't play with her trust like Manik had done. Yes, her very own, dearer than life lover, her bestest friend, her soulmate who promised to be with her ever after and didn't think twice before severing all ties one fine morning. How convenient was it for him to simply disappear without even a 'Bye'. He had promised to take her along to denmark for his treatment. He had promised to never leave her side, promised to protect her from all evil..but his promises were nothing more than a bunch of bloody lies.

 

She should hate him, like really really hate him. He deserved it. And that's what the world thought she did.. Manik's friends, navya, her family every body thought she hated him except perhaps Rishab. Her little brother, who couldn't speak understood silence better than the rest of the world.

 

She couldn't hate him. Despite all the pain he had caused her, every night before going to bed she prayed to Aiyappa to keep him safe wherever he was. Despite knowing he would never return, every morning and night that she spent in Mumbai, she would stare out of her window hoping against hope that Manik would come over like old times sake and pull her into a tight hug. The only ever time she laughed genuinely was with his memories..the only ever thing that kept her alive was his music. And what the world called hatred was just another shade of LOVE.

 



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