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Manan FF - Kaisi yeh Yaariyan season 3 Thread 1 - till chapter 63 - Page 25

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Posted: 7 years ago
words are not enough for your magical writing skills. I mean u r awesome. sooo talented. And the last two part was incredible. The way you showed maniks pain of being all alone was perfect. That song was really an inspirational one not only for our manik but also for your readers .can't wait to read more.Edited by vaanii078 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Damnnn...
Its my fav chappy from the whole ff till yet...
Just loved it...
Uh penned it beautifully...
She gave his Music back to him...
Just like he gave her music after that Pandit incident...
Hats off to uh girl...
Continue soon..
Eagerly waiting for next...


Luv uh,
Garimaaa
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update...
Manan's moments were awesome...
Their convo was superb...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: shoana

awesome update dear
nandini is too cute
she asked him to carry her
Breaking of nandini 's sandal proved beneficial
finally nandini was successful in bringing bAck music in his life
loved the song...the lyrics were Awesome it looked like they were written on manik's condition
thanks for pm dear
take care
stay blessed

Thank u so much.. The soul of manan is their music.. N either they will find it or music will find them.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: shaan...

Amazing update...

Manan's moments were awesome...
Their convo was superb...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

thank u so much,
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: _Samthanian_

Damnnn...
Its my fav chappy from the whole ff till yet...
Just loved it...
Uh penned it beautifully...
She gave his Music back to him...
Just like he gave her music after that Pandit incident...
Hats off to uh girl...
Continue soon..
Eagerly waiting for next...


Luv uh,
Garimaaa

 Yes u r right,, personally even i felt that this was d best chappy till now,  not bcz of fancy wrds or dialogues but because this chapter had a soul of its own.  N lemme tell u a secret,  i didnt plan this,  i didnt choose this.. Literally this song, this music chose me. I had written in d intro that destiny will guide me through as destiny had brought them together n thats what is happening
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: vaanii078

words are not enough for your magical writing skills. I mean u r awesome. sooo talented. And the last two part was incredible. The way you showed maniks pain of being all alone was perfect. That song was really an inspirational one not only for our manik but also for your readers .can't wait to read more.

Thank u dear.. I strive to keep them real..
You r right that song was almost written for him and for us too. They should live, fail and then win and through their journey they should teach us a thing or two about life,  friensdhip and love. 

I m glad u liked it. 

Love
RK
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Posted: 7 years ago
Well this one was actually very special sach me manan wali feeling ati h tumhari fiction pdah kar and it was long enough purane update se thoda bda tha i liked it and i m feeling bad for both them i wish to see them together asap but lets see what is stored for us, and your skills are really great yar matlab kafi ache se u describe the feelings, sceneries and lot of things everything and comparison, kitna time ho gya writing me ? Aisa lgta h its been years youre in writing because the words are awesome, i really need to learn it from you anyways update soon waiting for the next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

Well this one was actually very special sach me manan wali feeling ati h tumhari fiction pdah kar and it was long enough purane update se thoda bda tha i liked it and i m feeling bad for both them i wish to see them together asap but lets see what is stored for us, and your skills are really great yar matlab kafi ache se u describe the feelings, sceneries and lot of things everything and comparison, kitna time ho gya writing me ? Aisa lgta h its been years youre in writing because the words are awesome, i really need to learn it from you anyways update soon waiting for the next update


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Posted: 7 years ago
hey  roh 

            wow    you made my sunday    


this  update  was  magical 

he    had a peaceful sleep    with her 

he don't want to disturb her   but    ...


   Roh  u r  blessed  with  some   magical power yaar     the  way  you wrote   those lines  

uff   ...  hum to  fidaa  hogaye hai  


the word   SUNRISE  :nandinin  what  system boot :laptop  

😃

Nandini  was not just a piece   she was a limited edition  custom made pc  ...

😃

Even god must have been confused ...with her specifications ...

😃


whn manik  offered  to carry her   ...nandini s reaction   was  thanq aaiyyappa    pehli baar MnM have spoken sense

😃

unmatched quality of walking right  in to trouble

😃

manik   did nt like  nandini s  idea  but  he   was  grateful  to her as she had given him some wonderful   moments    so  he agreed to close his eyes

this song I  heard it before   

but toda    this song was  really magical 

thanq for  that  note  whr u  clearly  mentioned 
no        no           ordered  to listen  to this  song

😃

😆😆😆

when she  told him to open his eyes 

that moment      was beautiful     n the   song   ...😊




he    got tears in his eyes 

he  was speechless 
she had given him   a  wonderful moment

nandini   was not bothered about  her feet

she didn't  even care  that  this is the same  MONSTER who left her heart broken 

but she was happy  because  she had   given him his  MUSIC 

typical  nandini 

even if she wants  
even if she tells 

even  if she  tries 

she cant  hurt  her  monster
she cant   she just cant  ...


hey   

superb  update 

👏

take care  dear 
 

thamanna