Originally posted by: etuuum back... :p
(18-20)
you showed navni's friendship so beautifully.. ... their bond is so strong & their naiveness in initial college days gave them courage to fight every odd... u amazingly show navya' s character 's thick and thin... beautifully described everything... nandu's guiltiness because of hiding about manik... & then manan's talk... adding some bliss...
nandini's universal habit reached party venue on time... lolzzz neel 's sarcastic answer not so sarcastic... :p manan's dance... same intense same old love... unknowingly manik also affected by all these... although I couldn't see the video u put in the update... :p
neel such an obsessive jerk... that line was hilarious he has immense pride of being asshole... but on serious note he is so dangerous... the way he think of harming nandini seeing manan's dance... u r so brilliantly showing his manipulative, his cleverness character... ufff hate this neel... -_-
why such a small comment.. Dont b miser with ur words or loveOriginally posted by: AMAR_LOVElove the update
Originally posted by: Aashna_chawlaSorry for not commenting on last chapter actually i m out at my cousin visiting simhasth mela in ujjain and now a days i do nothing rather roaming around the temples and crashing down on the bed anyways lets come to the update, last update was actually good and this one was awesome
"that his past is like an impenetrable wall and the more he tries to dent a hole in it, the more it bruises and bleeds his arms."
My favourite line i wanna ask kha se lati ho aise lines sach me skills bases par toh you're awesome you defined his inner turmoil and helplessness very well i m in love with this update it sounds like real manik malhotra like kyy is back i m so glad i came through this fiction and you gave me my manan back thank you so much
Anyways waiting for the next update, update soon
Originally posted by: BoomchelesaYup thts right..small update is better than no update..!! And update like always bahot achha tha..! The staring part was really very nice..! Its good to see how slowly slowly they building their frndship all over again..!! & tht dialog of nandini when she came out of the car in btw her sleep.." Wolf will take me somwhere.." Haha too good..!!
And i loved the way how acurately u turned manik's feeling tht he shud not trust her also..& .the venom rising inside him..this scene was brilliantly penned..!! & our dear nandu slept..wake her up on tym to see the sunrise..!! & u write many beautiful lines in ur story..i really like it alot..!! Awesome update. UPDATE SOON..!
God Bless u
Originally posted by: thamannamanan1hey rohso u r back with one more amazing updatemanik teasing nandini about her weird ideas 😊making him eat his dinner at a street food stall 😊she tore her chappals n he got one more chance to tease her 😆I don't know why I alwys land up in trouble look 😃the both were emjoying each others company laughing out on silly silly thingsmanik felt envious seeing her sleeping without any tensionshe trusted him a week old frndhe was planning to tell her next da that she shud not trust anyone so easilybut he don't know that HE was the person who already broke her trust n her hearti will also stand here if i feel too sleep then i ll just collapse here n then wolves might carry me some where😃😃😃manik don't have a chanceshe slept holding his hand with hera beautiful updatethnx dear👏
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