ShraMan OS |Ek Duje Ke Vaaste| - Page 3

KostinsQueen

@KostinsQueen

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 8 years ago

Sanno Sanno Sanno 🤗 🤗

Superb Fantastic Awesome. ..

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH

OH MY GOD..U WROTE VERY BEAUTIFULLY GAL...

GOOD HEAVENS !!!!

THAT LAST TWO LINES

SUMO : MATH JAO

SHRAVAN : THEEK HAI ...

WERE SO FREAKING AWESOME. ...

AWWW WHOLE MALHOTRA FAMILY WAS UNABLE TO STOP HIM, BUT HER ONE WORD STOPPED HIM...

THIS IS JUST ❤️

Keep Writing...

Love

Suhasini

Edited by hasinig89 - 8 years ago

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 8 years ago

This was really beautiful, Sanika. Said so much with so little..and I loved how you focused on how important communication is..We humans could have much easier lives if we all chose to communicate...to say the things we are afraid to say..to say the things we hold back..so much is left unsaid nowadays. And Sumo's simple: "Mat jaao" to his even simpler "Theek Hai"..Two words and these two just changed their own destiny. That sorta kinda, absolutely beautiful !

- Reya <3

p.s I rather read your beautiful words than my exam notes..lol.

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indranigupta

@indranigupta

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

Sanika.. beautiful 👏

Mat jao and theek hai... how beautiffully they resonated even when you had completed the piece. I am amazed at the clarity of your thoughts and your simplicity as well.

Lovely👏

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Sanika

@Legilimens

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Posted: 8 years ago

AWW, You guys❤️

Come here, let me hug you zabardastily

You people are the best. the best I tell you!

Will respond individually later.

Love you all🤗 ❤️

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

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Posted: 8 years ago

Mat Jao...Such a sweet, touching OS. 👏

Hope we get something like this in the show too, considering this is how Shraman communicates. 😉

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Hermain

@clockworknerd

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

SO BEAUTIFUL! <3 Definitely my favourite out of all your one-shots on ShraMan (this statement will be be used on more of your future works, don't worry 😆)

"Theek hai," he smiled slightly

Needless to say, this was uber cute! I could imagine his lips curving into that teeny tiny smile on hearing Suman's words from the other side of the phone. Like that feeling *Yes, she finally said it!*

WHERE DO I GET MYSELF A SHRAVAN?

I have forgotten how to comment honestly. So bear with these short versions till I get used to them again 🤗

P.S. I'm here just because you threatened me to comment no matter what xD Warna main tou scraps pe tareef kar deti 😆

Edited by -ZaYalicious- - 8 years ago

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-Shilpaa-

@-Shilpaa-

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

OMG Sani... I was thinking how did I miss your OS.

And after reading it, I'm happy I read it at the perfect time.

After the promo, this's exactly I want to happen..

Hope CVs get inspired from you😉😆

Beautifully written, btw👏

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Sanika

@Legilimens

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -ZaYalicious-
RESERVED!

AAYE CHOKRI

Tu uress nai karegi na, scraps ka spam kar dungi 😆

BUT SO HAPPY YOU ARE HERE *Wipes tears*

Purane dino ki yaad aa gayi *nostalgic*

Kitne raat tak wait karte te tum aur Eeman :p

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 8 years ago

Beautiful OS dear..
So cute ...

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Hermain

@clockworknerd

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanika.

AAYE CHOKRI
Tu uress nai karegi na, scraps ka spam kar dungi 😆
BUT SO HAPPY YOU ARE HERE *Wipes tears*

Purane dino ki yaad aa gayi *nostalgic*
Kitne raat tak wait karte te tum aur Eeman :p

DONE! 😎

Chal bey! I'm here because you brought me here.

THOSE DAYS! <3 And then I was scolded by my mom and Shiz and Eeman laughed on my bad luck xD But I don't visit those threads anymore. I used to so immature, apne comments parh ke embarrassment hoti hai 😆

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