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Posted: 17 April 2016 at 6:32pm | IP Logged
Lils Di, Mahi and Gargi Di, must say this is yet another gorgeous piece and a beautiful read. I could feel the colours and the vibrant aura that had been created with your writing... I loved the fact that you used a colourless metaphor to define Dev and for the first time, the entrance of Sonakshi is bringing colour to his life. It is very realistic and a common thing to do, to let the horrors of the past haunt you and torture you but how important it is to move on. Also, no one messes with Dev but Sonakshi was determined despite knowing that he could possible end up saying something humiliating, which is the first step to love, to try and feel what the other is feeling. Great work chaps!

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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 1:30am | IP Logged
Awesome..

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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 2:09am | IP Logged
This was really beautiful ! 

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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 3:49am | IP Logged
B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L
Kudos to you guys Clap

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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 5:16am | IP Logged
Wonderful OS lily and MahisheeStar

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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Nice work, Lily and Mahi.Smile

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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 9:44am | IP Logged
Very very well written, DEv in your OS is a bit more mellow than he's in the show , though I do wish he was a little less khadoos in the show as well, so yeah I loved his characterisation the best in this OS/
Surprizingly you two are really in tune with each other in regards to writing because it never feels like two people has written it, the flow is totally unbroken and beautiful.

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Posted: 18 April 2016 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
Awesome OS 

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