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Kuch Toh Tha Tere Mere Darmiyaan (Page 3)

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Part 2

Khushi's POV.

I go back into the memories of the person, yes the same person whom I loved so much but he didn't even trust me.

Flash back.

It was 20th birthday, but still I was not happy because tommorow my Papa, Bhai and Bhabhi are going to states but not me due to my stupid exams.
This would be the very first time I am gonna stay aways from Bhabhi. Although even she was not happy leaving me like this but she had to go as it was the opening of our new office which is on the name of my Bhabhi and her 3 year old son ansh. My partner in all my crimes.

I am sitting in my room sulking my face. 
Just then someone closes my eyes. And I know who does this often off course my stupid Bhai Akash.

"Akash Bhai leave me, I am really angry with you" I speak with a irritated tone. Yes I was hell angry on my brother as he forgot about my exams and finalized the date of inauguration.

He left my eyes and came and stood infront of me.

I glare him angrily asking for a good explanation.

He starts speaking. "Actually I didn't forget about your exams. But that stupid trustee of our wanted the inauguration to be day after tommorow itself. As it's a lucky day for him. I could say No as he is very important trustee. I am sorry"
He says making a puppy face, which can melt anyone.

I look at him and smile. Because he exactly knows how to pacify me.
I hug him.

He smiles "Happy birthday princess"

I break the hug "Thanks but no thank before my gift."

He smiles and calls Bhabhi.

Bhabhi, Papa and ansh come in.

And they all together wish me a Happy birthday.

I must say I have got really a best a family in the world.

Papa comes near me and kisses on my forehead.
I smile and hug him.
"Papa your the best father of this world. I know I have not said this to you till know but really I wanna thank you for taking care of me like a mom and even dad. If you are there I am there. I love you papa."

He breaks the hug and runs his hand through my head.
"You know how I am the best father. Because I have the best daughter."
I smile.

Just then ansh pulls my dupatta.
I look down at him and pick him up in my arm.
"So my Partner is going to States haan."

And he nods happily. "Yeshhh bui. I will get gifts for you." He speaks in his kiddish voice.
I hug him.

Payal Bhabhi comes near me "Khushi you will be fine na" She says worried.

I smile at her because I know she would be worried to leave me alone as she has always been a second mom to me.

"Bhabhi I will be all fine, and Riya is also coming here to stay with me, so relax." I say trying to make her feel normal.

She smiles at Me.

"Don't you guys wanna cut the cake." My brother speaks up.

I look at him"Not before you give me my gift."

He actions Bhabhi something and Bhabhi goes out.

I ask ansh what is it by raising and eyebrow. And he just giggles. Leaving me hell confused.

Just then Bhabhi comes in holding two boxes in her hand.

"Bhabhi, Bhai what is it?" I asked being curious.

"Khushi Baccha relax, it's your gift only it won't run away." He says making me quite.

Bhabhi give one box to Bhai and other to baba.

Bhai comes near me. "Vaise I didn't want to buy these for you, but your Bhabhi forced me to buy this." He says.

I glare him and give ansh to Bhabhi and take the box from him. I know he bought it by himself but putting bhabhi's name so that he can show he is totally not interested in my gift. But I know he is really exited to see my reaction.

I open the box and find a beautiful pendent set of diamond in it.
A smile appear on my lips seeing the pendent.

"Bhai, Bhabhi this is so dam amazing." I Speak
They smile at me.
I hug them and kiss on ansh's cheek and he starts rubbing his cheek.
I smile seeing his reaction whenever I kiss him.

Then papa come near me and gives his gift. I smile and open the box.

And I just go blank, as its car keys. I just hug Papa.

"Thank you so much Papa."

"Hello madam the choice was mine ok" My brother speaks up and I go hug him.

He smiles and hug me back.

Then he takes me out to show my car and it's a sports car and red one in colour. My favorite colour. Off course how can I forget if it's chosen by Bhai then it should match all my tastes.

Then me, Bhabhi, Bhai and ansh go on a long drive. Papa couldn't join us as he had some work to finish up today. So he stayed back at home.
I was so happy that day, I never thought that the life I am living is soon going to be turned into a hell. The next morning would take away all my happiness.

Yes next day was the terrible day in my life. After all my family left for States. I was alone in my house waiting for my friend Rhea. Some one knocks on the door. I think it's Rhea and go to open the door.
As soon as I opened the door few men came in pushing me aside and close the door.

I try to shout but they put something on my mouth and I faint...

To be continued...

Hey guys, so here is part 2. Hope you all like it. And thanks a ton for the likes a comments on my stories. It really makes my day best.


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continue soon..

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