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Kuch Toh Tha Tere Mere Darmiyaan (Page 10)

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Posted: 13 May 2016 at 3:58am | IP Logged
Hmm..nice going!!But a little bit violent!!!Arnav is very much rude to Khushi!!!But dunno what Shashi has done to Arnav's family that he is mad at him!!!Arnav is not a beast but revenge made him so!!!It will be interesting to know how did Arnav fal for Khushi, made love for 2yrs and then again they broke up!!!U r writing it very nicely and I feel connecte to d story!!!Thanks for d PM!!!Update soon!!!

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elinad Senior Member

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Loved the update...
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm as well.

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sohara IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 May 2016 at 8:12pm | IP Logged
Nice story.
So Khushi was kidnapped by Arnav. Her dad is Arnav's rival and he kidnapped her as a revenge!

waiting to know what he does with her or is sashi really a bad person!
innocentflower Senior Member

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Posted: 26 May 2016 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
amazing story completely different concept Clap
so arnav kidnapped khushiCry
i think her dad did something terrible now she is paying for it
she fell in love with himShocked
plzzz update soon 
eagerly waiting dear
plzz do pm me for next update 

love you
arshiloversk Senior Member

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Posted: 08 June 2016 at 1:44am | IP Logged

Kuch Toh Tha Tere Mere Darmiyaan Part 4

In evening.

"What have I done Devi maiyya,that your giving me such a life. Bhai, Bhabhi all might be worried about me. And I am sitting here calmly. No I cannot just sit like this over here. I need to do something."
Thinking all this i go near the door and try to open it but it's of no use, the door was locked from outside.

Then I start roaming in the godown to find a way out, and finally after such a long search I get a small door which wasn't locked.

I open the door slowly and see men standing outside.
I close the door back and take a deep breath.

"come on khushi you can do it" I encourage myself and again open the door slowly.

Two men were standing near the gate and talking.

I come out of the godown, and hide behind a pillar.

"ASR isn't so cruel the way he is behaving with that girl. I have seen him helping so many people." One person speaks.

"Yeah even he has helped me alot in my difficult times. May be really this girls father have done something very bad. So ASR is behaving so cruel with her." The other person speaks.

Hearing there talks I feel angry that even they are supporting such a cruel person.
But no this is not the time to get angry, I have to run from here.

I move out from that place hiding behind the walls without making any noise.

I see the gate of the godwon open and go near it, making sure that no one sees me.

I reach near the gate and about to step out, but I see a car coming there. I hide behind the pillar.
The car goes inside and slowly move out of the gate. I see nearby and find the road is fully isolated.
There is not even a single person.
I walk a little more far and find the main road.

I go near a shop in that main road.

I see a old man sitting there, I ask him "Baba which place is this?"
"Where do you wanna go beta"

"I want to reach laxmi nagar"

"That's too far from here, and it's evening and you won't get any lift too here."

"Is there any other way baba"

"No beta you will get the bus or taxi only in morning here. This is village after all."

"Ohk baba, thanks."

"Beta you can do one thing stay here for night, where will you go alone."

"Ok baba thank you so much, I will never forget your help."

He smiles and takes her inside.

As I go inside I get the shock of my life.

The devil from whom I am running aways is sitting right in front of me.

He gets angry seeing me there.

Baba goes near him.

Baba: Arnav beta had your dinner.

Arnav: yes baba, and who's this girl?

Baba: she has lost her way, so I said her to stay here for a night.

I get scared seeing his angry glare.

"Baba this man" I speak stammering.

"He is like my son beta. He has helped us alot in our miserable time." He says keeping a hand on his head.

"Baba I will leave now, My family will get tensed." I speak up trying to escape.

But his voice stops me again. "Miss Gupta do you need a lift to your house."

"You know her arnav"

"Yes baba after all she is richest business man Shashi Gupta's daughter" he speaks giving me angry looks.

"Ohk, your leaving now"

"Yes baba i will take leave will come next week, have some work. I will drop her and go home."

"No it's ok I will manage." I speak..

"Beta he stays near by there, he will drop you. You can trust him, he is very good person. "

" Baba woh actually..." Before I complete he comes near me and speaks in slow voice

"Come out silently or the consequences won't be good."

I get scared and nod at him.

"What happened beta?" Baba asks confused.

"Nothing baba i will accompany him" I fair a smile

He too smiles "Ok beta"

We both leave together.

The whole journey was silent. He was driving rashly but the way from where I escaped was different from the way we are traveling. Getting tensed where he is taking me I try to ask him. "Where are you taking me?"

He remains silent.

This angers me more and I shout " Don't you have even a bit of Mercy, my family would be worried for me it's been two days since I haven't talked to them. What if some one had done the same thing with. Wouldn't your family be worried."

He stops the car and goes out and even I follow him.

Now we both are standing in the middle of the road with no one around us except darkness.

"Fine I will give you your cell, but you need to keep a swear on your Bhabhi that your not gonna tell about kidnap. Your just gonna speak what I am gonna say to you." He says with calm face.

I look at him confused, I want to reject his offer but if I reject I won't get a chance to speak to my family. And they would be hell worried.

After alot of thinking I agree to him.

He returns me back my phone saying I need to tell them that i am staying in my friend Rhea's house.

I agree and then call and talk to my family. I have missed them alot in these two days. When I was Speaking to them I almost broke down. After talking to them for few mins I cut the call as I didnt want them to know in what problem I am.

In all this process a pair of moist eyes were watching me. Yeah it's none other then Arnav Singh Raizada. Seeing me watch him he turns other side and wipes his tears.

He still facing his back to me " Get in the car"

Saying this he goes inside and even I follow him.

I feel confused and think " Why is he sad, he must be happy as I am suffering, but why those tears is there anything else which he is hiding from me. Is there something which I don't know."

Hey guys, i know this is very short update.. But i promise next one would be a bigger update.. Till that keep liking and commenting...


Edited by arshiloversk - 08 June 2016 at 1:49am

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-Roshini- IF-Sizzlerz

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Nice update

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