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SUR NA SAJE - RAGLAK FF Part 18 updated PG 27 (Page 2)

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Posted: 17 April 2016 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Very interesting
Please do continue

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Hey nice start
Continue soon
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PART 1

 

Kolkata 2011 

"Raagini..."...she heard his voice, her heart skipped a beat, though that wasn't something new. They were married for almost a year now...and whenever, he would call out her name she would go weak on her knees. "Yes, I am coming, just a minute"...she replied. Her dear sister Swara, was pregnant by 5 months, and she was doing her best to ensure her comfort. After all very soon she would be a Chaachi/Maasi. She left the kitchen with Swara's glass of milk in her hand...

Suddenly those fiery voices recurred..."What have you done Raagini?"..."How could you do this?"..."You are a criminal!!"...she kept on pleading..."Lakshya believe me, I did not do this, I cannot do this"..."Is there nobody in the house who can really trust me?"

Mumbai 2016

She woke up with cold sweats and palpitations. For the past 5 years she had been haunted by this dream...not a dream...a reality -  THE REALITY of her life. The alarm was ringing relentlessly. She had been extremely tired by the interview the previous evening and was exhausted even now...more emotionally than physically.

She had received a call after coming back from the studio...and it disturbed her to the core. Even after 5 years she could recognise his voice clearly. But why was he calling her up...?? She had hung up pretending not to have heard anything and now she wished that she didn't.

 

Kolkata 2016

He was watching her interview as mesmerised by her beauty as before. She was definitely more mature now and sarcastic ...or rather the circumstances forced her to be so...they forced her to be so. His eyes were red by the time the interview was over. What had they done to her? They were no less than criminals...He, Lakshya Maheshwari, was the one at fault. He could not support his wife when she needed it the most. When she left the house quietly...her eyes questioned just one person...and that was him.

The Maheshwaris understood that Lakshya was extremely upset and disturbed by the interview...and so were they. The FAMILY was guilty as well. At Swara's behest he mustered up the courage and tried to call up Raagini (procuring the number from a studio), but she hung up the call.

Probably he would need to visit Mumbai. A lot was at stake.

 

To be contd...



Edited by priya_86 - 17 April 2016 at 10:31am

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Posted: 17 April 2016 at 10:36am | IP Logged
wow Priya this is great i love the suspense 
aww poor Ragini she has haunted by her past not good 

Laksh didnt support her when she needed him that is not good

I cannot blame her for hanging up 

I wish this chapter was longer 

Please post the next part soon, cant wait to read what happens next and what happened in the past, Thank you

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Posted: 17 April 2016 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rbb1

wow Priya this is great i love the suspense 
aww poor Ragini she has haunted by her past not good 

Laksh didnt support her when she needed him that is not good

I cannot blame her for hanging up 

I wish this chapter was longer 

Please post the next part soon, cant wait to read what happens next and what happened in the past, Thank you
Past will unfold...slowly...but dont worry this is a finite series...unlike our soaps Big smile
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Posted: 17 April 2016 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Wow..yaar..

Very well written

Waiting past to unfold..

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Great Priya!!! This is fantastic!!! The suspense is good enough, waiting for the next part!!

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nice update...

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