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SUR NA SAJE - RAGLAK FF Part 18 updated PG 27 (Page 12)

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Lovely update thank you wonder what Laksh will do can't wait to read the next updates

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This story is amazing Priya, I am loving it. Great job! Thanks for the PM. I am waiting for the next part. Tongue
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Hi guys...Part 10 updated

 

PART 10

 

MUMBAI 2013

 

Ragini was nervous, scared...excited...she was waiting for her formal audition in front of the panel. Some amazing music personalities were present, whom she had admired since her childhood days. Today, was the day, when she would be performing in front of them. She was having cold sweats and her hands were clammy.

"Ms Ragini, can you please come in to Room no 4 for the auditions"...a voice announced

Ragini stood up, her feet trembling...but her spirits high

She entered the room...and went and touched the feet of the stalwart panellists. This was a dream come true for her, whether she was selected or not was secondary to her...just performing in front of them was sufficient for her.

The panellists had apparently heard her voice before, so after taking a formal interview, she was asked to proceed with her song

She closed her eyes, took a deep breath...and sang from her soul

"Vo bhuli daastaa lo phir yaad aa gayi

Nazar ke saamane ghata si chha gayi

 

Kaha se phir chale aaye, vo kuchh bhatake hue saaye

Vo kuchh bhule huye nagame, jo mere pyaar ne gaaye

Vo kuchh bikhari hui yaade, vo kuchh tute hue nagame

Paraaye ho gaye to kyaa, kabhi ye bhi to the apane

Na jaane inase kyo milakar, nazar sharma gayi

Vo bhuli daastaa lo phir yaad aa gayi"

 

She sang at one go...

 

When she stopped...the panellists just stared at her...

Ragini panicked...she was expecting a reaction...good or bad...but here they were just quiet. Her heart sank

 

Suddenly a senior member stood up and gave her an ovation, and then all the others stood up too.

 

"Ms Ragini you were mesmerizing, after years we have heard such a beautiful, pure voice..."...and so on on and so forth

 

Ragini had tears in her eyes.

 

Mr Mehta immediately wanted to sign an exclusive contract for a year...and the amount was raised to 75 lacs...Ragini was on the way of becoming a singing sensation...Her first album would be named "SAAZ"

 

And...There was no looking back after that

...

 

MUMBAI 2016

 

Lakhsya Maheshwari's plan was not a convincing one, but he had to do this.

 

Ragini was recording at the studio, when she received a call...she felt irritated, people rarely called her up during recordings

 

"Hello"...she said sounding disturbed

 

"Is this Ms Ragini?"...the voice enquired

 

She replied in affirmative

 

"Your friend Mr Lakshya Maheshwari has had an accident, can you please come to Leelavati Hospital? This is the only contact that he can provide since his family stays in Kolkata."

 

Ragini, stood there frozen. She didn't know what to say or do.

 

"I am coming...is it serious"...she was surprised at herself for this reaction...but it came spontaneously

 

"Not very serious, but he has fractured his left ankle and shall not be able to walk, he needs rest for 2 weeks"

 

...

 

Ragini went to the hospital and was shown Lakshya's room

 

She glared at him angrily

 

"Listen I don't have time to waste..." she started

 

"But still you came to meet me..." ...Lakshya said softly

 

"No...I have just come to release you and drop you to the hotel...and leave..since you don't have any relatives here"...she said angrily

 

The doctor broke in the conversation..."Ms Ragini, Mr Lakshya has had an ankle fracture and he needs rest, he cannot travel back right now,...since you are his only acquaintance here, I would advise you to take him to your place...since he needs medical care"

 

"In that case why don't you keep him in the hospital?" Ragini asked genuinely

"Because this injury, doesn't merit a hospital admission...just care at home and bed rest"...the doctor replied "Anyways our hospital is having a crisis of beds...and we can't really accommodate him"..."He gave us your name and contact as the nearest relative, but if you don't want to take his responsibility it's fine...we shall contact his family in Kolkata...its going to be a complicated job, but we have no other option"

 

Ragini stood there undecidedly, just as the doctor was about to go she replied "Wait a minute doctor, I shall take him home...its just 2 weeks right?"...the doctor nodded is head

 

"Please go ahead with the discharge formalities"

 

Ragini went with the doctor...poor girl she just missed the sight of the doctor turning back and winking at Lakshya who in turn smirked.

 

After Ragini left, Lakshya recalled the incidents

 

He knew Dr Vijay Deshmukh very well. He had studied in Kolkata with Lakshya till his high school after which he studied medicine and moved to Mumbai. Presently, he was an orthopaedic surgeon in Mumbai.

 

Lakshya seeked his help...and explained his situation to him. He was ready to help at once. "But Lakshya one small injury is needed...don't worry I shall blow that out of proportion" He told Lakshya

"Anything to get Ragini and my daughter back"...Lakshya said firmly..."a small injury is nothing...I can take up bigger challenges"

 

Lakshya deliberately tripped 5 stairs at his hotel and fell...the ankle injury was painful...but he didn't mind that...the only thing that bothered him was that...what if Ragini didn't turn up? But he knew her well...and was sure whatever, she made out in front of him...deep down she still cared

 

And she proved him right

 

 

What Ragini didn't realise was that these 2 weeks...would change everything

"Woh bhuli dastaan lo phir yaad aa gayi...

 

 

To be contd...

 

 

Guys this is the link to the song... I am a fan of old Hindi songs...and this song is beautiful

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n3JMg0IhdSY



Edited by priya_86 - 19 May 2016 at 11:05am

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Yeee!!!! I came first...Priya this is superb... So Laksh got injured purposely...Big smile
Nice... So eager to know how Ragini is going to manage two weeks...LOL

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Originally posted by -Claptrap-

Yeee!!!! I came first...Priya this is superb... So Laksh got injured purposely...Big smile
Nice... So eager to know how Ragini is going to manage two weeks...LOL
Thanks Poorvi...great to know you are tolerating this crapLOL
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Yeee!!!! I came first...Priya this is superb... So Laksh got injured purposely...Big smile
Nice... So eager to know how Ragini is going to manage two weeks...LOL
Thanks Poorvi...great to know you are tolerating this crapLOL
This is not crap Priya... Don't say that again... And ofcourse next update is going to be awesome because in those 2 weeks we'll get Sargam-Laksh moments also along with our RagYa...Embarrassed

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