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Posted: 03 June 2016 at 7:01pm | IP Logged

My Rhyme.

(Inspired by:)

Old Macdonald had  a Farm
E-I-E-I-O
And in the farm he had a cow
E-I-E-I-O
With a moo moo here, and a moo moo there
Here a moo , there a moo, and everywhere a moo moo (Old Mac...

And in the farm he had a pig, 
E-I-E-I-O
With an oink oink here and an oink oink there
Here an oink, there an oink and everywhere an oink oink  (Old mac..

And in the farm he had a duck
E-I-E-I-O
With a quack quack here and a quack quack there
Here a quack, there a quack, and everywhere a quack quack..(Old Mac...

And in the farm he had a horse
E-I-E-I-O
With a neigh neigh here and a neigh neigh there and everywhere a neigh neigh(Old Mac...

And in the farm he had a lamb
E-I-E-I-O
With a baa baa here and a baa baa there and everywhere a baa baa (Old Mac...

And in the farm he had some chicks
With a cluck cluck here and a cluck cluck there
Here a cluck there a cluck and everywhere a cluck cluck
With a baa baa here and a baa baa there and everywhere a baa baa 
With a neigh neigh here and a neigh neigh  there and everywhere a neigh neigh
With a quack quack here and a quack quack there and everywhere a quack quack
With an oink oink here and an oink oink there and everywhere an oink oink
With a moo moo here and a moo moo there and everywhere a moo moo
Old Macdonald had a farm
E-I-E-I-O!

My version:

Our AkDha Admirers have a thread
E-I-E-I-O
And in the Thread we have a Prez
E-I-E-I-O
With her siggie here here  and a siggie there there
Here a siggie, there a siggi
And everywhere a siggie siggie (Our AkDha ...

And in the thread we have  a Vicey
E-I-E-I-O
With her  collage here here and her collage there there
Here a collage, there a collage 
And everywhere a collage collage  (Our AkDha...

And in the thread we have Rhymes
E=I=E-I-O
With a  rhyme here and a rhyme there
Here a rhyme  there a rhyme 
And every where a rhyme rhyme ( Our AkDha...

And in the thread we have Quizzes
E-I-E-I-O
With a program here here and a program there there
Here a program there a program 
And everywhere a program program ( Our AkDha..

And in the thread we have our Baby
E-I-E-I-O
With her post here and her post there
Here a post and there a post 
And everywhere her post post (OurAkDha...

And in the thread we have Joy and Fun 
E-I-E-I-O
With a fun here here  and a fun there there,
Here a Joy there a Joy and everywhere Fun and Joy
With the Baby's post here and the Baby's post there and everywhere her post post
With a quiz here and a quiz there and everywhere a quiz quiz 
With a rhyme here and a rhyme there and everywhere a rhyme rhyme
With a collage here and a collage there and everywhere a collage collage
With the siggie here and siggie there and everywhere a siggie siggie
With the fun here and a fun there
Everywhere  Fun Fun  Fun Fun..DancingDancingDancing

Our AkDha Admirers have a thread
E-I-E-I-O!Hug

Karkuzhali.



                        





Edited by karkuzhali - 03 June 2016 at 8:44pm

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OMG...Am I dreaming or is Shyamala Aunty really here? Shocked


Missed you a lot Aunty. Hope you are much better now...Hug



And my dear Saraswathi Aunty, what a lively and lovely rhyme. The fun and joy is oozing out from it's words and tone! Loved it. Star Embarrassed

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Thanks Shagun,
Shyamala Aunty has reviewed Lashy's first 2 chapters of her Novel in her thread.

Saraswathi Aunty.

Originally posted by -AkDha.Lover-

OMG...Am I dreaming or is Shyamala Aunty really here? Shocked


Missed you a lot Aunty. Hope you are much better now...Hug



And my dear Saraswathi Aunty, what a lively and lovely rhyme. The fun and joy is oozing out from it's words and tone! Loved it. Star Embarrassed

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Originally posted by karkuzhali



<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">My Rhyme.</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">(Inspired by:)</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Old Macdonald had a Farm</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">E-I-E-I-O</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">And in the farm he had a cow</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">E-I-E-I-O</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With a moo moo here, and a moo moo there</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Here a moo , there a moo, and everywhere a moo moo (Old Mac...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">And in the farm he had a pig,</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">E-I-E-I-O</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With an oink oink hereand an oink oink there</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Here an oink, there an oink and everywhere an oink oink (Old mac..</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">And in the farm he had a duck</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">E-I-E-I-O</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With a quack quack here and a quack quack there</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Here a quack, there a quack, and everywhere a quack quack..(Old Mac...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">And in the farm he had a horse</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">E-I-E-I-O</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With a neigh neigh here and a neigh neigh there and everywhere a neigh neigh(Old Mac...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">And in the farm he had a lamb</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">E-I-E-I-O</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With a baa baa here and a baa baa there and everywhere a baa baa (Old Mac...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">And in the farm he had some chicks</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With a cluck cluck here and a cluck cluck there</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Here a cluck there a cluck and everywhere a cluck cluck</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With a baa baa here and a baa baa there and everywhere a baa baa</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With a neigh neigh here and a neigh neigh there and everywhere a neigh neigh</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With a quack quack here and a quack quack there and everywhere a quack quack</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With an oink oink here and an oink oink there and everywhere an oink oink</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With a moo moo here and a moo moo there and everywhere a moo moo</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Old Macdonald had a farm</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">E-I-E-I-O!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">My version:</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">
</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Our AkDha Admirers have a thread</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">E-I-E-I-O</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">And in the Thread we have a Prez</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">E-I-E-I-O</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With her siggie here here and a siggie there there</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Here a siggie, there a siggi</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">And everywhere a siggie siggie (Our AkDha ...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">And in the thread we have a Vicey</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">E-I-E-I-O</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With her collage here here and her collage there there</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Here a collage, there a collage</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">And everywhere a collage collage (Our AkDha...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">And in the thread we have Rhymes</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">E=I=E-I-O</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With a rhyme here and a rhyme there</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Here a rhyme there a rhyme</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">And every where a rhyme rhyme ( Our AkDha...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">And in the thread we have Quizzes</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">E-I-E-I-O</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With a program here here and a program there there</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Here a program there a program</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">And everywhere a program program ( Our AkDha..</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">And in the thread we have our Baby</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">E-I-E-I-O</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With her post here and her post there</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Here a post and there a post</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">And everywhere her post post (OurAkDha...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">And in the thread we have Joy and Fun</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">E-I-E-I-O</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With a fun here here and a fun there there,</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Here a Joy there a Joy and everywhere Fun and Joy</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With the Baby's post here and the Baby's post there and everywhere her post post</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With a quiz here and a quiz there and everywhere a quiz quiz</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">With a rhyme here and a rhyme there and everywhere a rhyme rhyme</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With a collage here and a collage there and everywhere a collage collage</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With the siggie here and siggie there and everywhere a siggie siggie</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">With the fun here and a fun there</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Everywhere Fun Fun Fun Fun..DancingDancingDancing</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Our AkDha Admirers have a thread</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">E-I-E-I-O!Hug</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Karkuzhali.</font>



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v cute rhyme aunty... Embarrassed Star

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Now, now, Akka, if you start pulling my leg so hard, I shall have, over and above  my RA, which affects my knees, one leg longer than the other. The effects of such a development can be easily imagined!WinkWink

Shyamala

Originally posted by karkuzhali


My dear Shyamala,
Wow! I have hit a Jackpot!!

Saraswathi Akka.


Edited by sashashyam - 04 June 2016 at 12:54am

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Now this is what I would call a telling piece. It  says  a lot, both to the reader and to the characters themselves, ie Baby  Sarasa,  Jodha and Jalal. Very well conceived, Saraswathi Akka!

I am highlighting the parts I specially enjoyed in blue.

Shyamala

Originally posted by karkuzhali


Baby travels back to the 16th Century , when Jalaluddhin Mohammad Akbar was ruling over almost the entire Hindustan.
(Shagun, the Prez of the Akdha Admirers' Association, is also an admirer of Baby Sarasa and her adventures..She wishes  Baby to travel to Jalal's  DEK in the 16th century,  by travelling in  a Time Machine..

 Baby Sarasa, motivated by her loveable sister, travels back to the mid 16th century...)


Baby lands near Jodha's apartment.
Baby: (thinks)...mm.. whose palace is it? Is it slim aunty's?  No, no it is not..because no shouting is heard  or no things are seen thrown outside... Or is it Rahim's mummy's? But where has Rahim gone? ...
(While she  is thinking, she hears "Hey Manmohana "song.  She goes inside..Jodha is doing arti..Baby is stunned by her beauty..For a moment she thinks Jodha aunty is prettier than her mommy. But suddenly she erases the thought from her mind..'no,no, my mommy is the best..')

This last bit is psychologically perfect. No child will accept that anyone else can overtake her Mummy in any respect. And then  beauty, and much else, lies in the eyes of the beholder!

Jodha: Hey pretty child.. who are you? What do yo want?
Baby: Jodha Aunty, you look very sweet.. Can I call you Akka?
Jo: Sure Baby, here take the prasad...where did you come from? You dress differently.. and, how do you know my name?
Baby: Akka, do you know I come from the 21st Century? There we all dress up only in short clothes and no one will wear like you, or the slim aunty or the white dress grandma..
Jo:(Laughs) Who are all of them?
Baby: Don't you know them? They are all your relatives..
Jo: Oh.. I catch your point..(laughs).( Jodha is pretty sharp, seeing the way in which she cottons on to Baby's cryptic descriptions so quickly!)
By the way, how do you know us?
Baby: We watch Jodha Akbar TV serial ...and I watch you daily.. I want to see Jalal uncle..Can I see him..?
Jo: How could you watch me after 450 years? Do I look old in that? Oho! The vanity of woman!
Baby: No.. you look pretty in that..But I don't know about all these .things.If you want I will ask Ekta aunty and tell you..Can we go to Jalal uncle now?
Jo:Oh, yes.. he is in the DEK after so many days.. Come on..I'll take you there..

(Mothibai comes..)
Moti: Who is this Jodha.. Did you bring this child also like that Babu you brought from the temple?
Jo: No,no Moti...She has come travelling backwards from the 21st century..She wants to see Shahenshah..and I am taking her to the DEK..
( They go to the DEK)
Baby: What is a DEK akka.. My teacher told me that ships have decks.. Is Jalal uncle waiting for us in the ship? A close cousin of handsome- handmany!
Jo:(takes a second to grasp the question) No, no no baby, DEK means a place where people come and make complaint to the king, and the king will solve it..
Baby: Like our Princi's room..
Jo:( Thinks for a second and decides to nod)Yes..yes.. it is like that..Now this is perceptive and very funny.  Jodha clearly has no idea  that Baby is talking about her school principal, but she plays it safe and nods!Which is what many people do often, at times with unexpected consequences!
( They reach the DEK...Jalal sees Jodha entering the DEK with a Five year old pretty girl..His imagination goes wild..)
Jalal: ( Speaks to himself) Oh, how lovely my sweetheart looks..and the pretty baby.. I wish I have a daughter like the little one after I get an heir from my Jodha Begum..(Aloud)..What are we going to discuss today Atgah Saap?
Atgah: Huzoor! No one is having any problem in the sultanate ..Everybody is paying the taxes without grumbling..People are happy..and no one has brought any complaint today Shahenshah..
Jalal: (angrily) Then why did you convene the DEK Atgah Saap? I would have spent more useful time in the Harem..Yes, being harangued by his Ammijaan, Ruqaiya and at times even Salima and Jodha for his acts of commission and omission, mostly wrongly. The chap is a glutton for punishment!Wink
(Suddenly a tiny voice is heard...and Lo! It is Baby Sarasa!)
Baby: I have got a complaint Uncle..
Jalal: Who is there, come out from behind the purdah...
(Baby comes to the aisle...like our elected MPs  do in the Parliament..Rustling noise is heard in the Diwan..)
Baby: Uncle, I always see the slim aunty slapping the tall man in girl's dress..Poor man.. Will you please give punishment to slim aunty?
Jalal: My dear child... This is the only thing that your uncle as Shahenshah cannot do!LOLWink ONLY? Now that is a joke!

* * * * * * * * * * * *

( Shagun is sitting staring at the AAA page..Grandma comes there)
Grandma: Hi, Shagun.. what are you looking at? You don't even see me coming..eh?
Shagun: Sorry grandma, I didn't see you coming.. I was watching Baby travelling back to the 16th century to the Akbar's Durbar in the time machineWink
Grandma :???ConfusedConfused


Karkuzhali.





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No, my little Shagun, you are not dreaming. Nor am I much better. 

What I am feeling is not good but guilty, for not having read so many of these delightful skits of Baby Sarasa, plus having neglected a few other things that I should have done. So now I am doing (a very pleasant) prayaschit!

I missed you too, my pet. But I was in such bad shape so much of the time  that I could not cope at all. You must excuse me. I hope I am somewhat better by the time Chandragupta Maurya comes along.

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by -AkDha.Lover-

OMG...Am I dreaming or is Shyamala Aunty really here? Shocked

Missed you a lot Aunty. Hope you are much better now...Hug

And my dear Saraswathi Aunty, what a lively and lovely rhyme. The fun and joy is oozing out from it's words and tone! Loved it. Star Embarrassed

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Posted: 04 June 2016 at 1:23am | IP Logged

My dear Shyamala, 
You may not know how both Baby and  I missed your comments on our posts..
I now feel like getting the top rank in the public exams!TongueTongue
Please read also the other posts of Baby..

Yours
Saraswathi Akka.
P.S.1. Chandragupt? When is it coming?
      2. Pl read Baby's review of Rajat's re entry in "Naagin"

S.A.

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