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Posted: 25 September 2016 at 2:53am | IP Logged
wow aunty
just love this post
awesome one
aww baby Sara want to write stories like other
that was great dear plz write
I love to read yours also
and babloo want to her
what a sweet brother
I just wanted to pull his cheek
aww both thinking deep
and grandma came and she also want to help baby Sara
story is fantastic baby Sara
your jalal uncle and jodha akka is very sweet
and of course your jalal is handmany
and tell you a secret dear I also don't like that slim aunty who was always smoking hukka and jalal badi ammi is just too much hate both of them
love all the scene jodha and jalal marriage
and sukanya wedding
very beautifully write all scene
and after that that fat lady come I also don't like her
yes you are right her dance is not nice and she don't have proper dress also to cover herself
she try to kill jalal but jodha save him
love the ending dear both celebrate Valentine and went for picnic also how romantic
and they live happily
what a perfect ending baby sara
love it love it dear
happy Sunday

Edited by binduprasad41 - 25 September 2016 at 2:54am

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Originally posted by karkuzhali



              

                                Baby Sarasa writes a fan fiction.

(Babloo sees Baby Sarasa  playing with her Jalal , Jodha dolls. He goes to her.)

Babloo: 'kka, why didn't you call me ? I also want to play with Jalal uncle doll..
Baby: I am not playing.. I am thinking of a story..
Babloo: What story?
Baby: It's called FF..
Babloo: What is FF'kka?
Baby: Grandma said it is story.. She said so many of her friends write FF.   ...Shagun'kka, Harshu'kka, Lashy'kka  and many others..I also want to write one..

>>congo baby fr strting a new ff...Tongue

Babloo: Baby'kka   I'll help you..
Baby: No you can't..I am going to write about Jalal uncle and Jodha akka...You don't know anthing about them.. you have not watched the Jodha Akbar serial in TV..

>>LOLLOL
Babloo: Yes.. I know about Jodha'kka  going to war and Jalal uncle  going to forest to kill Tiger Mohan..
Baby: But i am not going to write about that..
Babloo:Write about red powder war'kka..that  will be fun..
Baby: Shh.. Babloo.. keep quiet for a while.. I am thinking...

>>omg dis red powder and tiger will never leave usROFL

                                                        

Image result for caricature of a little girl thinking and a little boy looking at her


Babloo: Okay'kka.. I'll also think..

                                                               
Image result for caricature of a little girl thinking and a little boy looking at her



(Grandma comes)

G'ma:Well,..well..kutties.. sitting quiet? .. What are you up to?
Babloo: Shh... grandma.. Baby'kka is thinking.. I'm also thinking for her...
Gma: Oh ho, that's great! tell me what is your "Baby'kka"  thinking about?
Babloo: 'kka is writing FF story..like Harshu'kka and Shagun'kka..
G'ma: Ah! That's good..what story is she writing?
Babloo: It is Jalal uncle and Jodha'kka's story..
G'ma: Okay...
Babloo: And I am helping 'kka..That's why I am thinking...
Baby: No grandma,he is telling lies.. he doesn't  know the story of Jalal uncle..

>> ohh k so now would love to read baby's version of ja....Tongue
G'ma: okay Baby kanna.. You write the story..
Babloo: ...And I'll  help her..

(So Baby writes the  OS Fan Fiction...)

Baby writes  her favrit story: 
  
                                     The Adventure of Jalal  Uncle.



" Hi my friends..I love the Jodha Akbar serial very much. That is why I am going to tell you the story of Jalal uncle and Jodha akka. 
Once upon a time, there was a king called Jalal. He was very brave, and handmany. He had a  tall ammijaan and a white dress Badi ammi. He had also a slim aunty,who was always smoking hukka.  Shagun akka and Harshu akka call her with a different name. I don't like her because she always shouts at her servants and even slaps the tall man who wears girls' dress..I don't know why she is 
in his palace..And, I like the tall ammijaan but don't like badi ammi. She is bad..
"One day   King Jalal( can I call him Jalal uncle friends?) went to another  place with his friend Abdul.. He was wearing tilak and he looked very handmany. While he was walking on the road, he saw a princess in a .. in a..dooly.
She didn't see him.. But he was very happy to see her..Then..then...what happened..?

>>Day DreamingDay Dreaming
...They went to the riverside and suddenly it started raining..The princess and others ran.. Then the princess' anklet dropped on the mud..But my Jalal uncle didn't run because he liked the rain . He saw the anklet and picked it. He played with it for some time and finally took it with him..Dancing
"Then he came to know that this princess' name was Jodha. He wanted to marry her.Day Dreaming
And then he went back to his place.After some days, Jodha akka's daddy, who is also a king, wanted her to marry Jalal uncle. So he went and asked uncle to marry Jodha. Do you know how happy he was to marry Jodha akka?Big smile But poor Jodha akka! They didn't tell her  that she was going to marry Jalal uncle. She didn't like him because his grandfather killed Jodha akka's grandfather..Poor mummy of Jodha akka..She doesn't know anything else except to cry...She cried and cried.CryCry.But any how the wedding took place. Jodha akka was very sad..Cry
"Then Jalal uncle and Jodha akka came to uncle's palace. There the tall grandma welcomed her with all smiles.Big smileBig smile.But the white dress grandma showed an angry face like the angry bird..Angry
" After some time, Rajat uncle took Jodha akka to a jungle.Oh god! There was a big tiger which came and attacked himShocked..He wanted to shoot the tiger,but do you know what happened? Jodha akka  had removed all the bullets from the gun and so the gun didn't shoot..Poor uncle , he somehow managed to kill the tiger with his small knife.But he had wounds all over his body and face and he swooned..Jodha akka had a shock Shockedand she cried and cried.CryCry
"Jalal uncle was then brought to the palace and was given medicine by the doctors..So he was cured and then he went to Jodha's parents' house for Sukanya akka's wedding. Do you know who Sukanya akka is? She is Jodha Akka's little sister..
"After her wedding  both of them come back to Jalal uncle's palace.Then something happened..and Jalal uncle became angry with Jodha akka. Angry A fat woman came to stay with him.. They said she was a dancer..But her dance was not nice..She was also not dressed fully. May be she was poor..My grandma also said 
that she was dangerous and had poison in her body. But Jalal uncle said that he liked her.. I think he pretended before akka...Poor akka.. she became more and more sad.Unhappy.I will also feel sad if my friend says that she likes somebody else and not me..

>>Ouch
"And one day Jalal uncle said he will marry the fat woman and fixed his marriage. On the  wedding day, the fat woman gave poison to Jalal uncle, but do you know what happened? My Jodha akka bounced on her and took the cup and drank the poison and fell down.Shocked Jalal uncle cried and criedCryCry, and my grandma who was watching them also cried..Cry

>>OuchCry
"But my Jalal uncle prayed to God and finally akka became alive ..
"After that they celebrated Valentine's Day and went out on a picnic in a fancy dress..And they lived happily ever after!!Dancing

>>PartyParty
"That is the end of Jodha Akbar story! Hope you like it!!Big smileStar"Image result for picture of jodha jalal dolls

                                                              

Baby Sarasa.

>>wat a beauitful os dear babyHug u made me recall ja and der happy moments...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed


Karkuzhali.

                                                                 


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Congratulations Baby for your new OSHug.I enjoyed it Tongue.


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Originally posted by karkuzhali



              

                                Baby Sarasa writes a fan fiction.

(Babloo sees Baby Sarasa  playing with her Jalal , Jodha dolls. He goes to her.)

Babloo: 'kka, why didn't you call me ? I also want to play with Jalal uncle doll..
Baby: I am not playing.. I am thinking of a story..
>>>Wow great baby!!Clap All the best!
Babloo: What story?
Baby: It's called FF..
Babloo: What is FF'kka?
Baby: Grandma said it is story.. She said so many of her friends write FF.   ...Shagun'kka, Harshu'kka, Lashy'kka  and many others..I also want to write one..

Babloo: Baby'kka   I'll help you..
Baby: No you can't..I am going to write about Jalal uncle and Jodha akka...You don't know anthing about them.. you have not watched the Jodha Akbar serial in TV..
Babloo: Yes.. I know about Jodha'kka  going to war and Jalal uncle  going to forest to kill Tiger Mohan..
>>>ShockedLOL
Baby: But i am not going to write about that..
Babloo:Write about red powder war'kka..that  will be fun..
>>>Hmm great story of Jodha Akbar... is fun for even 3 yr old! ROFL
Baby: Shh.. Babloo.. keep quiet for a while.. I am thinking...
>>>Clever Baby!Star

                                                        

Image result for caricature of a little girl thinking and a little boy looking at her


Babloo: Okay'kka.. I'll also think..
>>>AwwEmbarrassed

                                                               
Image result for caricature of a little girl thinking and a little boy looking at her



(Grandma comes)

G'ma:Well,..well..kutties.. sitting quiet? .. What are you up to?
Babloo: Shh... grandma.. Baby'kka is thinking.. I'm also thinking for her...
Gma: Oh ho, that's great! tell me what is your "Baby'kka"  thinking about?
Babloo: 'kka is writing FF story..like Harshu'kka and Shagun'kka..
G'ma: Ah! That's good..what story is she writing?
Babloo: It is Jalal uncle and Jodha'kka's story..
G'ma: Okay...
Babloo: And I am helping 'kka..That's why I am thinking...
>>>Cutie Hug
Baby: No grandma,he is telling lies.. he doesn't  know the story of Jalal uncle..
G'ma: okay Baby kanna.. You write the story..
Babloo: ...And I'll  help her..
>>>Adamant! LOL
(So Baby writes the  OS Fan Fiction...)

Baby writes  her favrit story: 
  
                                     The Adventure of Jalal  Uncle.



" Hi my friends..I love the Jodha Akbar serial very much. That is why I am going to tell you the story of Jalal uncle and Jodha akka. 
Once upon a time, there was a king called Jalal. He was very brave, and handmany. 
>>>AwwDay Dreaming
He had a  tall ammijaan and a white dress Badi ammi. He had also a slim aunty,who was always smoking hukka.
>>>ROFL
  Shagun akka and Harshu akka call her with a different name. I don't like her because she always shouts at her servants and even slaps the tall man who wears girls' dress..I don't know why she is 
in his palace..And, I like the tall ammijaan but don't like badi ammi. She is bad..
"One day   King Jalal( can I call him Jalal uncle friends?) went to another  place with his friend Abdul.. He was wearing tilak and he looked very handmany. 
>>>Yes he was!Day Dreaming
While he was walking on the road, he saw a princess in a .. in a..dooly.
She didn't see him.. But he was very happy to see her..Then..then...what happened..?
>>>Baby story has suspense too?Cool
...They went to the riverside and suddenly it started raining..The princess and others ran.. Then the princess' anklet dropped on the mud..But my Jalal uncle didn't run because he liked the rain . He saw the anklet and picked it. He played with it for some time and finally took it with him..Dancing
"Then he came to know that this princess' name was Jodha. He wanted to marry her.Day Dreaming
And then he went back to his place.After some days, Jodha akka's daddy, who is also a king, wanted her to marry Jalal uncle. So he went and asked uncle to marry Jodha. Do you know how happy he was to marry Jodha akka?Big smile But poor Jodha akka! They didn't tell her  that she was going to marry Jalal uncle. She didn't like him because his grandfather killed Jodha akka's grandfather..Poor mummy of  Jodha akka..She doesn't know anything else except to cry...She cried and cried.Cry >>>Here comes the sad partCryCryCry

Cry.But any how the wedding took place. Jodha akka was very sad..Cry
"Then Jalal uncle and Jodha akka came to uncle's palace. There the tall grandma welcomed her with all smiles.Big smileBig smile.But the white dress grandma showed an angry face like the angry bird..Angry
>>>Angry bird??!!ROFLROFLROFL
" After some time, Rajat uncle took Jodha akka to a jungle.Oh god! There was a big tiger which came and attacked himShocked..He wanted to shoot the tiger,but do you know what happened? Jodha akka  had removed all the bullets from the gun and so the gun didn't shoot..Poor uncle , he somehow managed to kill the tiger with his small knife.But he had wounds all over his body and face and he swooned..Jodha akka had a shock Shockedand she cried and cried.CryCry
>>>Hmm she messed up everything and then cry!Angry
"Jalal uncle was then brought to the palace and was given medicine by the doctors..So he was cured and then he went to Jodha's parents' house for Sukanya akka's wedding. Do you know who Sukanya akka is? She is Jodha Akka's little sister..
"After her wedding  both of them come back to Jalal uncle's palace.Then something happened..and Jalal uncle became angry with Jodha akka. Angry A fat woman came to stay with him.. 
>>>OMG!ROFL
They said she was a dancer..But her dance was not nice..She was also not dressed fully. May be she was poor..
>>>ROFL
My grandma also said 
that she was dangerous and had poison in her body. But Jalal uncle said that he liked her.. I think he pretended before akka...Poor akka.. she became more and more sad.Unhappy.I will also feel sad if my friend says that she likes somebody else and not me..
>>>Aww my lil girl.. It's one of girlie thing!LOL 
"And one day Jalal uncle said he will marry the fat woman and fixed his marriage. On the  wedding day, the fat woman gave poison to Jalal uncle, but do you know what happened? My Jodha akka bounced on her and took the cup and drank the poison and fell down.Shocked Jalal uncle cried and criedCryCry, and my grandma who was watching them also cried..Cry
>>>Grandma cried because of this extra ordinary logical plot!LOL
"But my Jalal uncle prayed to God and finally akka became alive ..
"After that they celebrated Valentine's Day and went out on a picnic in a fancy dress..And they lived happily ever after!!Dancing
"That is the end of Jodha Akbar story! Hope you like it!!Big smileStar"Image result for picture of jodha jalal dolls

                                                              

Baby Sarasa.


Karkuzhali.

                                                                 


OMG this is one of cutest story I've ever read. Baby you writes very well!! Keep it up my darling.ClapClapClap

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My dear Kausi akka,

Thank you very much for liking my story.. I was thinking very much to write it. Babloo  said he was also  thinking.. But it is not true..
Then, God promise akka, my grandma really cried when she watched Jalal uncle crying in Zee anmol. Her hanky became fully wet.. Bindu akka also knows about it..
I told her that Jodha akka won't die , because I saw her getting up in Zee TV, and she will also get up in Zee anmol.  Only then grandma became OK..
Akka, one koschen.. Shall I write in my own name or in a different name like Lashy akka?

X O X O 

Baby.




"And one day Jalal uncle said he will marry the fat woman and fixed his marriage. On the  wedding day, the fat woman gave poison to Jalal uncle, but do you know what happened? My Jodha akka bounced on her and took the cup and drank the poison and fell down.Shocked Jalal uncle cried and criedCryCry, and my grandma who was watching them also cried..Cry
>>>Grandma cried because of this extra ordinary logical plot!LOL




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Thank you Shruti akka. 
Hug
Can I write more FF?
XoXoXo
Baby.


Originally posted by Kuki715

Congratulations Baby for your new OSHug.I enjoyed it Tongue.


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Thank you Mitali. Thank you so much..
Saraswathi Akka.


Originally posted by melovesja

Originally posted by karkuzhali


           A cute conversation between Baby Sarasa and Babloo  

( Baby Sarasa and Babloo are playing.. They are waiting for Grandma to put them in bed.)

Babloo:  Baby'kka..Where are we going today for sleepover?
Typical question

Baby: Don't know.. We will stay here..Grandma didn't say anything..
Babloo: I liked Lashy'kka's house..
Baby: I too liked.. there are many kids there..
Babloo:  Lashy'kka is sitting always with  the computer..
LOL
Baby: It is not a computer.. It is a Laptop Babloo..
Babloo: Why is it called laptop? Is it diff'rent from computer?
Baby: We keep laptop on our lap..that's why it's called Laptop..
Babloo: If we keep it on table, can we call it tabletop?
Baby: Shh.. Babloo.. don't be very curious..
Embarrassed
Babloo: 'kka, Have you read the story Lashy'kka writes?
Baby: No kutty..I cannot read big stories..
Babloo: Why'kka.. you study in first standard..
Baby: But the story is not shown in TV..If it is shown in TV, I will watch it..
Confused
Babloo: But grandma reads it..
Baby: Yes..
Babloo: Is grandma Lashykka's friend?
Baby: Yes.. 
Babloo: How come she is friend to Shyamala aunty and also to Lashy'kka?Ouch
Baby: Why? I also have  Shamu, Dhanu, Shalu and so many friends..Don't you have any friends?
Babloo: I have only one friend..
Baby: Why?  You must have friends Babloo..Only then it will be fun..
Babloo: No.. I won't share my chocolates with all of them..
Calculating mindWink

( Grandma comes there)

G'ma: Hi kids.. It is bed time..go to bed..
Bablo: Aren't we going to Lashy'kka's house for sleepover? 
G'ma: No.Kanna. you are not going anywhere.. 
Baby: Grandma...do you read Lashy akka's story?
G'ma: Yes kutty.. why do you ask me?
Babloo: Grandma, Baby'kka can read only if it comes in the TV.
G'ma: No it won't come on TV..
Babloo: But how come we see TV stories in Computer, but no computer stories in TV?Ouch
Logical bablooSmile
G'ma: QuestionD'ohShh.. now it is sleep time..go to your beds.. Good night!
Baby:( softly) Babloo, grandma will say "Shh" if she doesn't know the answer..LOL

LOL 
Baby and Babloo: Good Night !

Karkuzhali.

                                                                    


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Originally posted by karkuzhali


My dear Kausi akka,
>>My darling dambakku Hug
Thank you very much for liking my story.. I was thinking very much to write it. Babloo  said he was also  thinking.. But it is not true..
>>Pleasure is ours Kutty. Don't worry about him. We know him na... Embarrassed
Then, God promise akka, my grandma really cried when she watched Jalal uncle crying in Zee anmol. Her hanky became fully wet.. Bindu akka also knows about it..
I told her that Jodha akka won't die , because I saw her getting up in Zee TV, and she will also get up in Zee anmol.  Only then grandma became OK..
>>>ROFL Jodha akka cried a lot but Grandama didn't cry on that time na? Isn't it strange Kutty?LOL Okay I accept Grandama has lil fragile heart when it's come to Jalal uncle!LOL
Akka, one koschen.. Shall I write in my own name or in a different name like Lashy akka?
>>>That's because Lashy'kka having a BIG name. LOLYour name is cute and small. So you can use your own name Kutty!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
X O X O 

Baby.




"And one day Jalal uncle said he will marry the fat woman and fixed his marriage. On the  wedding day, the fat woman gave poison to Jalal uncle, but do you know what happened? My Jodha akka bounced on her and took the cup and drank the poison and fell down.Shocked Jalal uncle cried and criedCryCry, and my grandma who was watching them also cried..Cry
>>>Grandma cried because of this extra ordinary logical plot!LOL




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