Posted: 27 April 2016 at 9:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dvprt418.py
I am amazed dazed stupefied and what not this chapter was nothing less than a blockbuster of all the updates you deserve a standing ovation on this. It was more than worth the wait for it.
Now I start OK so ishani is planning and he is busy even to reply her calls really can he be so busy. And when rishi said he is not feeling well I thought that something bad should not happen to him. Ishani surely knows how to trick him when it comes to her own things.
OK so girl was expecting to give him the best surprise possible and she prepared for it merrily also that whole part of her anticipation was nothing but a bliss and you have written it so perfectly.
So he came there and also got most unexpected or should I say most strangulating welcome she hugging him well ishani becomes a child when it comes to him or feelings related to him. That watch moment was very touchy
So now comes the best part
that whole decorations of their childhood snaps and her keeping every memory related to him safely was so amazing ishani this time her showering of love overpowered everything.
OK so that was incredibly good she preparing cake herself was it really possible that he did not felt like vomiting after having it.
sorry but that whole moment and the aura around it was so awesome.
Ranveer being apprehensive about promise was expected because that guy is too much afraid of hurting both of them.
So he thought that it was not possible for them to be together because he knew about how everyone will react to it.
OK so well so much romance in the air and birthday kiss was much needed but ranveer was afraid he ll not stop like for what he ll not stop and she don't want him to either well ishani always wanted things and is the man in this relationship to take step for anything. I must tell you that the way you write about their embrace and kisses that's so intimately that it expressed their feelings so vivdly. That was so amazing.
Nowcomes the dreaded part something they always wanted but like always their most awaited moment was interrupted.
Well when in last chapter you said chirag was quiet I expected him to ruin this beautiful time one way or the other and this time falguni did the deed herself. Falguni remained in your ff as she was in episodes pre leap.
O God that whole confession by ishani about her feelings and the way she contradicted her mother in her every wrong thought was purely heavenly desire. I so wanted that ishani should express her feelings in most perfect way but these words really amazd me. Each and every thing every word how she defended ranveer how she explained about him and that line they will die without each other was just too apt am short of words to praise you for that it was fantastic.
Her realisation of her own feelings and how she always loved him from day one like he loved her and also her helplessness and despair of not being able to tell this to ranveer was too good dear it was most amazing confessions seriously something I liked as much as LM NC wedding vows.
I just wanted to see the happiness of ranveer after knowing her feelings for him which hw always wanted but it was left unsaid.
Now don't know what will happen as falguni is determined to set everything as per her wish and also ranveer's parents reaction but most importantly how everything is going to unfold between two of them is I am waiting in anticipation.
This chapter was marvellous dear I loved each and every part of it. It was a pure bliss to read everything to be honest I read this chapter twice before replying because I just don't want to end that awesomeness spreading through this while reading it. You deserve much more praise but m speechless to say exactly how awesome this was.
Thnx for pm dear
Now seriously eagerly waiting for next
Thank you, dv!
I'm glad you liked it this much and I swear I wasn't expecting it so. xD
Writing about Ishani's feelings is always bliss since they were left unexplored in the show, so whenever there's a chance we do try justifying it (you can just see so many FFs from her POV). And you're right. She is
a child whenever it comes to him. He's been the protector and saviour which always kept her protected from the worst of the demons. Or let's just say, he's guardian angel. So she's like that with him. Ishani's love and care for him was always an unfulfilled dream in the show for "Ranveer fans." What more to say. </3 Though with the beginning of this FF the biggest thing I made sure was Ishani behaving as a human with him and later falling for him.
Ishani's cooking skills must definitely be a horror for Ranveer but as she said, 2 attempts before had been been a disaster, so this shot was good.
Hmm... Promise. You're right, but he's more worried about hurting her than himself. No surprise, is it? And Ishani was that bold in the show as well, wasn't she? A trait I so very admired in her and the best such scene had to be the one before their vacations (I forgot the destination's name but they go there after Falguni asks them to).
Chiru baba can't do things any better, can he? He was born to ruin IshVeer's life in the most ridiculous way. Dusht praani.
Falguni is quite a bit bitchy over here, so yeah. It's going to be fun to write her. Ishani contradicting her mommy was probably the most fascinating things to write since she had to keep that respect alive for her mother but also show how strongly she disagrees with her ideals.
Ranveer will know soon- or you will know his perspective soon enough which, I believe will surely answer many things. :) And about their parents and families, I'd say just wait since it's something I cannot reveal right now.
Thank you so much, dv, once again.