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IshVeer FF: Of The Soulmates | Epilogue (Page 52) (Page 39)

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Posted: 17 September 2016 at 2:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by NidsJ

Hey Elvish.. Smile Smile

 

Well first thing is, if a month's break means such electrifying results then we can happily grant u one for each chapter.. Big smile Big smile ok not a month but still u r allowed to take a good one.. Wink

 

and now coming to the chapter.. it was a much needed breather after d last one.. Smile I can't even tell, in how much sadma I was after d previous one..Broken Heart from d beginning when doctor revealed about past cases, it was just heartbreaking.. Ishani's outburst to him was good but there also d way he keep saying about his future and death was utter torture Ouch, and how many times he literally mentioned it, "I don't want u to be my wi.." God..Dead it even sounds so so fearful and babies are going through this.. sigh.. may God give them strength to survive this tough time...Unhappy and ur writing there,  u made everything alive, was actually feeling d pain they must be going through and only hoping for d miracle..Cry he can't leave her, I mean how even she'll live then.. plz plz girl, have little mercy on babies and us, u can do anything but not the dreading end.. Unhappy

 

and now finally coming to present chapter..Silly finally finally Amba's words filled some sense in him &  he is ready for marriageParty, but I pity their condition, it's so so complicated, he is so logical in thinking about her future knowing the possible end but it's killing their present, they both want each other but he is so much afraid of what lays ahead.. Ishani also can't live without him and is so confident to bring him back from any bad.. such a tormenting decision.. Unhappy Unhappy but at last he accepted the present coz as amba said it might change their future also.. and hopefully it will.. Confused

 

and after all this he confessed to her Clap, but d way he shut her up LOL, I thought it was Ishani's forte, but nice change..Embarrassed second nice change was his decision on Baa, the way he told her not to sacrifice themselves anymore for others was awesomeThumbs Up coz Ishani was again thinking to take that route but he Infused right sense in her at the right time..Star and then came the shocking part..Shocked both from u and from him, shocking coz it was not at all predicted or expected.. LOL talking about him first.. what have gotten into him suddenly,Shocked they only confessed and he is all ready.. actually andar se to kab se both were ready and now their parents also confirmed it so resistance is impossible.. Blushing but still have to say him saying her that IT'S NOT WRONG was a surprise..ROFLcoz if we analyze him, first he was like neither I'll do nor i'll let u do anything, always resisting D'oh, den he started reciprocating her and now he's turning devil, Ishani was right,LOL can we say it as evolution of Ranveer Vaghela.. Now he's just not ready to leave her and she have to control him, although how much control she herself has is again grey.. Wink

 

and now coming to ur writing there, pleasant surprise..StarStar, u definitely don't need to hide anywhere, ab after so many heart breaks thoda fun to banta hai na Wink, and u r excellent there, just like their pain in previous chapters, here also u made everything alive, the way u wrote entire scene.. it was hot and beautiful Clap Clap, and it was so much in flow, even the little distraction seemed in flow and babies got back to their business soon ROFL, u penned their feelings so beautifully, awesome work Thumbs Up, and since u wrote something like this for first time, if I am right, it felt so fresh also, different words in a whole new way..Cool amazing job girl, and don't be frightened anymore, just keep going like this... Hug Hug 

 




Heya!

One month break giving electrifying results? Shocked Shocked Acha? Mujhe pata nai tha.

Haw, last chapter was needed to be like it was. Pain and Ranveer are two best buddies that are made for each other. Though the only thing that changes the equation is that between Ranveer and pain/death, there's always Ishani. So it was to be shown for their relationship. :)

Yes, Ranveer and Ishani and getting married. Sighs.  Reminds me of their marriage during Chiru time. What a grand day that was! HeartHeart

About their future, please wait. You'll know it very soon! :)


He's learned the ways to shut up from her only. xD Ishani has taught him many things including turning into a vampire at the very right time. Wink Wink And what to say about us... Ranveer and Elvish were innocent pranis and Ishani came and the rest is history. And what has gotten into him... Umm, hormones? Now, when he's accepted Ishani as his life partner, he's all cool. ;) But poor girl Ishani.


Nids, you might have quite a lot of fun in the last chapter but I'm going to run away before that. Though you'll know. And I'm glad the scene came off as "hot" because I truly did not feel so. xD

Thank you so much, girl! HeartHeart
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Posted: 17 September 2016 at 4:26am | IP Logged
Ohhh GOD...truly breath taking story...Ishani's birthday celebration with Ranveer is fantastically fantastic... I love this forum so soo much...yea few more days & another beautiful chapter of their life will begin... Hope nothing goes wrong ...& everything go well perfectly... Thank u sissy for gifting us this sweet forum...pls don't stop it. ...waiting for next update... B safe & sound

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Posted: 17 September 2016 at 5:44am | IP Logged

Hey dear hi hope you are good

Its been so long and I have been waiting for this since the last pm.

Now before the actual review just need to tell you are actually getting more and more good at this seriously this chapter was awesome more love filled with the scars of past and now I am sure about something which is going to turn out as fantastic as this is with time.

 

Finally boy got up after the last night adventures and there is whole office turned up for him. Wow finally puneet and sally back. Really I would agree they just never pay attention to anyone else when together and this explains the dire need to be in same room well atleast on breakfast table these day routine would be avoided but that was cute. And suddenly rishi might be feeling out of place because all the couples conversation going on. And sally is a darling. Puneet no need  to worry ranveer wont say a word when it comes to ishani forget about firing him away. Are puneet and sally not on talking terms why there was glares from sally.

 

Look at her even his name is causing flutterness well now she might be regretting coming to office also and amba is becoming more like a mother to her but why isn't falguni yet here for the preparations of the marriage. This boy isn't paying attention to business as always and busy with her girl and surprises munda bigad raha hai. Hey I like that phone conversation I mean they can read each others mind that's something which defines their relationship.

Emily seriously out of all the people he got only her to surprise along with an extra element of embarrassment to it. Blue is the colour of the ishveer land I guess its been prominent many times. She must be looking gorgeous and the important thing is ranveer you girls ek to describe him so loving irresistible and droolworthy that it takes lots of time to get out of that stupor. He is awesome and the beauty of black colour gets redefined when he wears it everytime and the disha's party when he was in that exactly same attire came into my mind. Imagine she walking and then amba questions her suddenly where are you going that will be hilarious but given your amba is very sensible she wont do that.

 

Ranveer did turn up and took the darkness away from his looks itself and was she mad at him got scaring her or for not complementing or drooling at her like the way she did. But elvish that whole idea of lightening lakes and garden was pretty amazing I just loved it totally and you can be forgiven slightly for making me wait so longer. But  either way he looks really hot when he make her go all speechless with his looks. If only looks could kill he would be the mass murderer seriously. Is she also having memory relapses I mean till now it was the job of ranveer to forget his birthday but now ishani is making no tone unturned in becoming his better half in every way possible. He has become boring really he wasn't this much interesting before I guess.

This was the simplest he could do I wonder what would be the exaggerated one but their relationship is way beyond one can think as you said they are too intimate then any physical intimacy can bring them together. Already turning a joru ka gulam dude engagement is still there atleast let things get officialised.  Ahem ahem hot and sexy all the female staff of his office working closely to him need to be reprimanded that they are eyeing sunny deol's property. Really how much possessive she can get for him.  Gollum seriously girl you are just too much Tolkien fan honestly.

Their conversation was touching and the way she said about security of his love it reminded one of the most dreaded episode of ranveer begging of the same and she...

But your ishveer had better sense about the situation I like the fact despite his hesitancy he gave her that promise and she isn't giving up on him no matter what. This girl will bring him back from the death that's for sure. Her guilt is well placed specially after all the things he have done for her and everything he have been through but its her innocent soul is the one that makes him do all this willingly. 

Finally the kiss omg it was fantastic well placed not for the sake of it and you and LM just know the perfect timing for everything. And ranveer he isn't leaving a single chance coming his way true businessman. I loved the description because of its comparison I mean such a fragile moments camparison with rose buds were awesome thinking dear.

Wait is there more coming because 23 hours are remaining seriously this ranveer is having split personality I mean few chapters back he was chivalrous enough to touch and now totally into it.

 

This chapter was really amazing dear I liked each and every bit of it specially the part about their guilt and how much they dearly miss the time they loose upon it was really wonderful and you are an exceptionally talented writer dear I mean it.

Thnx for pm

Waiting for the next

sorry something is up with my lappy emojis arent working

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Posted: 18 September 2016 at 3:59am | IP Logged
Hy Elvish,
Its been amazing chapter for sure and its lovely
So they were happiest to the most the life gives after all their huddles and pain.
Its beautiful day of ishani birthday and ranveer's surprise for her was so lovely..
Waiting for their marriage now
Update next soon
Keep smiling Big smile
Take care Embarrassed

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Posted: 19 September 2016 at 8:16am | IP Logged
Woww! This was such a beautiful one again :D 
And that attire of Ranveer,the favourite oneHeart
The decorations,conversations,kisses.. PERFECT!! Smile
And how much more of this part has been missing from the show,thankyou for compensating it :) <3
Loved it!

Waiting for the next one soon :) :)

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Posted: 20 September 2016 at 6:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrinceAsif

Ohhh GOD...truly breath taking story...Ishani's birthday celebration with Ranveer is fantastically fantastic... I love this forum so soo much...yea few more days & another beautiful chapter of their life will begin... Hope nothing goes wrong ...& everything go well perfectly... Thank u sissy for gifting us this sweet forum...pls don't stop it. ...waiting for next update... B safe & sound


Thank you so much, Asif! Yes, a couple of days more and they'll be together. What happens next, you'll have to wait for the next chapters.

Thank you so much again. :)
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Posted: 20 September 2016 at 6:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mayashelly

Hy Elvish,
Its been amazing chapter for sure and its lovely
So they were happiest to the most the life gives after all their huddles and pain.
Its beautiful day of ishani birthday and ranveer's surprise for her was so lovely..
Waiting for their marriage now
Update next soon
Keep smiling Big smile
Take care Embarrassed


Hey, Maya! Thank you so much! Ranveer's surprise was to be lovely! HeartHeart I'm glad to see you liked it. Don't worry, wait for the next chapters. Heart Smile Save

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Posted: 20 September 2016 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KajalSR

Woww! This was such a beautiful one again :D 
And that attire of Ranveer,the favourite oneHeart
The decorations,conversations,kisses.. PERFECT!! Smile
And how much more of this part has been missing from the show,thankyou for compensating it :) <3
Loved it!

Waiting for the next one soon :) :)


Hey, Kajal! Thank you so much!

Ranveer's attire. We were talking about this the day on twitter, no? He looks truly amazing in that... especially black and messy hair. HeartHeart

The show missed out so much. We were left with the half baked stuff to mourn after the hatred track. Dead Dead 

I'm trying my best to post the chapter today, but tomorrow have a test, so can't be sure. :(

And thank you so much once again! HeartHeart
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