Originally posted by dvprt418.py
Honestly girl one question did you only write the whole chapter i mean i am still kind of dazed with the intense spell of passion in this
You know i have already read it 4 times out of it 2 times was just to confirm am i really reading this from you so intense so passionate i was this
throughout the update where are you in hiding
i want to give you big
A big applause to you for writing this amazing marvellous chapter and i can understand what you must have went through for writing this chapter as you haven't tried this before as far as i know and you have excelled in this
Was he compensating for the lost opportunity that day ishani was ready
you know in every update he was so chivalrous but in this transformation completely
O boy he was tormenting her in a way that he also didn't knew
what the hell she must have been going through i mean here scenario was different it's that she knew they both love each other and yet he was so adamant for her prolonged happiness that he forgot the pain of present
well what can be more expected from him
Amba only brings tears of happiness in your and LM's FF is it possible to have such a sane person sometimes i wonder if it's Harshad's aatma that made a way into her transforming her completely.
jokes apart i so loved her here she isn't ready to forget but yet hold no grudges because she saw the positive side of it that made her son rise like a phoenix and get his true happiness and she considers ishani not a part of it was really amazing and she has started trusting ishani more than her own son to keep him happy always but ranveer and his insecurities he needed this talk so come out of his bubble and see how much it was hurting them both.
amazing work on that part dear really that whole conversation impressed me his own mother was the voice of sensibility in his current predicament.
Now i laughed on amba's amusement when ranveer went to find ishani i mean she is your mother she knows your feeling very much dear
these both crack people first push the other one to edge and will then roam like romeo juliet in search of each other.
and the kiss well girl i wonder was this the same girl who was scarred to write in chapter45 well can't help it there is only this thing which can render them speechless when they are in their usual rant and boy ranveer did he had an energy drink or what.
Finally the most anticipated thing in this FF ranveer's confession of his eternal love
and asking her for his lifetime and it also brought back the memory of the epic confession in serial with that no where close to what an pristine thing you have written here
. his whole confession part was absolutely flawless, pure simple in words but yet gave an entirely new meaning to his epic love and what a way rain, garden and only both of them i can actually imagine it happening in front of my eyes. This was such an awesome thing i cannot even begin to tell you how wonderfully you have written that part a standing ovation for that part itself *wolf whistles*
Now back home amba is happy that finally his boy is ready to accept his happiness which was knocking his doors
where is sally and puneet i want them to tease these both cuties so much and it would be fun to see how no nonsense RV will just blush
And honestly this was totally a different ranveer first time in his life he choose not to sacrifice both of them for their happiness and baa well see what she does now.
Rain, breezes proximity and controlled emotions since so long how much a person can avoid and honestly it was so much amazing that i am left speechless. Was he thinking of the same thing because the moment ishani entered our tiger was ready for an attack. What an intense what a passion so much love you seriously compensated for all the wait infact more than what i had actually expected. ONLY TWO THING please close doors and switch of mobiles.
Honestly i expected that something will happen as because these two cannot get enough of each other and forget the normal precautionary step. But honestly i can imagine their faces how scandalized all of them must have been with this sudden interruption
and first time in their life they was such unwelcoming to anyone and emily also wasn't at fault she thought that our sharif dukhiyara baba would all alone didn't knew that baby can bring a devil side to him
so this was the funny thing you were mentioning the other day about honestly it was funny enough
What was he planning really
i mean first time it was ishani who was backing out our dhikra was already to for everything but him teasing her even in such an intense moment beta she is not like you she will drag you to her if you make her wait too much
but the second interruption was
no one is sparing him even in serial in that golden time everyone was behind them and even now. I wish second interruption should have been from amba then i am sure after three days marriage would have been sure on the cards.
control kids control
what's the call and packet was about because they were prioritized by ranveer.
Sheer beauty elvish am so happy to read this and this was such an breath of fresh air after the intense pain and heartbreaks in previous update. this chapter was totally worth the wait. but the only problem is it has raised the expectation for future updates even more now
really a flawless work.
thnx for pm
waiting for next
Your reaction... when I read the review I wasn't sure how to react.
I know, I know, you must be thinking I'm persuaded by some spirit or something, but I'm not. Just kidding. it's just as long as it fits the plot, I went ahead with it. :)
Eeks. Hugs to you too.
Hehe. Yeah, I never tried like this before that's why writing this chapter was one of the most terrifying experiences. And thank you!
Ishani's always ready. That girl.
But Ranveer, yeah, he knows she loves to kiss him so much so he did the deed himself.
Ha, yes. Sometimes, we end up hurting the people we love the most and that's what he was doing as well, but his mommy dear helped him out of the dilemma. And, Amba and tears of happiness? I can understand. xD Maybe Harshad has done some kind of magic on her? Who knows! And her psychology doesn't really demand bitchiness, frankly. She'd remain the stern but kind woman, atleast towards her son.
Yeah, cracked souls these are. Always wanting each other happy but making unhappy in the quest, too. Silly people. Oh, you don't worry about this girl anymore. Along with IshVeer, she's grown up as well in the guidance of her mommy. ;)
Oh, God! I have never seen his confession episode and I regret it even now. :(
Amba has every reason to be happy, no? And don't worry, even I'm waiting for Puneet and Sally to turn up soon. Probably next chapter. And, yeah, Ranveer has seen enough to sacrifice himself and Ishani anymore for the trivial things like the grudges that Baa holds against them. He had to grow up if Baa didn't.
And the last part of your review has left me speechless literally because all my thoughts you have put down here perfectly that I couldn't dare to think for some reasons (and it was one of the reasons that made me apprehensive about justice to the scene as well).
Thank you so much for that. Oh, you will realize closed doors and switched off mobiles wouldn't have gone well really. They were important. ;) *mission next chapter*
And true, true. Emily wouldn't have thought baby would be busy in something "else". Poor woman. xD
His plans... Next chapter wait please. And right! She won't even wait for him to go ahead, but he's no less. He can make her wait her like crazy as well. XD
Don't worry. Engagement and marriage are all on the cards already. Just wait for 2 more chapters.
Thank you so much, girl. <3 I'm so happy you loved the chapter.
PS. He didn't drink the energy drink. Ishani baby's rants did the thing.