Hey Elvish.. 😊 😊
Well first thing is, if a month's break means such electrifying results then we can happily grant u one for each chapter.. 😃 😃 ok not a month but still u r allowed to take a good one.. 😉
and now coming to the chapter.. it was a much needed breather after d last one.. 😊 I can't even tell, in how much sadma I was after d previous one..💔 from d beginning when doctor revealed about past cases, it was just heartbreaking.. Ishani's outburst to him was good but there also d way he keep saying about his future and death was utter torture , and how many times he literally mentioned it, "I don't want u to be my wi.." God..🤢 it even sounds so so fearful and babies are going through this.. sigh.. may God give them strength to survive this tough time...😔 and ur writing there, u made everything alive, was actually feeling d pain they must be going through and only hoping for d miracle..😭 he can't leave her, I mean how even she'll live then.. plz plz girl, have little mercy on babies and us, u can do anything but not the dreading end.. 😔
and now finally coming to present chapter..🤪 finally finally Amba's words filled some sense in him & he is ready for marriage🥳, but I pity their condition, it's so so complicated, he is so logical in thinking about her future knowing the possible end but it's killing their present, they both want each other but he is so much afraid of what lays ahead.. Ishani also can't live without him and is so confident to bring him back from any bad.. such a tormenting decision.. 😔 😔 but at last he accepted the present coz as amba said it might change their future also.. and hopefully it will.. 😕
and after all this he confessed to her 👏, but d way he shut her up 😆, I thought it was Ishani's forte, but nice change..😳 second nice change was his decision on Baa, the way he told her not to sacrifice themselves anymore for others was awesome👍🏼 coz Ishani was again thinking to take that route but he Infused right sense in her at the right time..⭐️ and then came the shocking part..😲 both from u and from him, shocking coz it was not at all predicted or expected.. 😆 talking about him first.. what have gotten into him suddenly,😲 they only confessed and he is all ready.. actually andar se to kab se both were ready and now their parents also confirmed it so resistance is impossible.. ☺️ but still have to say him saying her that IT'S NOT WRONG was a surprise..🤣coz if we analyze him, first he was like neither I'll do nor i'll let u do anything, always resisting , den he started reciprocating her and now he's turning devil, Ishani was right,😆 can we say it as evolution of Ranveer Vaghela.. Now he's just not ready to leave her and she have to control him, although how much control she herself has is again grey.. 😉
and now coming to ur writing there, pleasant surprise..⭐️⭐️, u definitely don't need to hide anywhere, ab after so many heart breaks thoda fun to banta hai na 😉, and u r excellent there, just like their pain in previous chapters, here also u made everything alive, the way u wrote entire scene.. it was hot and beautiful 👏 👏, and it was so much in flow, even the little distraction seemed in flow and babies got back to their business soon 🤣, u penned their feelings so beautifully, awesome work 👍🏼, and since u wrote something like this for first time, if I am right, it felt so fresh also, different words in a whole new way..😎 amazing job girl, and don't be frightened anymore, just keep going like this... 🤗 🤗
