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Posted: 16 April 2016 at 9:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by puba

Originally posted by DocD

Originally posted by puba

What a poetic rendition of the story so far...I mean your writing just elevates the story to a whole new level. I don't think even the creators of the show could pen down a synopsis (if I may call it so) with such flair.
You should get Namik and Nikita to read this! I am sure they will thoroughly enjoy it.
 
Hey! @puba
 
A HEARTFELT Thanks for your effusive words of praise...you just made my Sunday!Big smile
 
Guess EDKV is the perfect muse
An this is just a small token of appreciation
An ode to that
PERFECTION!
 
Yeah! Me too would LOVE for Namik and Nikita to read this
Would be over the moon actually!LOL
 
Hope they decide to drop by
And hope, it's worth their time!Smile
 
Cheers!
DocD

I saw a post where people of the forum were planning to do a gift segment for Namik and Nikita...you should surely send this as a gift...or if you are on social media sites like twitter...put this up and tag them! Embarrassed
 
Hey! Thanks so much for the suggestion, Dear...
 
I am unfortunately not on social media...have consciously stayed away...
 
If this has to reach them
It will inevitably, some way...
 
Love,
DocD
 
 
 

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Posted: 16 April 2016 at 10:15pm | IP Logged
Wow!Clap
ShockedMind reader...Embarrassed..Indeed, U R my soul sis! Hug
So humbled that you said I inspired you...you extended our thoughts and completed it. Embarrassed

And PRICELESS, these lines were...

The layers had started to peel
The core was exactly where
Shravan and Sumo had left it
Ten years back!
 
But the bigger question still remained
Were they willing to move ahead
And, NOT 'move on', instead...
How important was CLOSURE
How much did they truly regret??


Indeed, they got down to where hey had left...dusted away the cobwebs and the dirt that had gathered...to reveal a beautiful core...that their friendship had been. 

And would they Move On or Move Ahead??? 

A few betrayals on either side...What would it take to trust each other with their hearts again??? Even as they know, only they themselves can complete each other.
Heart

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Posted: 17 April 2016 at 12:12am | IP Logged
wowsie all over again 
this forum has some of most amazing reviews/feelings everyone pour out and it makes me want to be a part of it..when all I want to be is lazy to another level after a week slogging at work.These two have such a bad childhood/teenage-hood and they do deal with in their own appropriate way.

His eye speak what his mouth cannot
His expressions say what words cannot
It takes a caring heart to understand
A hurt soul to decipher

He knows what she means to him but the hurt and betryal which he feels still lingers at bay,it is getting drifted away with each step she takes towards him and open up her heart bare for him to see and understand her.

Her heart is beating but soul is missing
She has come to terms with having no one
The need is strong but the ego is stronger
It takes a sensitive mind to decipher that hurt

They have long way to go and with crisis being thrown left right and center they will be sticking together and get to know each other better and build the missing puzzles.

You summed up in a way I could not 


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Posted: 17 April 2016 at 12:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chicksoup

Wow!Clap
ShockedMind reader...Embarrassed..Indeed, U R my soul sis! Hug
So humbled that you said I inspired you...you extended our thoughts and completed it. Embarrassed

And PRICELESS, these lines were...

The layers had started to peel
The core was exactly where
Shravan and Sumo had left it
Ten years back!
 
But the bigger question still remained
Were they willing to move ahead
And, NOT 'move on', instead...
How important was CLOSURE
How much did they truly regret??


Indeed, they got down to where hey had left...dusted away the cobwebs and the dirt that had gathered...to reveal a beautiful core...that their friendship had been. 

And would they Move On or Move Ahead??? 

A few betrayals on either side...What would it take to trust each other with their hearts again??? Even as they know, only they themselves can complete each other.
Heart
 
Hiya Chicks!
 
Seems like we're really making up for all the lost time!LOL
 
Am so glad and equally humbled that you felt that I completed your thoughts...
 
How fortunate are we, really, to be blessed, with such a beautiful muse...
 
For me, the biggest achievement really is how this muse
Has in such a sublime manner
Managed to touch our lives
And our thought processes as well
 
Feel privileged really as to how a work of art
Is giving us such a beautiful insight into human relationships
And in the process
Enriching our lives as well !
 
@bold: SPOT ON you are, Chicks!Thumbs Up
And if the promo is anything to go by
It is that remaining distance that Shravan and Sumo will have to traverse
That will be
The most GRATIFYING journey of all
 
Love,
Dyotona
 

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Posted: 17 April 2016 at 12:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SahSah

wowsie all over again 
this forum has some of most amazing reviews/feelings everyone pour out and it makes me want to be a part of it..when all I want to be is lazy to another level after a week slogging at work.These two have such a bad childhood/teenage-hood and they do deal with in their own appropriate way.

His eye speak what his mouth cannot
His expressions say what words cannot
It takes a caring heart to understand
A hurt soul to decipher

He knows what she means to him but the hurt and betryal which he feels still lingers at bay,it is getting drifted away with each step she takes towards him and open up her heart bare for him to see and understand her.

Her heart is beating but soul is missing
She has come to terms with having no one
The need is strong but the ego is stronger
It takes a sensitive mind to decipher that hurt

They have long way to go and with crisis being thrown left right and center they will be sticking together and get to know each other better and build the missing puzzles.

You summed up in a way I could not 


 
Hey! Ansah!
 
YOU WRITE EXTREMELY WELL!!
 
Please believe me when I say that you have articulated the ShraMan dynamic thus far AND their way forward AMAZINGLY well!
 
Please do this more often, Dearie
YOU are definitely amongst this forum's huge pool of talent...please express yourself more often...
 
@bold:
Am actually speechless, Can only...
ClapClapClap
 
As you so rightly have mentioned,
 
They have come a long way
A really long way
If Shravan has taken a step forward
Sumo has responded with equal fervor
They are rebuilding a fragmented, if not shattered relationship
Gradually
But have they managed to put all that hurt...that betrayal
Completely away?
THAT, only time will tell
How DEEP is this bond
For them to TRULY give each other
The Second Chance
Again!!
 
 
Loads of Love, my Dear
Doc!
Big smile
 
PS: Please get yourself some rest, and have a great week ahead! And I am not just talking ShraMan here!LOL
 


Edited by DocD - 17 April 2016 at 1:14am

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Posted: 17 April 2016 at 1:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DocD

Originally posted by SahSah

wowsie all over again 
this forum has some of most amazing reviews/feelings everyone pour out and it makes me want to be a part of it..when all I want to be is lazy to another level after a week slogging at work.These two have such a bad childhood/teenage-hood and they do deal with in their own appropriate way.

His eye speak what his mouth cannot
His expressions say what words cannot
It takes a caring heart to understand
A hurt soul to decipher

He knows what she means to him but the hurt and betryal which he feels still lingers at bay,it is getting drifted away with each step she takes towards him and open up her heart bare for him to see and understand her.

Her heart is beating but soul is missing
She has come to terms with having no one
The need is strong but the ego is stronger
It takes a sensitive mind to decipher that hurt

They have long way to go and with crisis being thrown left right and center they will be sticking together and get to know each other better and build the missing puzzles.

You summed up in a way I could not 


 
Hey! Ansah!
 
YOU WRITE EXTREMELY WELL!!
 
Please believe me when I say that you have articulated the ShraMan dynamic thus far AND their way forward AMAZINGLY well!
 
Please do this more often, Dearie
YOU are definitely amongst this forum's huge pool of talent...please express yourself more often...
 
@bold:
Am actually speechless, Can only...
ClapClapClap
 
As you so rightly have mentioned,
 
They have come a long way
A really long way
If Shravan has taken a step forward
Sumo has responded with equal fervor
They are rebuilding a fragmented, if not shattered relationship
Gradually
But that have they managed to put all that hurt...that betrayal
Completely away?
THAT, only time will tell
How DEEP is this bond
For them to TRULY give each other
The Second Chance
Again!!
 
 
Loads of Love, my Dear
Doc!
Big smile
 
PS: Please get yourself some rest, and have a great week ahead! And I am not just talking ShraMan here!LOL
 

Hug Doc 

you are a darling ... hugs your way loads of them

Hahaha yup I need some rest all of us need that but ShraMan they keep calling me and inviting me to watch them discuss them and crave for them LOLLOL..

I have a thing for reconciling and getting back together,rediscovering the feelings kind of watching and this series is providing just that.

The couple and actors cherry on top

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Posted: 17 April 2016 at 1:11am | IP Logged
You know Dyotana, distances are meant to denote space and differences in time... but this show has given a new meaning to these two terms.. both space and time are reconfigured where the only space that remains is their realization that there wasn't ever a space between them. Time has both flowed on from past to present yet it has stood still.. to evoke an atmosphere in which their love shall never lose its colour or its flavour... it shall grow gradually, steadily where they become oneDay Dreaming
Loved your post, as usual DyotanaClap

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Posted: 17 April 2016 at 1:21am | IP Logged
The amount of depth you bring into your posts, it's just mind blowing. . 
Such a beautiful piece this oneClap

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