Kunj's Cuddly Doll(4Shots)-Last Shot Updated

Bobsysprincess Senior Member

Joined: 20 November 2015
Posts: 519

Posted: 16 April 2016 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
Shot 1-Page 1
Shot 2-Page 3
Shot 3-Page 4
Last Shot- Page 5
Hey guys here i'm with my first 3shoted fiction ... Hope u ll lyk it ...
Here goes the 1st shot :
Kunj's Cuddly Braty

Kunj sarna who earned fame nd glory in a vry early age through his hard work and perseverance ... Through his honesty and struggle he has achieved a pwrful pisition... Kunj was one of the top industrialist in india as well as other countries... He was the one who knocked the door of success in the age of 21...

RT was also an well known business tycoon in mumbai ... He had two daughters nmed Twinkle and Mahi.. Twinkles mom died while gvng birth to mahi ... Rt lovingly raised up his girls ...
Twinkle was almost 22... Bt her behaviour nd attitude was like a 7 yrs baby who was the princess of her dad ... Rt's extreme love didnt let his daughters grow up ...
Twinkle was crazy abt soft toys ,barbie dolls,branded dresses,shoes ,bobby pins nd chocolates ... Whenvr she becms stress she sits with a box of chocolate to decrease her stress ... Twinkle was a mdcl stdnt ...
On the other hand mahi another eye of Rt was a law stdnt ... She was almost 20...She was strng,bold,stylish cmpltly dfrnt frm twinkle ...
But the similarity btwn thm was their their love nd sprt fr theieslvs nd their pa...

A royal nd luxurious prty was held in KS s place ... High classed people were invited incldnt Rt nd his F*Ly ...

Rt:Baccho ??? Ab bas bhi kro ... Hume der horahi hai ...
Bas ayi papa mahi nd twnkle shouted at the sme tym ...
Rt: Kitni tym lgati hai yh ladkiyan taiyar hone me ...
We r done bobs ... Both Mahi nd twinkle were stndng infrnt Rt ...They were lkng lyk princesses ...
Twinkle was wearing an anarkali combinated with gldn nd black color , her hair was open nd straightend , She was wearing a ball type golden top earng nd blood red colourd lipcolour ... She was lkng lyk a out of ths wrld ...
Mahi was wearing a pallazo type dress colored black nd white ... With huge round earings nd a tight ponytail , her lipcolor was hot pink ... She was lkng lyk a model ...
Evryone was mesmerised seeing the lavish decoration of KS s party ... Rt enterd in the prty wth his grls ... He realized tht most of the eyes were admiring his beautifull daughters ...

Lights went off ... It cme back in few secs with a dashing nd hot guy who was stndng on the stge showing his back to the guests ... Whn he turnd ,,, girls in the party was about to faint...
It was none other thn The handsome hunk "Mr. Kunj Sarna"

So how was tht ... Must comment buddys

Edited by maisarah - 21 April 2016 at 4:24am

The following 14 member(s) liked the above post:


..queen.. Goldie

Joined: 26 March 2016
Posts: 1053

Posted: 16 April 2016 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
awww, iloved the name, eeks...okay u need to continue asap
matlab awesome wala awesome tha yaar
upadate soon
..queen.. Goldie

Joined: 26 March 2016
Posts: 1053

Posted: 16 April 2016 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
so need to continue asap yaar
matlab awesome wala awesome tha
oooh I also loved loved the name
jaldi se next update do
17.sonal Goldie

Joined: 13 December 2015
Posts: 1655

Posted: 16 April 2016 at 1:42pm | IP Logged
Very nyc Intro Dear... 
Kunj Sarna The Heartthrob...
I am Feeling its goin to b a Love triangle...hehe..
Anyway... I wud love to c hw u unfold this story.   
Loved it.. 
Continue soon
.Piyali. Goldie

Joined: 20 December 2015
Posts: 1795

Posted: 16 April 2016 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
Brilliant start!
Hayye Kunj!
Thanks for the PM!
Cont. soon!
teddyyy IF-Rockerz

Joined: 13 April 2013
Posts: 8600

Posted: 16 April 2016 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
Awww this is cute, looking forward to next update!
Duumps IF-Rockerz

Joined: 26 July 2012
Posts: 5154

Posted: 16 April 2016 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
This is an awesome intro.
The heartthrob Sarna.
Wow,Loving this,can't wait for you to continue.
kusharberry IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 08 September 2012
Posts: 18737

Posted: 16 April 2016 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
wow amazing start dear
i just loved it
i really kunj will fall for twinkle at first sight itself
plzzz do continue soon
thanks for the pm dearBig smile

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Kunjs breakdown

Author: SiyapaaQueen   Replies: 3   Views: 431

SiyapaaQueen 3 431 07 March 2016 at 7:44pm by -sumaiya-
That shirt scene/Kunjs possible plan theory

Author: SiyapaaQueen   Replies: 3   Views: 742

SiyapaaQueen 3 742 21 January 2016 at 7:19am by lucky_princess
Kunjs sad face..

2 3 4 5

Author: SiyapaaQueen   Replies: 39   Views: 1288

SiyapaaQueen 39 1288 18 January 2016 at 10:13pm by kusharberry

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

  • Please login to check your Last 10 Topics posted

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index