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KRPKAB {Alternate Universe} - Their Priced Misunderstandings (Page 4)

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 3:18am | IP Logged
Awesome one!!! Clap

Thanks a lot for the pm!! Smile

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Posted: 02 May 2016 at 9:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ramya06

Res first!
Par sun le ye res tab tak unres nahi hoga jab tak mera unres nahi hota. TongueWink
Tit for tat! Evil Smile

Unres
Wowie! What an interesting start.
Dev's father's case opened by divisha.
And what did her father do? Better even, what did the father's do. Woah! The flashback looks like a lot of mess. Poor divisha,felt really bad for her. So DevIsha were childhood friends separated by misunderstandings, hmm interesting. And a lot of questions coming up. So do update next part soon bae. I am eagerly waiting.

Love
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Posted: 08 May 2016 at 12:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Desirable_Star

Hey!!!!
SamuHug [this hug is coz i missed u so muchLOL]
Coming to your story...the starting is really very interesting...it surely increases the curosity of knowing their relation and offcourse "Their Misunderstandings" more...
And my name in a storyDay Dreaming...Hug[this hug coz u will say thank u and i will not like it...so huggiee se kaam chala loROFL]...par desai...chalo chadho na...story demand haiLOL...
Superb startingBig smile
Waiting to read more...update soonEmbarrassed
Thanks for pmSmile
lol 
I missed you too re Hug
Haha . Tera name toh lakho mein Ek hai . I mean literally I love the name so much LOL that I stole it Evil Smile
Aree nahi dosti mein no sorry no thank you EmbarrassedLOL
Kya karu aur kohi surname mila nahi ROFL
Will update soon I guess ConfusedBig smile


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Posted: 08 May 2016 at 12:29am | IP Logged
Wow! Sam... This is was awesome! Loved it dear
And I am going to read this definetly!

Nice start... Continue soon
PS- I loved the banner... Pooja is looking stunning!
And I loved the different concept tooHug

Devisha and Dev... A good start!Embarrassed
The case is very interesting...
Nowadays, am loving the lawyers aroundWinkLOL

Love,
MahiHeart


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Posted: 08 May 2016 at 1:45am | IP Logged
nice..
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Posted: 20 May 2016 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Saishree-

Wowww Sam! This is so so soo interesting! And yeah finally u in action! I so missed this!
Yaar one small request...plz sid ko add kar story me! *showing puppy eyes* dekh tuni bhi hai nah! Plz plz plz plz...infinite Plz...plz yeh chotti si icchha purn kar plz...
Eager to know this mystery now!
Update soon!
thank you . Haha . Will think about it Wink 
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Posted: 20 May 2016 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sonatia

Res ! Its not my lazyness. ~_~
un
where to start? Umm yes u took a lot of time to post it. I am late but not more than u are.
Hmm banner is very colourful and looking beautiful and i love ur introduction to. Magenta is looking perfect with black.
Well i know u will kill me if i end my comment here. ROFL afterall i ate ur head so much.
So coming to the story. It was awesome re. Tere hath,payr and dimag me jaadu hai. Itni awesome idea ati kahanse hai re ?
I love the starting..it was very admirable.
*Dev took off his coat went to washroom to freshen himself*
i can totally imagine my handsome aary pata hai when he comes from office and takes off his coat he looks so yummy.
And that convo in that phone call was very interesting. What have his father done re?
And that part where my arya asks who opened that case mr bhat answers it is a young lawyer. It was funny how he reacts "i don't care if she is young or old." *arrogant boss* hmm B-)
and while having this convo when he undid his shirt buttons, i was shipping :-P *my bedsome arya*
see, i notice each and everything. :-D
and that flashback it was so interesting and touching as well. Btw is it the same girl who is reopening the case?

i was literraly angry when the man pushed her to the ground. And what happened to her dad and why her face was guilty? And that part where *she kept looking at him telling him to forgive and belive her* and arya was fighting between his heart and mind. It was so beautifully written. But it was so sad how the girl was crying.
And then that ishwari. :-| ugh! She is such a vampire in the show. :-|
but the last sentence
"its her opening the case"
i guess, the flashback wali girl hired a lawyer. And it is divisha. i guess she wants to prove that her father was not a criminal..it was awesome start of a story re. U rock !
Update soon. Want more And can't wait. When will u update? Don't make us wait long.

Tu mujhe description ka Sunna Rahi ho ! ROFL Obviously agar tu short comment degi then I will start giving short updates . LOL Tit for tat ! LOL
Yes of course . My head is a tasty dish . I will drink your blood then LOL
Awesome idea ? Don even talk about it . I have 101 plots to bring Pooja into KRPKAB . LOL I create a new one daily . Wink
Hmm bahut his zyaada pata hai tunne arya k bareme LOL 
That's a secret on wha happened na Wink
Yes the same girl who is opening the case , the lead female . 
Lol I love Ishwari . She will keep Dev away from Sonakshi in the show . For we ShaJa-nians she is like the green chilly you know . Who keeps black magic and chudail away LOL sab guess karlia hai tu ne ? 
Love 
Sam 
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Posted: 20 May 2016 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Abhisheking

Hi Hello Namskar Pranam Aadab... LOL

Of course..naam is very popular...bahuto en suna hoga.Wink

The banner looks beautiful ...Heart

Coming to the story, awesome beginning...Perfect blend of emotions... Flow of scenes was handled nicely. Thumbs Up

Overall, Awesome! Cool

Didn't know that you write lol...LOL

Gritted his teeth? Please fetch him a dentist. Stern Smile He is so hot, so will be his teeth - they'll melt lol. ROFL

Kar ke dekha - bohot sochna parta hai! Geek ROFL


pranipraat Embarrassed
Haha name is that popular . LOL
Yeah banner is gorgeous . Maine nahi banana hai ROFL
Thank you . 
Lol . I don do graphics so I should be a writer na LOL otherwise time pass thodi na kar Rahi hu yaha pe LOL
Hot . Maybe 
Itna mat Socho . Bad for health 
Sam 

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